MichaelJames20 In reply to OverLooker [2015-10-27 01:03:58 +0000 UTC]

No problem, I enjoyed it as usual.

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OverLooker In reply to MichaelJames20 [2015-10-27 10:38:56 +0000 UTC]

I am happy to hear that thanks for your feedback.

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MichaelJames20 In reply to OverLooker [2015-08-06 04:13:18 +0000 UTC]

It was a great tale.  I wonder how the father plays in with this women.

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OverLooker In reply to MichaelJames20 [2015-08-06 20:34:08 +0000 UTC]

Thats a good question.
How do you think he will/would react to finding his new wife like this with his children?

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MichaelJames20 In reply to OverLooker [2015-08-11 22:14:26 +0000 UTC]

Sorry about the delay,  I had to think on this.
Here are two ideas I came up with:
1:  He may be a slave to her and may even be bound in the basement right now.
2:  He is her master and she is a switch.
3:  Or for all we know he is the one who got his son into BDSM.
Not sure of any other details,  these are just rough ideas.

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OverLooker In reply to MichaelJames20 [2015-08-12 00:43:21 +0000 UTC]

Good ideas if I ever continue perhaps your ideas will come in handy

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MichaelJames20 In reply to OverLooker [2015-08-12 03:08:50 +0000 UTC]

No problem glad to help.

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MichaelJames20 In reply to OverLooker [2015-04-25 02:56:13 +0000 UTC]

I feel the best part was the plot twists.  I mean I really thought the hotel manager, Aunt Betty, was going to get three girls but then to find out that Lauren was in on this the whole time.  Simply great.

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OverLooker In reply to MichaelJames20 [2015-04-26 14:38:35 +0000 UTC]

Thank you I thought the twist was what made it different from most stories like this.

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MichaelJames20 In reply to OverLooker [2015-04-07 02:21:53 +0000 UTC]

Sorry about that,  I am looking forward to any latter installments, as this sounds like it could be an interesting story.

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OverLooker In reply to MichaelJames20 [2015-04-07 13:05:45 +0000 UTC]

I am always looking for new ideas so please feel free to voice your opinions and thought about my works and what you would like to see in the future.

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MichaelJames20 In reply to coutoo [2015-03-22 20:50:04 +0000 UTC]

Not a problem I really liked the stories.

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MichaelJames20 In reply to OverLooker [2014-12-13 04:24:36 +0000 UTC]

That I did.  Just a fast question will there be another part,  will the boys' mother find them and then have her way or will they trick the triplets?

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OverLooker In reply to MichaelJames20 [2014-12-13 17:23:50 +0000 UTC]

I have not decided if you have any ideas PM me in a note and give detail and ill work around it

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MichaelJames20 In reply to OverLooker [2014-12-17 23:22:15 +0000 UTC]

Sorry it took me a while to get back to you but I have had a hard time thinking about this.  You see I am not much of a writer, but I am a reader.  That said here are some thoughts I have:
1:  The triplets decide that they want to find out if older boys are ticklish,  this goes one until the boys pass out or can't stand it any longer and bag for mercy.  Then the triplets decide that they want to try out things on their own in private maybe.  This leads to their captives being moved to different rooms.  Maybe they move the Jordan to their mom's room, and his brother Chris up to their room.  They then devise a rotation so each brother can have fun, with the odd twin out serving as look out for their mother.  This works well until the boys get hungry.  They decide to make themselves dinner and watch a movie in the basement well their captives are left bound spread eagled, gagged, and blind folded on the beds.  The movie the triplets are watching is boring and they are soon out cold sleeping.  It is after this point that their mother comes home.  She sees the mess and is starting to get mad and wonders were the babysitter is.  As she is about to got to the boys room to look for them she hears a noise coming from her room.  She looks in to see Jordan bound on her bed (in his underwear, or hers, or naked your choice).  She decides to find out what happened and goes to the bed and removes the blindfold.  Jordan instantly turns red from embarasment but at the same time is struggling to hold back the urge done below.  Mrs. Lepkin pretends to ignore it and instead place the blindfold back on Jordan and find your boys to ask what happened.  At this point she can either go downstairs or upstairs.  If she goes down she wakes up her boys, scolds them and sends them to their room and promises to deal with them latter not knowing Chris is up there.  The night will then be Mrs. Lepkin and the boys playing with their captives.  If she goes upstairs and finds Chris she decides to bring him to her room as well.  Then she goes downstairs find the boys tells them that they have be very naughty and that she had to pay the babysitter extra thanks to them. And that the money would come out of their allowance, and sends them to bed or punishes them by taking to their Grandparents for the weekend. (These are old school grandparents, no TV, no Internet and no cell phones)  the triplets don't like visiting them at all.  Once the triplets are gone Mrs. Lepkin has her way with the boys for the weekend.   
Any other ideas or changes would be up to you.  As you write good stories already.

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MichaelJames20 In reply to boundbymywords [2014-02-26 22:40:27 +0000 UTC]

No problem you have some great pieces.

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MichaelJames20 In reply to XYZExtreme13 [2013-05-01 02:16:44 +0000 UTC]

No Problem you have some great stories.

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MichaelJames20 In reply to XYZExtreme13 [2012-11-19 20:08:25 +0000 UTC]

no problem

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