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[2010-04-18 16:27:43 +0000 UTC]
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Happy new year to you too
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Oh, I did give it a read a few weeks back. It's interesting.
Main annoyance I'm having with it though, is that the text isn't that readable all of the time, especially the earlier pages. A different font might help or making the letters larger.
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Amd what is up with the other pages? I know I started it badly, because this is my first comics. But after time, it becomes better
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Hmm don't worry starting is always hard. It does indeed get better, could already see improvements in the later pages. Aside from the text I don't have anything to remark that's bad though ^^'
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They've improved, less often doesn't it fit in the text bubbles you've made, there's more space and such. To make clear, I'm not talking about what's being said and the context of it, just the presentation. What program do you use for this?
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Aight think that one has layers right? And probs a line tool and some selection tools. So here's some tips for a bit of a cleaner look, your background sometimes meshes into the white of your bubbles, as does the white sometimes leave the bubbles. Use the line tool or anything you want really on a layer above the background layer and create your bubbles. Next use a select tool to select the space in your bubbles and grow the selection by a few pixels (If krita has that option). New layer below the first and fill the selected areas with white. Your black lines for your bubbles seem thicker than 2 pixels so this should work well. Ofcourse the text layer will need to be above these, or otherwise you won't see anything xD.
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I can't handle the layersΒ
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Oh is your computer not strong enough?
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No. I simply just can't understand how can use layers. Also I started to read your comics from the beginning to understand what's going on. I hope o can see Mesprit and Azelf too if Uxie is in XD
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Nah Uxie was the first of the trio to appear, none of them appeared earlier
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I didn't meant earlier. I meant in the future pages. Also I hope to see Uxie again
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Oh Uxie will be back in a couple of chapters
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and the other two? they will appear too?
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One of them is certainly planned to appear. Don't know if the other will also do though... maybe?
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We'll see if it won't appear somewhere, in the background maybe, though that one won't have the same role as the other two right now
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What do you mean by that? I mean who are the second who have role?
May I help you about the pixies? I know a lot of things of them xd
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I mean I got a plan for one of them, to play a role in the plot of the comic, but for the third one no such thing has been thought of so far
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Who is that one? Azelf or Mesprit?
Possible you will get a plan for the third one in the future?
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Azelf is the one there's no plans for.
And I've got this red line I'm following, but certain chapters still need fleshing out, so there's a chance
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that wuld be nice 
he is the strongest and, he showed me in Diamond. Almost fainted all of my team members xd in Platinum and white2 he was really annoying with the 50 ultra ball brake and killed himself 4 times....
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Mhmm that's a fun way to approach Azelf
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yes. therefore see all in it would be cool. but i am glad you showed us the Nerd first xd Also I got a shiny ralts in ralts dayΒ
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Oh that's nice and the nerd hmm xD great nickname
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