KayBlueEyes In reply to shalee-chan [2012-07-21 02:46:48 +0000 UTC]

Aw Thank you!

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shalee-chan In reply to KayBlueEyes [2012-07-22 15:22:46 +0000 UTC]

No probs

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KayBlueEyes In reply to kayanah [2012-07-21 02:47:00 +0000 UTC]

Thanks so much!

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KayBlueEyes In reply to SilverLady7 [2012-05-19 17:43:35 +0000 UTC]

Oh hey dont worry about it. Everyone has to talk about their problems every once in awhile. I didn't mind. And thank you for still believing in unseen Genius. I still think I would have to do some more work on it until it would even be close to being ready to publish. And I miss teh UG fanclub too. it was just so much fun.

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SilverLady7 In reply to KayBlueEyes [2012-05-19 19:11:06 +0000 UTC]

I don´t think it needs so much work. The only thing that I really thought that
was... well, could be better working is to explain who was with Aria that night when Brielle and her brother went to the opera. They simply left her sleeping by herself? And who was driving the horses of Brielle´s carriage?

And there´s also, in the end, the fact that, if Meg had so many children, she had to give up on her career as a ballerina, which I think it doesn´t look like her.

But, besides that, I don´t think there´s much work to do.

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KayBlueEyes In reply to SilverLady7 [2012-06-19 14:14:46 +0000 UTC]

Whoops. I didn't read this comment until just now. Somehow I missed it. You made some very good points. A couple of those I should clear up while I am doing the other revisions. And thank you for thinking the story is pretty good already! You are great!

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SilverLady7 In reply to KayBlueEyes [2012-07-01 17:54:17 +0000 UTC]

Hi,

sorry the delayed response, but I´ve been quite busy.

Another points I´d like to observe is that you never should have rewrote the beginning of UG - Brielle thinking of her home errands and wrong she did then was unnecessary, since it was more interesting to see them through Erik´s point of view, as long as he learned more about her family. And... well, you know I always preferred when she really broke that plate on the wall, when Erik tossed the porridge over her.

It would have been interesting to give some clues of how Erik found himself in that basement before Brielle met him, because of the extra mask he kept in his shirt (since Meg found one in the end of the movie) - and why his clothes were in tatters, since in the movie they were just a little damp when he left.

But aside that, there´s not much to be redone. And you know that I´m not the only one who thinks your work deserves to be published. C´mon, there are tons of low-quality works turned into books that swamp the bookshops nowadays! Your text is better than Susan Kay´s (she wrote the story of the Phantom´s childhood and events before he met Christine), which seemed shallow in many points.

Changing the subject, I just opened a new account for my original work, leaving this one for the fandom. I thought you could like to meet my other indentity: [link]

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KayBlueEyes In reply to Erins-Lament [2012-03-03 01:25:11 +0000 UTC]

Thanks for the vote of confidence! You are too nice. Too be honest I wouldn't know the first thing about being published. But the thought has crossed my mind.

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Erins-Lament In reply to KayBlueEyes [2012-03-03 01:56:27 +0000 UTC]

Ah, yes, but my friend that is what google is for! You should SERIOUSLY look into getting Unseen Genius published. It is just that good!

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KayBlueEyes In reply to Erins-Lament [2012-03-04 19:58:46 +0000 UTC]

Lol. Thank you. It is people like you that make me seriously consider trying to publish it. otherwise there is no way i would have the confidence. Thank you again for all of the really nice things you have said.

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Erins-Lament In reply to KayBlueEyes [2012-03-06 21:52:51 +0000 UTC]

Your welcome.
And I REALLY hope you do publish it someday!

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KayBlueEyes In reply to flanny-chan [2012-01-14 06:05:07 +0000 UTC]

Hey thanks! Glad you like it. I hope you continued to enjoy it as you read on. Thanks for taking the time to let me know your thoughts!

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flanny-chan In reply to KayBlueEyes [2012-01-14 15:50:19 +0000 UTC]

No prob! (chap. 14 now)

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KayBlueEyes In reply to filipissima [2011-09-07 00:01:30 +0000 UTC]

lol thanks! right back at you.

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filipissima In reply to KayBlueEyes [2011-09-07 12:24:48 +0000 UTC]

Aww thanks. :3

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KayBlueEyes In reply to Staarre [2011-09-07 00:02:25 +0000 UTC]

thank you so much! im glad you enjoyed it! thanks for taking the time to tell me what you thought. made my day! thanks.

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KayBlueEyes In reply to kayanah [2011-07-20 10:13:57 +0000 UTC]

hey thanks!! That is nice of you to say!

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KayBlueEyes In reply to filipissima [2011-07-20 10:14:11 +0000 UTC]

Thank you! It was a good one.

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filipissima In reply to KayBlueEyes [2011-07-20 14:57:28 +0000 UTC]

I'm glad.

