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ethan5324
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[2014-06-08 06:25:56 +0000 UTC]
"Tg stories"
(United States)
# Statistics
Favourites: 31; Deviations: 16; Watchers: 177
Watching: 54; Pageviews: 24285; Comments Made: 270; Friends: 54
# Interests
Favorite visual artist: SpawnfanFavorite TV shows: FΓΊtball, Family Guy, animes
Favorite bands / musical artists: Eminem, Skrillex, Knife Party, Waterflame, BVB, Green Day
Favorite books: LoR, The Giver
Favorite writers: Myself, J.R.R Tolkien
Favorite games: Pokemon, Skyrim
Favorite gaming platform: Nintendo or PS3
Tools of the Trade: My brain and keyboard
Other Interests: Tg stories
# About me
Writer of tg stories# Comments
Comments: 75
Sure but no promises on finishing it I haven't been on deviant lately so I may not finish it
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Thanksies fow the pwuttifuww watch on my little page~ 
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Wow great job commenting
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Thank you for the Watch and inviting me to your group.
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Thank you for letting me help out with your new group. This is the first time I've been allocated such a position so I'll try and help out as much as I can!!
Also love the picture you used for the group, I am currently reading the latest volume ofΒ Haganai and love both Yozora and Sena (or Meat lol)
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It's great to have a very talented person such as yourself in our group if you know anything that may help me in managing this group plz tell me I'm new at this so it would me great to have some advice from a "veteran" such as yourself
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Β o stop it you!! Well I'm in the same boat as you but I'll try and help as much as I can. Plus I noticed the other person you added, they were one of my first watchers on here and hes always looking after me
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Cool it's nice to know that ur friends with another one of our group members
That will make the group a lot easier to function
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Sry I have been busy with my summer job and I haven't been able to do anything but I'm back at work so sry
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P.S don't ask why but I told you the first time not to mention me in the description. Just say a friend off yours requeted this but doesn't want to be known just yet. Delete all these comments if I believe that Peach tg is done in the way I want it
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Sry I'll take it out immediately
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ok great, be sure to update asap.
Β 2morrow is the last day of july.
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Hey how's that editing coming along I'm sorry if I'm bugging way to much. Just remember to read that bigass comment I posted to ya. So I won't have to remind u of the things u forgotten.
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Well I've just read the update and I really love it, the ending was something I expected but....I'm extremely sorry to be picky but unless you are still re-writing it and only updated what you had so far then you are still far from over.
You probably only read some of my comments, and not the big one I sent ya; here it is again.
"When he is the dressing room at first he finds himself naked and confused, he tries to open the door and windows but they are shut and locked tightly. He then should see where the clothes came from first (draws, cupboards ETC)
When he see's the clothes floating he should be confused at first to why there are suddenly floating clothes but soon as the bra comes flying towards him and wraps itself around his body without any warning he then should be all like "What fuc...." and that is when all the clothes start to wrap themselves around him.
Although you should describe how the clothes are going on him, you already detailed the panties going up and corset wrapping around lacing itself up ETC.
But you need more detail. (Also mention the tights going up his legs same with the gloves going up his arms ETC.) When all the clothes are on him make him blush because well you know he is wearing like the girliest outfit a guy could possibly wear against his own will.
As for the hair and eye contact one; say something like 'The blond hair dyed sprayed his hair replacing his now long brown hair with the blond hair color that peach has' the same with the eye contacts "The blue eye contacts merged with his eyes becoming naturally blue and replacing his original brown ones for good"
Next is that you should mention the lipstick part, like he felt it rubbing on his lips which tastes of peaches ironically and pink blush came along and brushed against his cheeks. And the face morphing should come after the make-up is placed on him. Basically if there were readers out there who want to know what it feels like to be in that situation then you need to describe the feelings and material you know?
