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[2001-03-17 21:53:10 +0000 UTC]
"PM"
(United States)
# Statistics
Favourites: 6; Deviations: 696; Watchers: 33
Watching: 19; Pageviews: 18835; Comments Made: 1024; Friends: 19
# About me
Current Residence: Las Vegas# Comments
Comments: 322
Today, I came back to read Not For You, but I couldn't recall its name. Luckily it is the featured piece. Cheers.
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hello dearest. i am glad to find you well and your work having so much soul. i hope the las vegas heat isn't eating you alive!
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i'm floating around, my poetry has taken the back seat to computer science studies, i'm a junior now at la salle university in philly.
what have you been up to?
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unfortunately, very barely at it :-\ justnow getting back into art in general.
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i miss your presence buddy
we are both ghosts it seems on this site
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you commented on: [link] a while back, thx for comments btw (da has been fuckin up with me lately, doesnt notify me when i get comments)... i was just notified taht the image had gotten corrupted. fixed it.
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Hey, whats kicking? (happenin)
My name is Ashley, i was just looking through your artwork i like your general ideas and creativness you have achieved, it's very unique and i also like your choice of favourite.
Well hope to see you around..Peace
ANGEL007
Ashley
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oh wow, thank you for commenting on dreamlust
your comments are always so powerful, especially that one
thanks for making my day with it
how are things doing with your mag?
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i want to hear about your magazine, it's still not ready?!?!
are you getting it printed? i want to order. ive always loved your eye for design though i'm kind of upset w/ your invisible ink stay put political pete.
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it is peter menocal, i do believe you know me, and i believe i know you. hmmmmmmm
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"chicken. i am the non-unique non-specific ambiguous fabric by which everything is referenced and judged in the real of flavors."
hmm.. well seeing as how i don't eat chicken, i will have to choose bean sprout.
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your poetry makes sweet passionate love to my mind.
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palahniuk is great buddy..
i already read fight club and now i'm reading choke
you know where to find me
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very nice work man! you're talented. ill be seeing you around.
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Have you ever had a dream, that you were so sure was real? What if you were unable to wake from that dream? How would you know the difference between the dream world and the real world?
What you know you can't explain, but you feel it. You've felt it your entire deviant life, that there's something wrong with the story. You don't know what it is, but it's there, like a splinter in your mind, driving you mad.
You take the blue pill, the story ends. Your browser closes and you believe whatever you want to believe. You take the red pill, you stay in wonderland. And, I show you how deep the rabbit hole goes.
I offer only the truth, nothing more.
Take: The Red Pill
Take: The Blue Pill
spyed, nobody has ever done this before.
I know. That's why it's going to work.
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you are one sexy biyatch with all your beautiful poetry. i love it.. it always makes me think and you choose your words so well, like you thought about each and every one and put all your heart into it.
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yes, that would be the movie. which you missed out on cause you were absent on halloween. i know... i just can't compete with freshman ladies. *sob*
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to my political pete
on my way to wish you a happy holiday season filled with good cheer. surround yourself with only the beautiful things in life. don't forget to smile and stay beautiful yourself.
your corporatewhore
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Curse you to the fiery pits of hellfire and damnation for submitting so many things at once. I shall comment slowly upon them. ;p
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missing you around da buddy
just thought i'd make a visit
i hope all is well
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cheese and crackers yo.....cheese and crackers. heh, like how i dont like you? i thought i'd put that, cause no one ever does...even though its a LIE. well, scooder doo and skeeby dee...if steve talks to you say "RECORD A DEMO OR GOD HELP YOU!" heh...dont ask why, just do it....whore. anyhoooo, we got'sta kick it some time gangsta style...gangsta..
later man...later. keep on fightin the good fight...and have you heard of that [link] place..man, does it rock.
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whats crackalackin loserface? bahahahah. i havtent been here in a bit, so i figured that id stop by and say hi. hope to see you at the thrice show. fo shizzle! go take a bath.
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Link of Da NIGHT! From yer pal', Jesusbite.