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KayBlueEyes In reply to The-Winged-Warden [2011-07-20 10:14:18 +0000 UTC]

Aw thanks!!

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The-Winged-Warden In reply to KayBlueEyes [2011-07-20 23:17:17 +0000 UTC]

Your welcome.

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KayBlueEyes In reply to shalee-chan [2011-07-20 10:14:37 +0000 UTC]

Thanks! You are so sweet for saying so.

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KayBlueEyes In reply to ObviouslyOblivious [2011-07-18 14:49:03 +0000 UTC]

Aw thanks!! You are so nice. Thank you for even taking the time to wish me birthday wishes. How is your fic going by the way?

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ObviouslyOblivious In reply to KayBlueEyes [2011-09-03 22:51:21 +0000 UTC]

You're welcome! How was it? Do anything special?

I just moved into my dorm today. I haven't had ANY time whatsoever to work on my phic. Between 3 jobs and family stuff this Summer, it's just been a mess. But as soon as I can get back to work on it, you'll be the first so know!

-hugs Erik- I'm so home sick!

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KayBlueEyes In reply to ObviouslyOblivious [2011-09-06 17:19:59 +0000 UTC]

I had a party later on in the month. And I had dinner with family on the day so it was nice.

But hey it is exciting that you moved into your dorm. I had a lot of fun in my dorm so i am sure you will too. Enjoy it while it lasts. Even the annoying things will make good memories later on. lol. The homesickness won't last forever by the way. soon you will be super busy with classes and new friends. ^_^

And yeah real life often comes before writing for fun. If you do ever have time to finish some of it let me know. Good luck with everything!!

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ObviouslyOblivious In reply to KayBlueEyes [2011-09-06 19:40:36 +0000 UTC]

Thank you, darlin'! I shall follow this advice as closely as I do with all the writing tips you have given me in the past!

My roommate, as I've already noticed, is a bit more social than me, and goes out far more often with others. In addition, she goes to bed before me. I think I may use those moments to work on my Phic and Ryan's development as a character. And forming Erik's new story, of course!

Erik: I hope more often than that. I reside in the extra closet in her dorm, and there isn't much air, even for a living corpse....and I sweat terribly. Then again, there are so many people here! Especially women! Everywhere! I do not enjoy the harmony of screams that will definitely erupt, should I be found.

-snicker, snicker-

Erik: What NOW?!


.....so, you're not sure about coming out of the closet?

Erik: -eye twitch- Are you sure you want to mock a man who is familiar with forming a Punjab lasso?

Okay-okay! Sorry; I didn't think over what I was typing before I did. Sorry.

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KayBlueEyes In reply to ObviouslyOblivious [2011-09-09 10:30:01 +0000 UTC]

lol. coming out of the closet. I nearly died when I read that. so funny. And just so long as you and your room mate don't kill each other everything is fine. You two are bound to be different and there isn't a law saying you have to be best friends... You just have to get along enough to live in the same area. You will meet plenty of other people too. So there will be plenty of opportunity of making friends elsewhere if you find you and your room mate are too different. Good luck!

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ObviouslyOblivious In reply to KayBlueEyes [2011-09-12 21:45:54 +0000 UTC]

-grabs Erik- But my roommate and I are OMGBESTIESFORLIFE!!!

Erik: -eye twitch- I'm transferring.

Nah, I know what you mean. I think I'm slowly adjusting whether I like it or not. I'm trying to throw myself--

Erik: -hopefully- --out the window?!

-kicks- --OUT there to make some new friends. -annoyed- But, yeah. And I think my roommate and I are adjusting to each other as well.

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KayBlueEyes In reply to ObviouslyOblivious [2011-09-14 07:51:05 +0000 UTC]

Thats all you really can do. And things usually work out for the best that way. Enjoy it all. Even the annoying things will make fun memories.

For example my room mate on our first sat at school set her alarm for 7am and then continuously hit snooze for over an hour. Finally i asked when she had to get up and go somewhere and she said she had nowhere to go... she just liked snoozing. I ripped her alarm out of the wall the next time it went off...lol. (Keep in mind I knew her before we were room mates otherwise that would not have been an appropriate response.) But now that is a funny story... at the time not so funny.

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ObviouslyOblivious In reply to KayBlueEyes [2011-09-15 03:53:48 +0000 UTC]

Yeah...I think she's throw me out the window....and then the bad stuff would start happening....

Erik: What would YOU know about bad.

Well...I know your favorite compliment is being called, "Don Juan". -clueless-

Erik: -hates that insult with a flaming passion-

Ryan: And you love your nickname, Ricky!
-equally clueless-

Erik:

-pats Ryan on back- Yup! We know him like the back of our toothbrushes!

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KayBlueEyes In reply to Mylene2511 [2011-05-17 12:51:00 +0000 UTC]

You're welcome!! Thanks for the favs!!

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