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[2013-03-15 03:44:54 +0000 UTC]
"Lemon Squares"
(United States)
# Statistics
Favourites: 61; Deviations: 4; Watchers: 22
Watching: 5; Pageviews: 6298; Comments Made: 267; Friends: 5
# About me
I write fanfictionI'm not sorry
# Comments
Comments: 61
You're welcome vuv
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*v* <--- I just made a Gilbird face! LOL
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<3 You're welcome
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i did my first fanfic please tell me what do you think thank chuuu~
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late reply is late, I saw it today and then got dragged to the swimming pool haha//
It was really cute! I love fluffy stories vuv <3
As for critique you have a lot of potential, that's for sure!
Just make sure you watch for grammar (Run-on sentences, word usage, etc.)
My advice for this is to read, re-read and then re-read it again to make sure everything makes sense. You'll catch things that you didn't detect when typing!
All and all, a good start!
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im not english anyway XD it have's to have errors XD and thank you have a as a present
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Oh! That means a whole lot then XD It's very understandable then if English isn't your mother-language.
vuv I'll give you a sexy Prussia~
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XD vhy thank you now i have two sexy prussia XD
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You're very welcome!
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thenks you for the awsoooome lama it was my first one ;u; heres a llama love <3
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/)3(\ awww thank you hun'
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your welcome love ^3<
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v//u//v~ I appreciate the love (obviously so does gilbert) have another "Sexy Prussia" gif to go <3
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uh...it's...a....start...? ;u;
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three years i have been on DA. three....
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no. its because im lazy :/
because lazy American lady is lazy.
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Aw you're welcome vuv <3
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oh yooooooooooooou
You are too jeez.
IN OTHER NEWS:
How was your day today~
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Shhh no romano shhhh
Just dealing with tests y'know. End-of-the-year stuff until it's summer -u-/
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-my nickname is romano lol-
yeah. i hear that. im a freshman, and all these projects and reports just AH! like right now!i am being forced to do a stupid romeo and juliet video project and doing an argumentative essay at the time! same class! just ack! i hate highschool!
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;u; We never got to do the video project when I was a freshman. We had to preform the play while other classes did a video project. And oh gosh I hear the ESSAYS. I'm currently in an Advanced Placement English course and lemme tell ya that I think I've wrote every essay possible thanks to this class.
It doesn't get much better but hang in there ;;7;;////
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