TASTEOFCHANGE In reply to Ma-ari [2018-06-21 15:55:00 +0000 UTC]

De rien. Keep on rocking.

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Ma-ari In reply to TASTEOFCHANGE [2018-06-24 17:57:24 +0000 UTC]

yay ^^ o/

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TASTEOFCHANGE In reply to VeruzekinEmbassy [2015-12-02 09:08:45 +0000 UTC]

Good stuff and much potential. Keep it up, dude.

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VeruzekinEmbassy In reply to TASTEOFCHANGE [2015-12-02 20:55:18 +0000 UTC]

I hope so

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TASTEOFCHANGE In reply to Tanorath-drgn [2014-10-01 22:37:41 +0000 UTC]

 Thanks for sharing. Good stuff.

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Tanorath-drgn In reply to TASTEOFCHANGE [2014-10-12 10:43:15 +0000 UTC]

no probs. thanks to you for reading

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TASTEOFCHANGE In reply to Auroracuno [2014-07-11 10:28:49 +0000 UTC]

You're welcome. Thanks for sharing.

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TASTEOFCHANGE In reply to SinzutheGreat [2014-07-01 10:40:01 +0000 UTC]

sure thing. Thanks for sharing.

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TASTEOFCHANGE In reply to MetalFury515 [2013-09-29 03:04:25 +0000 UTC]

No prob. Good luck.

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MetalFury515 In reply to TASTEOFCHANGE [2013-09-29 11:16:09 +0000 UTC]

Btw, have you read my story?

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TASTEOFCHANGE In reply to MetalFury515 [2013-10-05 16:05:53 +0000 UTC]

I did.

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MetalFury515 In reply to TASTEOFCHANGE [2013-10-05 16:36:15 +0000 UTC]

What do you think?

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TASTEOFCHANGE In reply to MetalFury515 [2013-10-08 22:04:40 +0000 UTC]

You are driven... and that's good. I liked the story. A few things I noticed are, that all your characters are facets of your own. Make it more realistic by incorporating other characters by starting with friends you know. You tried that but it came still out like a projection of yourself.
You dealt with a few topics that are important for you and the main character: music, ADHD and love. While these topics are big in your world, the might not have the same presence in the world of others... and if you let your character go out in the world at large... he will clash with that fact. Instead the world in the story reflected his character. You changed the world instead of letting the character deal with the discrepancy.
The love relationship is "cute". Meaning it is idealized. And I think you hit the dreams of quite a few folks out there. But sometimes it's necessary to infuse stories with realism so that the audience can better connect with the characters. It seems, that the love is fully in the hand of the main character; he never doubts and his love always lines up course parallel to his. In reality there is conflict. And the characters and the plot benefit from the creativity and classical delaying moments; an unexpected change in the plot and development in the character.

You showed the audience your world. And it was great. I really enjoyed the story. But as a consequence, I wonder if you could open this island to the world outside and let your characters exit it and deal with the influences of reality; both in character and consequence. I think you are on the right path by mixing fantasy with aspects of reality. But look a little closer at what this reality is to avoid supplementing it with an artificial substitute.

Good luck and thanks for sharing.

 

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MetalFury515 In reply to TASTEOFCHANGE [2013-10-08 22:43:33 +0000 UTC]

Thanks! but....  can you simplify what you said a little? That's a lot, and I like that.

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TASTEOFCHANGE In reply to MetalFury515 [2013-10-09 05:19:25 +0000 UTC]

Sure. Boils down to one idea: what you show is the world within yourself. All your characters are you. They don't differ much. You can make use of that intentionally but I think you rather aimed at letting your character discover a new world. He didn't... He found only what he expected and anticipated. Open up your world and allow outside influence. How likely is it, that everybody talks about ADHD? Your lovely pair of night furies never argued. They spent most of their lives apart, experienced different situations and therefore must have different characters despite sharing a similar psychological condition. A good piece of advice I heard once is: write about what you know. You know ADHD and yourself. Can you combine that with other personalities in your life, friends, teachers, characters in books... To give your story an influence from a source that you know but is not entirely under your control?

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TASTEOFCHANGE In reply to Wojak1991 [2013-05-08 23:31:57 +0000 UTC]

You're welcome. Desert dragon was nicely done.

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TASTEOFCHANGE In reply to drekian [2013-02-14 19:53:08 +0000 UTC]

Welcome. Keep it up; you rock.

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TASTEOFCHANGE In reply to Theseekingtiger [2012-11-08 01:16:55 +0000 UTC]

Welcome. Keep up the experiments.

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TASTEOFCHANGE In reply to monchiken [2012-11-02 00:00:42 +0000 UTC]

Emoticon Overkill... welcome. Keep it up, dude.

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TASTEOFCHANGE In reply to Gamerdragon1992 [2012-10-13 11:49:23 +0000 UTC]

Thanks for publishing your art. Keep posting.

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Gamerdragon1992 In reply to TASTEOFCHANGE [2012-10-13 16:01:04 +0000 UTC]

You got it^^

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TASTEOFCHANGE In reply to Tdress [2012-07-15 00:31:02 +0000 UTC]

You're welcome. Keep on writing.

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TASTEOFCHANGE In reply to suzidragonlady [2012-07-12 14:08:34 +0000 UTC]

You're welcome. Keep it up.

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TASTEOFCHANGE In reply to GoldFox20 [2012-05-30 00:22:36 +0000 UTC]

HTTYD TF is a bull's eye. Not bad.

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GoldFox20 In reply to TASTEOFCHANGE [2012-05-30 06:12:02 +0000 UTC]

Thank you. ^___^

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TASTEOFCHANGE In reply to wasiak1994 [2012-05-14 12:05:07 +0000 UTC]

Welcome. Nice eye for expressions.

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TASTEOFCHANGE In reply to nolife-TF [2012-05-11 06:41:58 +0000 UTC]

Welcome. Keep up the nice TFs.

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