fartmaster5 In reply to ohrubberpup [2021-10-08 12:43:05 +0000 UTC]

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ohrubberpup In reply to fartmaster5 [2021-10-08 17:20:48 +0000 UTC]

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fartmaster5 In reply to AbsolonAnonymous [2017-08-09 00:58:00 +0000 UTC]

Yes, i do plan on continuing it, but I have a few other loose ends to tie up before i come back to that story.  What components did you really like?

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AbsolonAnonymous In reply to fartmaster5 [2017-08-09 01:25:29 +0000 UTC]

just the overall pacing was good. The attention to details was also very notable... And the perspective is also worth noting. All in all, good story!

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fartmaster5 In reply to AbsolonAnonymous [2017-08-22 00:07:39 +0000 UTC]

I'm glad to hear you liked all of those components in the novel.  The pacing was a struggle at times, working to get backstory, without going too far to bore people to death.  Attention to details is my forte my friend and something i work hard to generate to make the story come alive.  Too many times i have seen a story that is was done too quickly, turned into a quick porn skit and then lost the story.  Other tales start off so well, but then drop the plots to get to the inflation.  By then, the plot holes are so distracting that the blueberry inflation is not fun anymore.  Those details pain the picture, give the buildup and then try to deliver the satisfying ending that I'm shooting for.  As for the perspective, glad you liked those too.  Balancing between all the Loompas, Violet and her Mother were not easy to accomplish, and I still have things left to smooth out.  My continuation of the story will come in a different form, but don't worry... i have plans.  I need to get CWW done first.  Which i need to get on to.  

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AbsolonAnonymous In reply to fartmaster5 [2017-08-22 00:39:04 +0000 UTC]

I'll wait as long as I need to.

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fartmaster5 In reply to SBBeauregarde [2017-03-08 02:58:43 +0000 UTC]

Well thank you for the compliment.  I'm glad you enjoy the stories i work hard to develop and that it inspired your stories as well.  Please what do you like about my stories?  Which are you favorite and why?  What are your predictions for the next round of chapters to come?

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SBBeauregarde In reply to fartmaster5 [2017-03-08 07:13:24 +0000 UTC]

No problem. Personally I just love the detail and creativity in them all. My favourites are the wonka celeb tour. I predict more fantastic chapters lol.

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fartmaster5 In reply to SBBeauregarde [2017-03-08 11:17:16 +0000 UTC]

Interesting choice!  Most people are either fans of the 7 days of fruit or Scarlett chronicles.  Of the two who have met their fate, which girl did you think I did better with?

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SBBeauregarde In reply to fartmaster5 [2017-03-08 13:20:42 +0000 UTC]

That's interesting to hear. It was one if the series that influenced me to make my own. Personally I'm not into animal TF but I did really enjoy Taylor's inflation with chocolate. I thought that was well planned out in detail.

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fartmaster5 In reply to SBBeauregarde [2017-03-09 11:13:44 +0000 UTC]

Then hopefully you will like the next few installments.  There will be a lot of things to make a swell time.  I have another preparation chapter, but after that we'll have a ew punishments to dish out.    Anyone you are particularly rooting for?  Any types of changes you are looking for?

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SBBeauregarde In reply to fartmaster5 [2017-03-09 14:11:04 +0000 UTC]

Excellent to hear. Was rooting for Ariana but now I'm not sure.

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fartmaster5 In reply to SBBeauregarde [2017-03-10 04:20:43 +0000 UTC]

Didn't mean to eliminate your character in short work, just needed some material to get things going.    Take a look at the roster and let me know if anyone stands out!  

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SBBeauregarde In reply to fartmaster5 [2017-03-11 20:45:23 +0000 UTC]

Selena Gomez stands out to me.

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SBBeauregarde In reply to fartmaster5 [2017-03-10 11:20:20 +0000 UTC]

Ah it's fine no worries. I'll have a glance again

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fartmaster5 In reply to Zadinsherman [2016-08-11 02:16:19 +0000 UTC]

I did a random name and this came up.  I thought sure, that is a unique name and chose it.

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fartmaster5 In reply to glaciaberry [2016-01-15 01:53:02 +0000 UTC]

Thank you my friend.  Tell me what you have you been up to?  Have you enjoyed the story so far.  We are coming to the ending of this chapter and potentially trying a new spin on things with this story that may blend into nottacloud's art.  I am really working on this phase and finally getting to the juicing part.  We will see what is in store for our girls and I hope yo are enjoying the ride.  Do you have anything you are wanting to see or any questions you have been waiting to see answered that I might not have addressed?

