Pandazulado In reply to IICloudChaserII [2015-07-05 17:03:37 +0000 UTC]

You're welcome, but you don't need to thank me for it. I really like your comic. I can see the dedication you put in any detail. Also, it seems that you are an accessible person who gives response when your readers talk to you. I appreciate that. I have never read a comic or a manga apart from the Avatar ones. So, don't take my opinion really serious. I'm just an Avatar fan.
Don't get me wrong, I believe that Tao is a great character but her personality was a bit exaggerated. In addition, never before an avatar sibling was known, this makes her important jajaa.
Your comic catched me from the first instant that I started to read it. I wanted to know what would happen moment by moment. It happened really fast to me because it is good. I am anxious to see how Naoki will master the four elements. The fact that he is a teenager, natural earth bender, and he thinks he is a non-bender is amazing. I can feel that he has an special connection with the nature too, pretty rare.
I'm not sure but I have read that Zhu can fly, isnt it? Up to now I am not convinced if I like the idea of an earth bender avatar who has a flying tiger as a pet. Due to the fact that air is his natural oposite. It would be more accurate if Zhu instead of flying itself would be able to plan short distances or jump long ones.
One thing that I forgot to tell you is to don't be afraid of the copy right. I mean, you can mention or even draw some characters. It would be great if Korra appeared in front of Naoki at least once or if she gave him an Avatar advice, as Roku and Aang did it.

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IICloudChaserII In reply to Pandazulado [2015-07-07 16:03:13 +0000 UTC]

Hallo Panda,

sorry I was a little bit busy and in germany it`s sooooooooo unnaturel hot that i am very, very lazy and just hang out .
I began to draw the second chapter but it will be a while before i can submit a few pages.
It`s amazing that you read my comic with so much attention!  
I thought about what you say over Zhu and the flying. I like your opinion and your points are totally right but for the following story it`s
neccessary that Zhu can fly.
It`s one thing i can`t easily change.
I am glad that you like the details.
Once i send a friend here on DA a few of the first pages and he said that he did`t notice much of the BG so i was about to give up.
But you are the second person who is mention the BG so i will try to kepp it up. 

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