KnaveofSpades In reply to CopperBard [2009-08-26 22:58:05 +0000 UTC]

The rhyme is great! I really like the first 4 lines. kinda a cool idea, there. the last two lines are kinda awkward. i know you broke the rhyme scheme on purpose, but it makes the ending harder to read. idk.

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CopperBard In reply to KnaveofSpades [2009-08-27 00:20:39 +0000 UTC]

I just tried to link the last line to the rhyme in the second and fourth lines, but reader knows best. If you think that it's awkward then it's awkward. Thanks for the feedback

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KnaveofSpades In reply to Avalon928810 [2009-03-23 04:22:23 +0000 UTC]

that was an awesome poem. i've actually been considering writing something almost exactly like that, except about love, not a summer camp.
and cool comment signature thing. hahaha

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Avalon928810 In reply to KnaveofSpades [2009-03-23 04:30:47 +0000 UTC]

Thanks.
Summer camp's cool though.
It's all summer like.
Your gallery's pretty impressive though,
You shouldn't bring yourself down to my level.

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KnaveofSpades In reply to Avalon928810 [2009-03-23 23:11:55 +0000 UTC]

Thanks! your stuff is good too though.

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KnaveofSpades In reply to HannahKane [2008-11-10 01:02:18 +0000 UTC]

you know, i'm not really sure. hm. you press the little "watch this deviant" doohickey up in the right corner to watch me, but idk if that's the same as friend? w/e. anyway, hope you like el poetryo. i gots lots. including that haiku you laughed at

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HannahKane In reply to KnaveofSpades [2008-11-19 22:19:40 +0000 UTC]

haha
don't worry, i like them :]

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KnaveofSpades In reply to HannahKane [2008-11-23 03:05:04 +0000 UTC]

finally figured it out. friends are just people you watch, then click the little 'friend' column next to their name in the list of people you watch.

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