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[2011-02-24 11:39:35 +0000 UTC]
"Icon by Arf106 SHE HAS MOVED!!!!"
(United Kingdom)
# Statistics
Favourites: 1236; Deviations: 888; Watchers: 103
Watching: 322; Pageviews: 31370; Comments Made: 2236; Friends: 322
# Interests
Favorite visual artist: lotsFavorite movies: the legend of sleepy hollow and silent hill
Favorite TV shows: Grim advenchers of billy and mandy
Favorite bands / musical artists: lots
Favorite books: Skulduggery pleasent
Favorite writers: Rage-the-stick-guy
Favorite games: silent hill and L4D
Favorite gaming platform: Laptop and PS2
Tools of the Trade: what?
Other Interests: Headless horseman (sleepy hollow) captain hans gunsche (hellsing) EmilBlhansen <3
# About me
SHE HAS MOVED TO AND PLEASE COMMENT/SHARE/POST THINGS THERE PLEASE!# Comments
Comments: 709
hi im open for point commisions and art trades if youΒ΄re interestedΒ yinspd.deviantart.com/journal/β¦ hope i didnt bother you 
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hi im making point commisions and art trades if youΒ΄re interestedΒ yinspd.deviantart.com/journal/β¦
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Hey, Tammy. Thank you for watching me. I just wanted to let you know that I have moved accounts so if you want to see more of my work then please come and watch me here too:Β
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Happy Birthday sis X3Β
Hope you have a great one ^_^
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Thank you! same to you ^^
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Happy halloween to you too! :3
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You've been tagged:Β tashy-lou.deviantart.com/journβ¦
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wait your interested in transformers and halo?
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I havent plaid Halo, and yes i like transformers but i cant really draw the characters without them looking cartoony.
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emilblhansen.deviantart.com/jo⦠Tagged :3
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- byΒ TFAfangirl14 ,Β 3 hours, 47 minutes ago
- Journals Β /Β Personal
WARNING: CARRY ON READING! Or you will die, even if you just read the warning! Once, there was a girl named Katherine and she had a depressing life. She was sent to the orphanage because her mom and dad was killed for being shot. One day, she broke out of the orphanage and began to have a gun on her hand. And then, she began shooting people in her neighborhood. Just then, the police arrived, and shot her. The blood streamed down the road. She was dead. Now, follow the instructions or face the consequences. Send this to nobody, and you will die. No questions asked. Send this to 1-5 people, and you would most likely get injured. Send this to 6-10 people, and you will get the biggest fright of your life. Now, this is the happiest part. Send this to 11-15 people, and you will get good luck. Here are some examples. EXAMPLE ONE: Clarissa didn't believe this story at all, so she just ignored it and went on to what she was doing. But then, one night, Katherine (the one who died) came to her room, and killed her with a knife silently, and she watched Clarissa die. Don't want to end up like Clarissa? EXAMPLE TWO: Drake read this story, but ended up sending it to five people. The next day, he ended up being in the hospital, wearing a coma. He was hurt all over. Now, you don't wanna be like Drake? EXAMPLE THREE: Marissa, who was Clarissa's twin sister, was sad that she died. So, she tried to help herself by sending this to ten people. It didn't help at all. The next day, when she got out of bed, she saw blood everywhere. Blood was Marissa's fright. She was scarred for life. Now here's the last example. EXAMPLE FOUR: Mark was a very gentle one. He had read this story, and sent it to fifteen people. And then, the next day, when Mark went outside to play with his dog, he found ten thousand dollars on his front porch. It was from Katherine. When she noticed he sent it to fifteen people, she decided to give him very, very good luck. So, she has sent the girl of Mark's dreams to his house, and guess what? She asked him to marry him! So he did, and they lived happily ever after. Now, if you want to end up like Mark, you must send this to 11-15 people, and you will be safe, and not only that, your dreams will come true! If you DON'T send this to 11-15 people, you will die, get injured, or get the biggest fright of your life. Now, go. Katherine is waiting for you...
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We're all going to die anyway sweetie.
Just a few grammatical and spelling errors, as well as some other errors, I'd like to point out (people are more likely to fall for things like this if they're well written):
-Don't write a big block of text, use paragraphs and spacing to make it easier to read.
-Don't state her life was depressing, if it is then the reader can figure that out for his/herself.
-Her mum and dad WERE SHOT, not 'her mom and dad was killed for being shot'.
-You don't need to break out of an orphanage, it's not prison.
-Never start a sentence with 'and', especially not 'and then'.
-The police wouldn't just shoot a little girl, they would arrest her and avoid killing her at all costs.
-Don't get creative and start writing things like 'the blood streamed down the road', you wouldn't know that unless you were there and it makes it sound like a work of fiction.
-Don't need to point out that she was dead either, you're underestimating the intelligence of your reader (well maybe not the ones with lo enough intelligence to pass this on).
-Start a new paragraph after the story.
-Don't say 'no questions asked', I mean seriously?
-'Now, this is the happiest part' can be taken out too.
-Don't need a comma before an 'and'.
-Take out 'Here are some examples.'
-Ne paragraph for each example.
-Don't use capital letters.
-Don't need the 'but then'.
-We know who Katherine is.
-'killed her silently, with a knife' not 'killed her with a knife silently'
-Based on the story Katherine should use a gun. Using a knife makes no sense.
-Did she kill Clarissa or just watch her die, she couldn't have done both.
-Don't want to sound stupid? Take out the questions after the examples.
-New paragraph for next example
-Take out the 'but'.
-Be specific about his injuries and what caused them, it adds to the believability. Don't say 'he was hurt all over.'
-You can't wear a coma. That makes no sense.
-Shouldn't Marissa have seen killed with Clarissa, why did Katherine give her another night?
-Clarissa and Marissa should either have had their stories written together or it not be mentioned that they're twins.
-Why do the twins names have to rhyme?
-Take out 'blood was Marissa's fright' it's bad English and not necessary.
-'Mark was a very gentle one' another thing to take out.
-Not another 'and then'!
-Don't mention the dog.
-Ten thousand dollars on his front porch is probably cause for a police investigation.
-We kind of figured it was from Katherine.
-Don't use exclamation marks and don't say 'guess what?'
-So he just married the stranger and lived happily ever after? Maybe not.
-You should just leave out Mark's story altogether, it just makes the whole thing sound completely stupid and unbelievable.
-Leave out the end bit too.
This is how it should have been written:
WARNING: Carry on reading or you will die.Β
Once, there was a girl named Katherine. She was sent to the orphanage because her mum and dad were shot. One day, she ran away from the orphanage and she started shooting people. The police arrived and one of theΒ accidentallyΒ shot and killed her.
Follow the instructions or face the consequences. Send this to nobody and you will die. Send this to 1-5 people, and you will get seriously injured. Send this to 6-10 people, and you will get the biggest fright of your life. However, if you send this to 11-15 people, and you will get good luck.
Example One: Clarissa didn't believe this story at all, so she just ignored it. One night, Katherine came to her room, and killed her silently.
Example Two: Drake read this story and only sent it to five people. The next day, he ended up in a coma in hospital.Β
Example Three: Marissa sent this to ten people. The next day, when she got out of bed, she saw blood everywhere. She was scarred for life.
Now, go. Katherine is waiting for you...
Reading this through 3 times was worse than anything Katherine could ever do.
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No problem ^^
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No problems ^^
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hey sis! Could be my new OC "Anne Sophia" cousin of your OC Tamara?
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