Lazysupermutant In reply to Undeniable-beliefs [2012-06-30 06:13:42 +0000 UTC]

Love it, just a few things to keep in mind. one, Rocky is almost 60 about four year so while he's not brittle he's fairly greying in the main mostly,and his scar is a bit to small and pretty, Rocky's scar is a mangled patch of torn up skin over his right eye that leaves him blind in that eye and he got over 19 years ago, it's something that you don't want to look at, but catch you're self staring at never the less. Zigie is good just don't forget he almost never takes his bandana off and that he wears it so it covers his mouth and nose. I kind of feel harsh critisizing an eairly sketch, seems harsh to critisize somthing that isn't done yet, all that said you have no idea how much it makes me smile to see my work put to comic form.

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Undeniable-beliefs In reply to Lazysupermutant [2012-06-30 06:25:12 +0000 UTC]

Thanks for telling me! I want to keep the characters as close to their original design as possible, so this really helps I'll make sure to write a note reminding myself of what you just told me!

I don't mind criticism, so long as it's constructive as yours is! Actually I don't consider it criticism as much as I consider it a correction

I'm glad I was able to make you smile!

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Lazysupermutant In reply to Undeniable-beliefs [2012-06-30 07:27:35 +0000 UTC]

That's a load off my mind thanks. actually a bit after I send you the message it made me think that I should describe Rocky's and Zigie's personality's and how they interact with the town, ever since writting missions i've been able to envision them better, so here it goes!
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Rocky: Rocky has a vary kind personality in his old age, he has a good amount of patience (in no part due to Zigie.) and is rare to get mad, he's vary remorseful for what he's done but dosen't brood, he got that out of way 18 years ago, that said he's vary reluctant to talk about his criminal past. now he tries his best to help anyone and everyone. But that's not to say he still can't fight if he has to, in fact he's still quite good at it, but most importantly is his love for his long friend Zigie, he feels he has a duty to be Zigie's moral compass when he can so he can avoid what Rocky himself had gone through at his age.

The guilds have an complicated relationships with Rocky, the older members of the Rouges know who used to be and more importantly what group he used to be with and are intemidated by him, some of the younger Rouges being afraid of him, all except for Devonshire and Gunpowder, Gunpowder in particular has a burning hatred for Rocky knowing more then anyone about him in Tao, saying "it don't matter what new coat of paint ye give a ship, the red still there." While Devonshire is just indiffrent, not really caring about it one way or the other.

The merchants arn't much better for Rocky, Sir Shroomish while not flat out hating Rocky he has just as much contemp due to all the merchant caravans he used to ambush, but he's willing to forgive and forget. But a certian Kecleon isn't so forgiving and has nothing nice to say about him,and so most merchants hate Rocky but usally are polit enough to keep it so themselvs.

Even the rescuers have mixed opinions about him, while a good chunk of rescuers can see the effort Rocky puts forth there's also a chunk that see Rocky as someone who just joined up to save himself from the merchants (Not helped by Zigie.)and see him as more of a goon then a rescuer. oddly enough Mike has a good opinion of Rocky, understanding Rocky wants to do good for what he's done even if he dosen't know a whole lot of what he did.

The only friend he's made since joining the rescuers is Lady Merlot, she takes a deep interest in Rocky and his past and finds him good company.


Zigie: Zigie is the polar opposite of Rocky, he's vary impusive and says and does things that he dosen't think enough about. He's also vary anti social and tempermental, he usealy let's Rocky do the talking and when he does it often his a fire behind it, this in turn leaves most pokes are turned off to Zigie, though when there not and try to be nice to him he has no idea what to do, being vary hesitent on how to deal with it.

obviously he dose not many friends, he has an odd semi frindship with Maple which he still dosen't understand. His only real friendship is with Rocky, he's vary close to Rocky who took him in as his partner at a young age and what he considers his true friend, any nagative comments twords Rocky tends to make Zigie lash out violently (But Rocky is there most times to prevent anyone getting hurt.)

It is ironic that Zigie of all people knows the least about what Rocky used to do, only knowing from what he saw in there five years of ambushing merchants, the rest is a mystery to him, yet oddly enough he's never asked Rocky about it, seeming to atleast understand he dosen't like to talk about it.

Most of the guild leader's don't pay him much attention, seeing him as more of a annoyence then an actual threat to anyone.

Lastly Zigie is fierce in combat, displaying a striking amount of raw anger and brutality.
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Sorry if this is way to much, I have a habbit of writing alot, again i'm just glad you're angry, I worry about that.

P.S I am so glad I copied this before the sight went down for updates.

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Undeniable-beliefs In reply to Lazysupermutant [2012-06-30 07:42:36 +0000 UTC]

Thanks for the insight! Getting to know your team's backstory will definitely help me out in the long run

It's interesting that for a former criminal, Rocky is kind-hearted. That's something most people don't expect, so congrats on including that twist!

And I don't mind how long it is! It's full of useful information that I can incorporate into my story so thank you!

Ah, geez...the site went down? Maybe that's why I wasn't able to post my comments, haha

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Lazysupermutant In reply to Undeniable-beliefs [2012-06-30 07:55:37 +0000 UTC]

Thanks for the compliment, can't wait to see the finished product!

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Lazysupermutant In reply to silverfox1989 [2011-08-12 23:09:39 +0000 UTC]

Thank's for answering back, it's a shock. So...you know anyone intrested in my story, sorry for bringing it up again.

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silverfox1989 In reply to Lazysupermutant [2011-08-12 23:51:29 +0000 UTC]

not at the moment i'd have to look through my watchers

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