Take your random lovings or fuckings or snoogins and then go read. Its good, I swear. One of my favorite poets.
You, reflections and shadows are the only proof of my myth
i am nothing buit a story being told
the spook who sat by the sign up sheet
spitting whole hearted words
into half listening ears my time ran out
i ran out the door behind her
trying to catch my second chance
to make the right first impression
and that's when i ran into an angel with blood on her wings
she told me she had flown to close to the truth
and was never quite able to reach her dreams either
i apologized
and i wiped the blood off of her wings
and now we talk on tuesdays
but our talking turned sour and now we argue late nights
this seems to be the best time to hide true emotion
see we've tried to just talk
but we've shot the breeze so much
we've left the atmosphere filled with all this dead air
and inspiration is no longer airbourne
see our words used to have wings
but now they just fall flat
like emotion read off paper
but i'm illiterate to all her emotions
so i read her lips imagining her words to be as happy as we once were
and i wish i didn't have to be so wrong
and i wish i had my butterflies back
and i tell her
' you know sometimes, i know you cry cause you have nothing else better to do
and praying won't convince you.
and i wish i could be there for you and for me too
cause in my dreams your tears are enough to get me home
but in the real world my tears are exactly what keeps me from getting there
and feeling sorry for myself has become second nature to me
like loving a king for his crown or laughing at jokes at my expense
but i want to be more than your HA,HA,HA!
i want to be your messiah
i do
and with these hands i want to baptize a single mothers tear drops
turning them into rain drops
forcing her to grow new smiles each day and i will
but i'm told my days in this existence are numbered
but i grew up in this existence coloring by the numbers
so each day is as bright as i can make it
see i've been here for an eternity
and i plan to be here for another
so what significance to past lives play
if we can't appreciate the ones we're living in
come talk to me
you are everything i've dreamt you to be
but am i what you've dreamt me to be
see sometimes i know enough to cry
but tears in relapse never seem to make much sense
so i don't do it
and please no more plaguraized reasons
cause all your excuses are starting to sound the same
and believe me i wouldn't have such a hard time believing myself
if i wasn't always repeating myself
and i tried
i tried say things just once
but it's not the intent of your word
but how your word is taken
i am the first word God spoke
and the last word the poet wrote
i am love and though attempts have been made to destroy me
i live on
by shihan
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ok, i wanted to comment on 'not for you' that is a part of the pincel toung devpack, well the whole pack put into one peom, but it was taking me for ever to sift through your encreadibly large gallery that i started to think that looking for this might actually make me late for work...anyhow, i am going to fave it cause i can do that from the devpack, i just can't comment on it there, or maybe i can and i just havn't realized that yet. anywho, that poem is amazing, would sound great at a reading, very 'beatish'!
i think that i am going to put you on a watch, cause from what i have read so far you really are tallented, though i can't promise that i will ever make it back through all your older stuff, there is so much!
great work, you have a new fan!
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Hey, look - youve got poetry that I didnt know about.
On the watch. Number 270-something.
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"when im not so damned busy im going to dive into your gallery and not leave until im evicted..."
I'm holding you to that
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eh.. uhmm.. *embarrased grin*
the below message was for some one else..
I was checking out your work, but had a whole load of windows open, and started typing without looking
Sorry for the screwup man
Stay well
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Thank you
And I will renturn your hug, but an infinity ( +1 ) of them
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peter is the perfect man! hehe you write beautiful poetry.. want to serenade me on my birthday? ill make sweet love to you eh eh
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You like Radiohead and Chuck Palahniuk, and you write hellishly amazing poetry. I believe I am going to put you on my watch and sift through your written stuff tomorrow.
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wow.... congrats on ya mention in [link] i'm glad you were on there, cos i dont think i would've found you on one of my hunting expeditions... you're on my watch... fantastic writing.. keep up the great work
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teheee thank you for commenting~~~ and for the favvie!!!
AND for mentioning me in your journal
you're far too kind
I'm so glad you like your bear
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