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bertalina
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[2009-12-16 22:02:58 +0000 UTC]
"Imagination encircles the world"
(Japan)
# Statistics
Favourites: 727; Deviations: 508; Watchers: 534
Watching: 140; Pageviews: 31734; Comments Made: 2974; Friends: 140
# Interests
Favorite visual artist: Takeshi Obata, Yana Toboso, Shirow Miwa, Nuriko-Kun!Favorite movies: Spirit stallion of the Cimarron, Spirited Away, Howl's Moving Castle, Schindler's List, Legend of 1900
Favorite TV shows: DRRR, Baccano, 琅琊榜(Nirvana in Fire), Pinocchio
Favorite bands / musical artists: Aimer, Urban Zakapa, Amazarashi, 凛として時雨, King Gnu
Favorite books: Black Beauty, Name of the Wind,海辺のカフカ,19Q4
Favorite writers: Tsugumi Obata , 村上春樹, 乙一
Favorite games: Ib, Witch's House, Catherine
Tools of the Trade: CSP, PS
Other Interests: Manga, Books, Travelling, Cooking, Going to cafes and bars
# About me
I just can't seem to settle down anywhere, so I'm always all over the place. I'm currently studying in Japan right now but who knows where I'll be next year.Because of university I can't seem to draw as much as I used to, but I hope I can find my passion like in the past soon!
日本の大学に通っている中…だと言っても最近ン結構大学に対する関心が無くなってしまった。（笑）
大学のせいで絵を描くことが無くなってしまったので、頑張って前のような熱心を取り戻したいです。
気軽く声かけてくれると嬉しい～
一緒に絵を描いたり、本や漫画の話をしたりしませんか。
# Comments
Comments: 290
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Happy Bithday
i Hope and wish you a great day as staying healty this year as more years will come ^^
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ラマありがとうございます あなたのBFのショーターの絵は素晴らしかったけど私には辛すぎてFAVできなかった。
お許しを よろしければ仲良くしてくださいね～
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コメントありがとうございます。すごく嬉しいです。
私も描きながらすごく苦しんでいた( ﾉД`)ｼｸｼｸ…
もちろん喜んで仲良くしたいです！(≧◇≦)
宜しく！
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WATCHERまで、ありがとうございます
よろしくお願いいたします。
なかなか、時間が経たないと明るい絵が浮かばないですよね・・・・私も、まだ時間がかかりそう
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いやいや、全然！4MIWOさんの絵はすごく魅力的で素敵です！次々の絵も楽しみにしています～
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ありがとうございます。しばらくBANANAFISHの絵を描くと思います
ベルタリア？さんの絵もダイナミックで魅力的で好きです。流石、10年以上描いてるだけある。私はミオと呼んでくださればいいですよ～
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ありがとうございます～
それは楽しみにしています！(≧▽≦)
ベルタでも大丈夫ですよ！
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Hey! I love your sketchy style a lot! I especially love your AoT works! Hope you have a wonderful day! <3
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Thank you so much! Comments like these really make my day~ >//<
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Happy Birthday! Sweet Dear ! ! !
Make it one of the best birthday you make of it this year!! stay healthy and best wishes~~
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Critique
First impression
Well considering that I haven’t had the time to look at everybody’s character from this round, seeing yours for the first time, right out the gate looks pretty fantastic. On Edgar’s profile task I enjoyed the warm grayscale colors you chose for it. And you seem to have a solid understanding of anatomy.
Speaking of anatomy, if you want like a reference book for more anatomy that’s college grade and for free just send me a PM and I can give you a handful of pages from what anatomy book I used. I always need help with anatomy too, so. I just think it’s nice to have a resource of sorts to kinda look back to. As for your lines, although they follow the figure very nicely and close all the shapes and such, they seem a bit sketchy. If that’s your style then never mind, but some of the lines can be more defined given the right amount of time.
Composition
Composition from works I’ve seen, Edgar’s wardrobe in particular, Is very neat and organized. In the guess who for him, the placement of him and the lighting was also very nice. Not much I can say critique wise here.
Consistency
Seeing later challenges from Edgar, everything seems consistent. Most critique was in other areas really.
Yeah. So basically lines and anatomy.
Hope this is a decent critique. Good luck on the rest of this round!
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Very helpful! Especially concerning 'sketchiness'. >//<
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oh man, better late than never right? haha happy birthday!
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Ahahaha Thank you!!! >//<
How's Uni? XD
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well my first sem was not too great haha hopefully you're doing well~
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Naaw, don't worry about it. Hopefully next sem will be better!
I'm doing great, thanks~ >//<
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Happy birthday! 
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OMG HAPPY BIRTHDAY SENPAI <333 HOPE YOU GET HEAPS OF CAKEEE
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