Lastly don't make him cry near the end, he should be more like in shock when he see's his reflection. (I mean if he cried the make up around his eyes will suddenly leak ya know?) And i forgot; remove the white leggings; she is only wearing white tights up her legs, not leggings. My bad. (Also what happened to these 'shirt sleeves' that held him back?)
Oh and a new thing; at the end I do like the Prince thing you added but as a writer you kind of rushed it and forgot some things. Such as have Peach not only do and say more girly things but also make her flirt with Mario (not in a slutty way but more in a cute way; like winking or saying something romantic like "It makes my heart flutter every time you save me my love" or something like that, and still make Ken be all like "I can't believe i said that! And to a guy no less! I'm a boy! This can't be real! This is a bad dream!")
But then when Mario brings out the ring box to propose to her Ken should be all like "Oh...please god no, don't tell me that's what I think it is!"
And when Mario says 'Will you marry me'
Ken - NOOOOOOOO!
Peach - Yes! Off course I'll marry you Mario! We'll have the best future together!
Then they go in for the kiss, and Ken's reaction to that.
And sense you've done the wedding I think you should add this new scene.
At the church it should cut to the brides dressing room with Peach in her wedding dress looking at herself in the mirror. It's the same as her normal pink dress but instead it's white, her tail is tied into a ponytail and she is wearing a vial over her head (don't know what it is called; you know brides have that white bit of cloth that hangs on the back of their head?)
Daisy and Rosalina are her bride maids and add some dialogue for the both of them. saying things that is a complement. Like "You look so beautiful Peach!" or something, and Peach replying back to them with some girly sentences.
While Ken admits that Peach does look beautiful from how he is seeing in the mirror he is still screaming that he needs to get out of here and it's all a bad dream.
Then the wedding, skip all the fowls but do mention something like "With every fowl that Ken is forced to say without his control, he felt like a piece of himself and his life as a man was slowly fading away" but you do have to mention the 'I do' parts.
Toadsworth is the priest mind you so add in the parts "Do you Mario take this Woman to be your lawfully wedded life, till death do you part?"Β
"I do"
"Do you Princess Peach take this Man to be your lawfully wedded life, till death do you part?"
Ken - "No don't say it!!!"
Peach - "I do!"
Ken - "Nooooo!"
Then I pronounce you man and wife; you may kiss the bride.
Then it's predicable what goes on in full out. Just add more dialogue.
But after they leave the church and go into the carriage, Peach needs to say something like "Well my darling husband, there is still one more gift I have for you"
"What's that my darling wife? More cake?"
*Giggle* don't be silly Mario, I mean our honeymoon together in bed!"
Ken - "Noooooooooooo!"
Mario - I'm looking forward to it.
OK hopefully this is the last time I'll be bugging you to finish the request. Your probably annoyed with it but hey, I'm a writer. Just trying to help ya. I am really really really sorry about putting to much in; it's just that every time you update this there will always have to be something to talk about and when you added that wedding scene; it gave me an idea. Sorry that you'll have to go through a lot of editing before that Zelda TG
P.S Mario has blue eyes.
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Welcome back; good to see that you are finally back to making requests and updating.
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Β Yea I'm back sry I haven't been working much
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Does this mean I'll finnaly get to see a peach tg update with everything I asked before the end of the month?
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Hopefully you can tell me ur other request and I'll make that happen too. I'm more of a morphing tg not clothing guy so this one is new to me
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And also to me the reason I decided to have clothing for Peach instead of morphing is I guess it's because Peach is pretty much the most girlest character one could think off and a guy who is 100% would never think not even deep down in the mind would want to wear, look, sound and talk girly like that so that transformation was more of a makeover one. She has the dress, the make-up and everything.
I will only ask those kind of transformations for either females that are to girly or just some tg clothes transformation for characters I think should be a clothes TG.
