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Pollysalem ♀️ [20984330] [2012-02-18 07:30:27 +0000 UTC] (Ireland)

# Statistics

Favourites: 16; Deviations: 5; Watchers: 4

Watching: 12; Pageviews: 1790; Comments Made: 63; Friends: 12

# Interests

Favorite visual artist: I see something in everything.
Favorite movies: One's that leave you thinking.
Favorite bands / musical artists: Jazz perhaps
Favorite books: One's I would go back to.
Favorite writers: One's whose words melt on your tongue.
Favorite games: I dont play,games,that is.
Tools of the Trade: My thoughts,perhaps
Other Interests: Still searching.

# About me

I share my very disorganised life with one somewhat enduring son, two extremely troublesome hounds and a couple of neglected goldfish.I work in the field of education and still to this day make unforgivable spelling mistakes so I apologise in advance,I did warn you. I wrote Dressing her Infidelity on a whim... and I enjoyed doing it. I may write her some more.I enjoy photography, although I can't take a decent shot of anything, but I try, I also doodle a bit with crayons... literally.Thank you for reading my page,and hopefully some of my efforts at story telling.Please comment, even if it's to tell me to keep to my day job or join a knitting group..I'm a big girl, I can take it.

# Comments

Comments: 17

Moon-Crafter [2013-04-13 03:41:49 +0000 UTC]

Thanx for visitin'

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Ambiguous-Catharsis [2013-01-21 14:23:26 +0000 UTC]

Thanks for the watch!

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elohcin111 [2013-01-17 20:26:22 +0000 UTC]

Welcome to Hug Hug Hug Hug Hug If you have any questions, don't be afraid to ask myself, the co-founder, or refer to the group page.

-elohcin111 (Founder of Writers4Life)

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Pollysalem In reply to elohcin111 [2013-01-17 22:45:51 +0000 UTC]

Thank you!

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Pollysalem [2013-01-09 01:09:08 +0000 UTC]

As I have already stated previously, the piece is powerful and worded beautifully. The strong title is perfect and a lovely unusual combination that grasps attention. You have portrayed the woman as seductress and betrayer of trust stunningly and what I take to be her husband/partner's pain, vividly. What works really well is his inability to be anything but captivated by her beauty and seductive desirability. He is literally frozen between his pain in her probable deceit and his love, lust and desire for the beautiful female whom he watches dressing for seduction. It needs development so that it becomes a wonderful short story. Keep your thoughts tight and clear and use the minimum words necessary to fill out the telling of whatever you choose the story to become. Very impressive start though, you are a natural writer and story teller
A critique i deleated by mistake.Thank you Liam

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dlapastel [2013-01-07 18:10:45 +0000 UTC]