Hope you are doing well!

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glaciaberry In reply to fartmaster5 [2016-01-15 03:17:49 +0000 UTC]

I'm not up to too much, just enjoying the final days of vacation before my last semester before getting my Associates Degree begins.

And yes, the story has been absolutely fantastic up to this point! It's funny, whenever I google Scarlett Beauregarde, google results has the Chronicles as a suggestion and it amazes me every time.

Super excited with what lies ahead, especially if Nottacloud is getting involved with the next phase. I just know you two will make something awesome.

If I had but one question, it would be whether you plan to ultimately tie this into that old story you had written about the plastic people trapping Violet and Scarlett in that giant dollhouse and transforming them> I've always felt awful in accidentally deleting that, and I'd be curious where'd you take that concept now.

Your work brings great joy to many people, and I am truly appreciative of what you do. Thank you and might the future hold grand things for you and your work.

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fartmaster5 In reply to glaciaberry [2016-01-16 03:32:53 +0000 UTC]

I can say I am glad that you are still enjoying the story.  It's been difficult to keep things on track, but I'm glad to see fans still liking the story.  I hope the actual juicing process lives up to the buildup, it's been hard.  Inflation parts are easier for me, but the juicing I try to get all the details without being repetitive.  As for the tie in to the dollhouse part i have been toying around with ideas throughout the day to do that, and I might have the idea that will allow me to do that.  It will be complicated though and in a manner I'm not sure will be as accepted as I hope.  I'll keep you posted on that.  

Once I get done with this story my next goal is to clean up and finish seven days of fruit and attempt to get that mess all taken care of. I'm not looking forward to getting back to that one and all the work it is going to require, but people will have to accept it for it is.  

After that I'm hoping to go back to the wonka celebrity tour and finish up that massive project before I go to any new projects.  It won't be easy, and may not be fun, but I'll try to get it done.  Heck I might even try to mix up those two as well.  

I have some new ideas in the works at the moment, all three having to do with pregnancy to try and spread my wings a little, but I don't even know if I can pursue those stories at the moment.  As for inflation stories, I'm going to have to take a big break after I get all of these tales done.  

Hope you are having a great start to the weekend 

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glaciaberry In reply to fartmaster5 [2016-01-16 03:47:07 +0000 UTC]

I'm glad to see that portion of the tale might not be lost after all. I'll keep my ears tuned in for that signal is and when you give the call. People will just have to understand the dollhouse piece is legacy work and is important to the story as a whole.

You have my support and assistance in your finishing of the other two pieces. If there is anything I can do to assist, let me know.

As for the future, I personally am not into pregnancy, but I wish you the best in your pursuits and might you find joy in writing something beyond your usual bounds.

Wishing you the best for a wonderful weekend as well.

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fartmaster5 In reply to adventuremaker16 [2015-02-03 13:24:02 +0000 UTC]

Hey dude, 

What's up?  Having a good winter?

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adventuremaker16 In reply to fartmaster5 [2015-02-03 22:18:09 +0000 UTC]

Good, just waiting on the new amiibos to come out

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fartmaster5 In reply to adventuremaker16 [2015-02-04 01:39:43 +0000 UTC]

Have you gotten the villager yet?

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adventuremaker16 In reply to fartmaster5 [2015-02-04 01:48:56 +0000 UTC]

Nope, trying to get the hero king, Marth, and the cosmic princess, Rosalina.

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fartmaster5 In reply to adventuremaker16 [2015-02-04 13:13:10 +0000 UTC]

Nice.  I'm waiting on Lucario myself.  

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adventuremaker16 In reply to fartmaster5 [2015-02-04 21:45:40 +0000 UTC]

Toys r us exclusive

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fartmaster5 In reply to adventuremaker16 [2015-02-05 03:10:31 +0000 UTC]

Lucario is?

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adventuremaker16 In reply to fartmaster5 [2015-02-05 03:17:43 +0000 UTC]

Yep
Rosalina is Target
Meta Knight is Best Buy
Shulk is Gamestop

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fartmaster5 In reply to glaciaberry [2015-02-03 13:25:12 +0000 UTC]

You too.  Sorry it tok me so long.  The last few months have been crazy and I'm starting to get back into the creative writing mode.  I'm hitting a major road blockage with this 7 days of fruit story.  I guess I'm losing interest in it when I had a lot of fun writing the scarlett chronicles.  How have you been?