Examples of non-clothing TG would be someone like Misty from Pokemon or Samus from Metroid, you can use magic or something for those ones (but those aren't my requests yet)
P.S if your working on the update right now there is one more thing in the hair transformation you need to have; it needs to be something like "After the hair brush finished the styling, some hair spray suddenly started to spray his hair and covers up every spot of his brown hair turning into the blond hair color that peach has, leaving no trace of his brown hair left'
Do the same for the eye contacts; they replace his brown eyes and also remember he finds himself naked in the room and remember to read my other comments on this channel to meet my expectations.
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OK before i ask for the request: will u start working on that peach tg and remember to read everything i ask ya? And secondly have u played legend of Zelda?
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OK the tg I want is like this: its a twilight princess Zelda tg and this one is more of a morph than clothing. It's the same guy Ken when he buys a Twilight Princess which actually has Zelda and link finnaly gotten married (which is one couple he always wanted to happen) so just like the peach one he also gets sucked into the game in Zelda's room. What changes him is that there was a floating triforce in the room and he accedently touches it which gets imprinted on his hand.
Then it flashes and after that he finds himself naked, then it flashes again this time changing his body into that of a naked Zelda (even with loose hair sense she doesn't have hair ornaments to keep her hair in place for being naked and detailed transformation) and finally it flashes again to magically have Zelda's clothes appear on him one at a time.
So yeah still descriptive on clothing but you don't have to go into detail on how they got him.
They just appear one a time. For example the first clothing that slowley appears on him are Zelda's undergarments "when he looked down at his new naked body he felt something wrapped around his waist and covering his breasts and vagina and up his legs and that's when he noticed he was now wearing only just wearing bra,panties a corset and white tights with some heels that suddenly appeared on his body" and the rest depends on the picture I sent ya (except for the sword)
. Also to describe that "hey what's that on my face? Is that make-up? He said as he felt his eyes getting heavier and face getting made up by light layers of make-up" just remember add dialogue and reaction to Ken.
No dialogue should be like he is just standing there not caring what is happening.
After he is completely transformed at first he thinks its just a dream but then pinches himself and discovers that its not,he then freaks out a little and to prove that its real he touches one of his new breasts and then poof Zelda takes over
(let's just say with any tg request I ask, touching the breast is what makes the person loose control of her body and voice but still has memories of his former life) since Zelda doesn't act girly as peach I want her to do something like "what? What am I doing touching my breasts? My darling husband link will be home soon and I need to prepare that special award for him for tonight!" And as always on the inside ken is screaming something like "Help! Get me out of here!"
I want this picture to be used
P.S he has brown eyes so write something like soon as he saw the mirror, everything from top to bottom of his body was exactly like Zelda 100% showing no signs of him ever being Ken, even his eyes are now crystal blue instead of brown.
www.creativeuncut.com/gallery-β¦
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Sry man but the link you gave me doesn't send me to a specific picture it just sends me to a home page
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It takes you tot he creative uncut page right? Well if you go to the left and scroll down there should be a 'Hyrule Warriors'. Click on it and it should send you a list of character art; click on the one that says 'Zelda,TP' which is the Twilight Princess Zelda pic I want you to use.
But before you do this TG.....
Update that Peach TG first by READING EVERY COMMENT I SENT YA. I knw you were busy but I was really desperate to make sure I see the perfect peach tg before the end of the month. I've sent ya a crap ton of comments concerning so it so please read them all and add them to the story. It may take a while but it'll be worth the wait.
And when you do the Zelda tg; don't rush it. I mean i remember when you first 'finished' my peach tg and it bareley had anything i requested for until i bugged you over what I wanted. We all can't be good writers, heck I want to be a writer so i'm just trying to help ya.
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May I be ok if I use my own picture of Zelda from SSB (Super Smash Bros)
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Aight thnx love LoZ I'll do my best
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BTW I hopeΒ you don't find it annoying how I'm pestering you so much; especially how I keep changing the story and such (especially the last comment about me saying that you should update what you have edited so far to hold me over)
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