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Favourites: 16; Deviations: 11; Watchers: 7
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# Interests
Other Interests: Nature and technology# About me
Current Residence: Colorado Springs, Colorado, USAOperating System: Windoz 2000 Pro
Favourite cartoon character: Sabrina
# Comments
Comments: 12
Elliterate [2007-10-25 14:58:00 +0000 UTC]
Hey! Thanks for adding me back!
Yes I am nano-ing and I have a vague idea of what I'm doing... I'm planning on working on a sort of "modern fantasy" piece. Ugh does that even make any sense? >.<
I'm kungfupurse over on the nano boards
I've neglected posting at the moment in an attempt to get all my assignments done and out of the way before November 1st... I've still got 3 to go! O_O
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Yuuki-Kitsune [2007-02-16 21:08:03 +0000 UTC]
hey. MAN! i really admire you!! i've seen your comments on a few people's forum posts here lately! your advice is so great and your ideas are fabulos. if it's not to much trouble, could you give my story a spin? i'm not beggin' fer comments or anything i would just like you to read my story. it's about werewolves ahich i know isn't really anthrofiction...but it's close right?
if you get the time i have the original prolouge posted and version 2.0 which has considerably less mistakes.
P.S. I love the story you have posted here...interesting concept...i really like Paris.
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ScottyDM In reply to Yuuki-Kitsune [2007-02-17 10:05:55 +0000 UTC]
Thanks, Yuuki:
I've put up a freshly edited version of the short story that scene is a reject from: An Apple... for Your Happiness. I also tweaked the lost scene a bit because it needed it. Sort of felt flat, and that "giant hand"... (tries not to picture a giant disembodied hand molesting his fox).
But if you've read it once, don't bother to read it again. The changes are minor.
I have a second short story as an excerpt from the same unfinished novel. Same location, the Akamatsu Ranch, but it's Christmas and this time Mia (Bobby's fiance) and Brigget (Paris's sister) join in the fun. I think it also wants a rewrite. It might be nice to add Penny and Bobby's grandparents from their father's side. Her grandfather is Japanese-American and a genetic mix, but her grandmother is old-world, pure-blood Japanese. I think she'd flip when she sees Paris and Brigget!
Oh, and I have some vulpine poetry (mostly nursery rhymes) I wrote for the novel. I asked myself, "What sort of nursery rhymes might fox parents tell their kits?"
Scotty
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Yuuki-Kitsune In reply to ScottyDM [2007-02-17 15:11:27 +0000 UTC]
I read the new version just a moment ago but i didn't havee time to comment, but i will have no fear! It sounds alot better and i like the way it's from Katrin's point of view.
Oh! i like the idea of fox nursery rhymes! that sounds so cool!! i tried something like that with wolves but i'm not much good at poetry soooo...
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