Rarity773 In reply to CaribbeanRose9 [2019-10-11 17:25:39 +0000 UTC]

You're welcome!

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CaribbeanRose9 In reply to Rarity773 [2019-10-12 20:43:07 +0000 UTC]

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Rarity773 In reply to NTSEFAN [2016-04-10 02:34:34 +0000 UTC]

You're welcome! I'm using the info provided to help with my proxy OC.

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NTSEFAN In reply to Rarity773 [2016-04-10 09:03:56 +0000 UTC]

Hope it helps you.

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Rarity773 In reply to NTSEFAN [2016-04-10 14:58:51 +0000 UTC]

Thanks!

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NTSEFAN In reply to Rarity773 [2016-04-10 15:46:36 +0000 UTC]

You're welcome!

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Rarity773 In reply to NTSEFAN [2016-08-05 04:41:21 +0000 UTC]

So, I made the beginning of a Proxy story. Now, it doesn't exactly line up with your headcannon, but it's more or less me doing my own thing with the proxy concept.

I'm don't want to try and shove my story onto you, so I'm going to ask you first. Do you want to see what I have so far on my proxy story?

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NTSEFAN In reply to Rarity773 [2016-08-05 05:19:36 +0000 UTC]

Sure, I would like to see it.

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Rarity773 In reply to NTSEFAN [2016-08-05 07:27:26 +0000 UTC]

Okay


"Sis? Hannah? You here?..” I walked around, looking for my little sister Hannah . I didn’t hear her. Soon, a piercing scream rippled through the woods I was in. I ran farther into the woods, startled by the noise. That was when I saw him. As soon as I saw the tall, faceless, slender figure, I felt sickness come over me. I got a migraine, my body was aching from head to toe, and I started coughing up blood.

I woke up in my bedroom. I walked to the kitchen, sitting at the table. I took the knife in my hand and held it up. Wait, what am I doing? I put the knife down back by the plate.

“ Honey, is something wrong?” Mom said.

“ N-Nothing..” My mom probably thought I was crazy. Mom just sighed.

“ Well, I’m starting breakfast. You can go in the living room and watch TV if you want..” I could tell by mom’s tone of voice that she was probably still taken aback by my knife clutching. Nevertheless, I walked into the living room and started watching what was on.

I couldn't stop thinking about what happened. The dream, the knife clutching, what was going wrong with me? My mind went to the worst conclusions. I mentally scolded myself from coming to these conclusions, but I couldn’t stop myself. I sighed, focusing on watching the TV.



So, that's what I have. What do you think? Any ways I could improve on what I have so far?

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NTSEFAN In reply to Rarity773 [2016-08-05 20:12:32 +0000 UTC]

That's pretty good. I see nothing wrong with it.   

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