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ThatPizzaBox
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[2016-10-13 21:37:16 +0000 UTC]
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(United States)
# Statistics
Favourites: 14; Deviations: 68; Watchers: 12
Watching: 13; Pageviews: 4214; Comments Made: 119; Friends: 13
# Interests
Favorite visual artist: Sr PeloFavorite movies: Anything Animated
Favorite TV shows: Spongebob, Chowder, Adam Ruins Everything, Impractical Jokers, Today
Favorite bands / musical artists: N/A
Favorite books: Diary of a Wimpy Kid series
Favorite writers: J.K. Rowling
Favorite games: nintendo games
Favorite gaming platform: Super Mario
Tools of the Trade: N/A
Other Interests: Writing, sewing. and making YouTube videos.
# About me
Life is disappointing,Woe is what I know.
Outed by my nose,
That's just how it goes,
For poor Pinocchio.
Story of my life,
Always doomed to fail.
Cheated by a fox,
Swallowed by a whale.
That's the story of my life, oh yeah,
That's the story of my life.
[Shoemaker's Elf]
Strife is never ending.
[Guard]
(Spoken)
Peter Pan!
[Peter Pan]
Banished from the town
[Guard]
(Spoken)
Ugly Duckling!
[Ugly Duckling]
They dragged me from the pond.
[Fairy Godmother]
They broke my magic wand.
[The Three Little Pigs]
They blew our condos down.
[Guard]
(Spoken)
Wicked Witch!
[Wicked Witch]
Life is but a witch hunt.
[Mama Bear]
Mama's in the mud,
Mama's in distress.
[Mad Hatter]
They ridiculed my hat.
[Three Little Pigs]
They said that we were fat.
[Big Bad Wolf]
They tore my cotton granny dress,
And called me a hot and tranny mess.
[Guard]
(Spoken)
Sugar Plum Fairy!
[All]
Story of my life.
Booted from the ball
Told to go away
[Humpty Dumpty]
Tumbled off the wall!
[All]
But that's the story of my life
[Guard]
(Spoken)
You're late rabbit.
[White Rabbit]
That's the story of my life.
[Guard]
(Spoken)
Have fun you guys
[All]
That's the story of my life.
[Guard]
(Spoken)
And remember if we find you back in the kingdom you will be executed.
[All]
I always dreamed I'd get a happy ending.
[Wicked Witch]
And this right here,
Not how it goes.
[All]
I always dreamed I'd get an ever after.
If this is it,
It blows (x3)
[Pinocchio]
(Spoken)
This is worse than the time I caught Dutch Elm Disease in Tijuana
[All]
Story of my life,
All the wasted prayers.
All the broken dreams.
[The Three Bears]
All the broken chairs.
[All]
All the damage done
[The Three Bears]
All the busted beds.
[All]
All the shattered falls
[The Three Bears]
And the porridge on our heads.
[All]
That's the story of my life, yes sir.
That's the story of my life, oy vey.
That's the story of my,
Life
# Comments
Comments: 13
Eyyyyyyy, why was I such an attention whore? I did only want to be noticed so I can get tips and stuff, but damn
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ehhhh i found you!!!
i was a youtube account here: www.youtube.com/channel/UCuPZL… that commented on your other comment here: www.youtube.com/watch?v=vUilq5… to be specific :>
so, i'll watch you to help you gain some attention, as well as giving you a little shout-out. hope this helps
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Well, I had a look at your gallery and I must say, for first drawings, this is quiet good. You seem to have the basic idea of anatomy, shading and linework.
My first advice would be to not use lined paper. It sucks to have a picture obscured and interrupted by some lines.
Secondly, what device do you use to capture the images. It does not really matter what you really use, even the best scanners won't capture the picture correctly. The point you need to do some digital editing. Nothing radical, just some change to contrast, brightness or saturation can make a shade of colour more vibrant and not so bleak. I recommend using GIMP 2 since it's free, there are many tutorials for it and I myself use it for all my needs.
Lastly, the coloring, something many artist won't tackle first time they hold a pencil. It is nice to see it but make sure you make it more clear so that the lines of colour will disappear. I can quiet clearly see how you moved with the green pencil in the Grinch drawing since there are green lines of colour on his face instead of a uniform shade of green.
Keep at it.
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I saw your comment on Solar Sands' video, my main critique for your work is; Never draw on lined paper, it looks gross/messy. Secondly, when you colour something make sure it looks blended/smooth, you can do this by rubbing your finger on the pencil marks or you could buy paper smudge pens. Your current colouring method of scribbling looks messy. There you go.
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And I only use line paper for pixelated art. But if you're talking about notebook paper, that's because I don't always have printer paper
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I don't think I'm scribbling but ok.
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Mind if I leave a critique?
I suggest you look at references to help improve anatomy, and use bases as well to help (I recommend shadow-bases) but you're very good at trying your hardest (seriously, most of artists I see half-ass their work you actually work hard).
But I recommend you use bases and references. they will help you get better at art. and, I won't mind you using my art for referencing (as long credit is given).
Have a wonderful day/night ^^
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