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Rorshak000
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[2005-07-23 00:08:40 +0000 UTC]
"Unknown"
(United States)
# Statistics
Favourites: 22; Deviations: 34; Watchers: 6
Watching: 9; Pageviews: 5189; Comments Made: 155; Friends: 9
# Interests
Favorite visual artist: Not sure.Favorite movies: I like Horror, Art and Avant Garde Movies
Favorite bands / musical artists: I have a lot.
Favorite writers: Not sure.
Favorite gaming platform: Don't play video games anymore.
Tools of the Trade: My keyboard, Photoshop CS2 , pens, pencils etc.
# About me
Current Residence: IowaFavourite genre of music: Underground Rap
Operating System: Windows
Favourite cartoon character: Rorschach
Personal Quote: Psalms 137:9-Happy shall he be, that taketh and dasheth thy little ones against the stones.
# Comments
Comments: 21
Interesting stuff you've got here. Very bloody n' angsty. The Divine Abortion pic was intriguing.
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~Rorshak000
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is a Shock Writer
is Male
is a deviant since Jul 22, 2005, 5:08 PM
has 665 pageviews
is located in United States
last visited 1h 35m 21s ago
is currently
is an AIM user; Nytevipa
is an MSN Messenger user; niteviper000@hotmail.com
it wont work
but ur one of 666
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hey
great gallery!!
would you work with one of my stock pictures?
that would be so cool!
kisses from austria, anja
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first off, congrats on getting #1 for horrocore on Audiostreet.
as for a collab in the future, heh, that'd be cool. don't really have anything much written at the moment, no real beats on hand, haven't had too much time to focus on writing, but yea, if you have any collab ideas I'm all ears.
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~Rorshak000
Unknown
is a Shock Writer
is Male
is a deviant since Jul 22, 2005, 7:08 PM
has 300 pageviews
is located in United States
is idle
is currently
is an AIM user; Nytevipa
is an MSN Messenger user; niteviper000@hotmail.com
Congrats!
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First off, drastic improvement in flow. Whereas in your earlier songs the lines seemed rushed, your current flow seems to have evened out a bit to match the beat and you're starting to take your time delivering the lines.
Your rhyme scheme still seems a bit iffy. Sounds like you're rhyming only the end of your lines. Rather than rhyming the end of each line, I personally prefer to throw some rhymes in the middle of the lines. For example in my Ethos freeverse, lines 5 and 6: "I'll place you in check, man you're facing a vet/ You're breaking down while I'm barely breaking a sweat/"
Rather than just limiting it to "facing a vet" and "breaking a sweat", I threw in "place you in check." I find that doing this allows me to set up longer than usual lines without losing flow or rhyme. It basically gives me more freedom to work with.
Someone I would recommend checking out in terms of story-telling type flow, you might have to sift through some of his random crap though:
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Check out his songs House Of Horrors, The Epic, The Torcher, The Torcher II, Clockworker Revolution
2060 had a pretty fast beat that you managed to flow to pretty well so props on that.
I see you've strayed away from the usual horrorcore type material. That's cool, shows that you aren't limited in terms of what you can rap about.
Your story telling is definitely the strong point of your style (certainly better than mine at least). Punchlines and the like aren't a necessity, but they would add a pleasant surprise.
That's a computer mic that your using? Damn, that's pretty decent quality.
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the kick and snare pattern for your ice pick beat is a bit awkward. could just be me, but I found it kinda hard to flow over.
as for your audio, the dubbing and effects you used on your vocals are cool. but your flow needs a lot of improvement. from what i heard you kept on rushing lines to match the beat or somewhat overlapped a few of the snares.
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People are creepy. That's why we should volunteers to control the human population. You know, community service. Chlorinate the gene pool and such.
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yes, i have read many of ur deviations now, and i think u are a very angry person, but ur work is very deep and emotional...
ur a talented writter, but darker emotions always make someone a better writter in my oppinion...
take care
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Thankyou so much for the kind words and the 
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thanks for the comment man, I have another previous 10 Bag Of Finger Nail poem-groups if you're interested
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my god you're an angry person huh? must be coz you live in the midwest... I'd probably be pretty fucking bitter if I had to live in the midwest....
anyways thanks a bunch for the comment on my thingamajig.... just thought I'd say heyya. and all that social crap...
in a while crocodile
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Meh. I just got few screws loose ya know? Heheheh
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