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[2011-02-28 02:44:25 +0000 UTC]
"Richard Goldman"
(United States)
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My new account contact me on this one if you need too
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You are very right. My stories have become formulaic in the vore sequence and I do need to work on that. I think all my creativity goes toward the romance and plot so I think that is why my vore sequences seem less clever. I will work on that.
I also love your ideas. If you have any more than please say so because I value your opinion highly.
Thank you very much!
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Your welcome. It would also be cool if you could look at some of my stuff and tell me what you think. That would be great If you could thanks
-A world of thought is worthless, yet a single action can change the world.
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I'm glad you liked it! What did you like about it?
The third chapter will be out this week, I think on Saturday.
Hay if you have any ideas for the Miss Silver series then please speak up. I'm out of ideas sadly.
Thank you very much!
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I enjoyed how in the second chapter it was not completly willing but more of trickery. Maybe for the series you could involve them running away together? Or even getting discovered and blackmailed. Just some ideas. I know you probably don't care too much for my advice on your writing but the way the characters are vored Is always the same wording. Slow down on that or say it differently like this. "She slowly crept up the boys body her mouth surronding his as he lay there glowing in bliss. The boy unbenownst to him Was headed to his ultimate doom. Finally she reached his head and with a final gulp the boy disappeared from this world forever. The only evidence of him ever living was the squirming
buldge left in the womans stomach." Just a little bit of friendly advice.
-A world of thought is worthless, yet a single action can change the world.
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No actually. I wrote a piece on the creature Grendel from Beowulf and I wrote a review on the animated movie 9.
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I was always a fan of bounty hunters in Star Wars and since I have a considerable amount of knowledge in that universe and vore I decided to make a series. This is the first series I have ever written.
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Is vore the only thing you've writen?
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yes it was an excellent new look on it and it was very well put together
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