phoenixofthenet [2009-10-04 15:09:43 +0000 UTC]

So, say I wanted to direct and put [link] on the stage...would that be all right with you?

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cs-chan [2007-07-20 00:22:14 +0000 UTC]

Congratulations on you Daily Deviation!!

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phoenixofthenet [2005-08-07 18:15:20 +0000 UTC]

If you had a subscription, would you be more active, lol?

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wildoats [2005-03-21 17:42:37 +0000 UTC]

Write more plays.

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Beautifulinblood [2005-01-15 10:55:33 +0000 UTC]

is your avatar Alan Alda? cos it looks like him...

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allokotos [2004-08-21 22:56:19 +0000 UTC]

thank you, as well, for the watch. i'm impressed by the plays you've got up here, and am excited to see more from you. so post more! ready, set, go!

but no pressure, or anything.

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wolfrunner13 [2004-06-23 22:44:42 +0000 UTC]

~batesOK
Sparky
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500...awesomeness

you deserve more though :headbanger: you rock

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Slyjester [2004-06-21 01:26:59 +0000 UTC]

hi

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Astrophel [2004-06-14 13:18:55 +0000 UTC]

Hmmm...that's a glowing recommendation from Owat. And you quote "art" eh?

Ever read banana yoshimoto?

Anyhow, excited to see your piece, and thank you for the watch in the mean while.

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astericism [2004-06-10 14:19:08 +0000 UTC]

thanks for the


jkmb.

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anhdres [2004-06-10 06:31:35 +0000 UTC]

Thank you very much for the

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onewordatatime [2004-06-06 17:21:04 +0000 UTC]

Besides ‘Mitch’, I also read ‘Dead in the Water’ and ‘Moxie.’ The critiques I have for you are pretty consistent, the majority of your content is impeccable; the actions and little quirks of your characters are molded and natural. The small talk is mostly very useful and helps to characterize both the speaker and listener.

Grammatically, most is fine, though there are a few places that need to be reconsidered. I was able to figure out the intention of each personally, but pay careful attention to how you create pauses in particular, as that is where you tend to try to create particular effects, often with hyphens, and the pause taken to consider how the pause is meant draws attention away from that beautiful content and breaks the flow.

I also have a question for you – is there a reason you enjoy working with only two characters at a time? I wonder what you could do with a busy scene. My thoughts are that you are possibly nuts about character definition (as indicated by what I’ve read) and can’t imagine either having to define so many, or leave information out of any. Perhaps it is something you would want to look into, you certainly have the potential. I really enjoyed reading you; please don’t ever hesitate to ask for critiques.

la petite ampoule

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evilfaeries [2004-06-06 04:13:42 +0000 UTC]

Thanks for adding me to your devwatch.

<3 Kandice

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DominatusX [2004-06-02 07:15:49 +0000 UTC]

Since you have a small gallery I thought it would be proper to just make an overall comment here. Nice work, I enjoyed it

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thatpartydress [2004-06-01 04:29:10 +0000 UTC]

what did i do to deserve the honor of being your friend!?

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wolfinboysclothing [2004-05-25 23:40:18 +0000 UTC]

Thanks for the comment! Keeps me goin' and such.

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solle [2004-05-23 07:19:19 +0000 UTC]

Ohh, you like Palahniuk and Ellis. That's good.

Thanks for the comment, you seem nifty.

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johnlogin [2004-05-21 04:55:48 +0000 UTC]

I don't know how I missed that one of your favorite TV characters is Meatwad from ATHF, and even though I'm more partial to Master Shake (I identify with him because I'm such an asshole), I have to admit that my respect for you has doubled, tripled, or even quadrupled.

Thanks for showing interest in my stuff. It keeps me awake.

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DragonKaze [2004-05-17 12:38:50 +0000 UTC]

Thanks for the comment! I really appricate it. I love your stuff as well. I shal now go and comment on it.

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rinkadink [2004-05-15 04:23:24 +0000 UTC]

thanks, i guess, for the totally random watch.

someday, i'll spend some more time here.

mike.

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johnlogin [2004-05-12 23:53:05 +0000 UTC]

Thanks for the lovely comment, the favorite, and the devwatch. I promise I'll return the favor(s).

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tangledweb [2004-05-11 11:19:48 +0000 UTC]

Hey there, thanks for the fav.

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RyuGraphix [2004-05-10 05:14:34 +0000 UTC]

Thanks a ton for the fav!

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godofodd [2004-05-05 01:58:36 +0000 UTC]

Hey, thanks for the watch. Welcome to deviantART as well. I look forward to seeing some work from you.

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batesOK [2004-04-24 22:56:03 +0000 UTC]

--Dr. Sidney Freedman

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