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glaciaberry In reply to fartmaster5 [2015-02-03 19:03:38 +0000 UTC]

I've been rather well, trying to balance college life with the occasional creative writing here and there. It's a shame to hear about your block, what  are your plans for it at the moment though? Maybe some sort of dynamic shift could be the answer you're looking for?

Also, I'm glad to hear of your passion for Scarlett's arc! It gives me great hope to see how you plan to surprise with the next chapter.

With hope, you'll find what you're looking for and you know I'm here for support and advice when you need it.

Best Wishes,
Glacia

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fartmaster5 In reply to glaciaberry [2015-02-03 20:09:32 +0000 UTC]

The block comes from the fact of trying to work on multiple projects at once.  I'm working on a few books that are not about inflation, transformation, or the like and trying to get passion back into it is one of the things that is a challenge for me to overcome.  As for the actual story, it is all about trying to figure out how to balance my details with the story.  I've never done a progression that is slow before and the challenge of doing five girls at once is difficult to balance so that I may be able to capture the details.  I like the ideas we came up with last time where it is gradual progression, but there are a few proverbial holes in the mix that will make it hard to go by.  For instance... a change of clothes for them or let them stew in their filthy clothes?  Do i have them go naked to be realistic or will that deprive the people of the fabric busting goodness that are my series.  Something else rather difficult to decide is how to go about doing the conversations as they progress without getting repetitive.  I'm trying to mix a good number of dialogues together, but don't want to get boring.  Plus, there is also the task of will the girls be rescued or do they get stuck for the rest of their lives as juice producers?  I have a lot of that to work through and try to keep things going.  I also have one fan who is rather hooked on this story and really wants to see a male inflation for some reason.  I don't do male inflation stories at all, because I'm just not interested in that anatomy, in fact the one story I was working on for a strange request was one turning a chauvinistic male into a pregnant female.  I tried to go about the feelings and gradual development of the pregnancy, but got really bogged down by the details and the repercussions of the story, and kind of dropped it.  

Plus we also have the celebrity wonka tour I'm working on as well.  I haven't decided on that one if one girls should win or if they are all doomed to the fate of being a Wonka victim.  There is one part I'm starting to pull together, that involves gummy worms, but the execution of that many girls is getting to be a little difficult as well.  It's nuts with all the parts and projects and the truth is the tiring pace makes it difficult to keep the passion alive for writing these types of stories.  That is why i went to work on my other novels to try and get those to work.  

As for Scarlett, I have a lot of plans for that one, but am at a crossroad right now for one thing I'll ask your opinion on.  The whole 11-12 year old category is a little too uncomfortable for me at some points, and I'm wondering if I should find some way to age them up if anything happens to them.  Any thoughts on this?  

Thanks, 

Fartmaster, aka Rasenrob

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mellobread In reply to fartmaster5 [2015-02-11 01:53:22 +0000 UTC]

glad to see you mention scarlett chronicles! one of my favorites!

Glacia has some great suggestions- hope to see more of it someday

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glaciaberry In reply to fartmaster5 [2015-02-05 04:34:53 +0000 UTC]

I've taken some time to analyze the stories at this point and have these suggestions based on your issues:

Non-Inflation Books:
I can't speak to these too strongly seeing as I haven't yet had the chance to read them, but I'll venture a guess and say this should take highest priority until you are feeling too burned out. Crafting these could be troubling but you have the power of time on your side, take advantage of that.

7DoF:
Maybe break days down into short episodic stints so as to help the pacing. As for the clothes, if you feel the audience needs the fabric bursting then go for it. If you can get away with changing the clothes to something either fresh or stretchier, it might be easier to deal with, espcially of the fabric turns out to be something more like latex or whatever kept Violet's clothes intact.

CWT: I imagine twists and turns are abound in the planning, and Mrs. Fox has the obvious light as a villain. But who survives? That's right, Survive. There never was to be a winner, only one to barely shamble out of the massive death trap of a factory to alert the world of what horrors lurk inside. How about that? That should defile the two common tropes: one person wins and everyone dies.

Scarlett Chronicles: I made an extension a while ago for Age Progression so long as it wasn't too extreme (Elderly People). Age Regression was allotted as well with the same idea (No babies). I hope this should prove useful, especially as our cast still rests in the Inventing Room.

As such, it may be best to slow yourself down and prioritize the stories again based on passion. What do your feel about each and is it time to make like a Disney movie at let some things go? You have my full support on any decision you make and I shall remain beside you in spirit to assist in any way I can. I hope these thoughts can be made useful to you and wish you the best of luck in your pursuits.

Best Wishes,
Glacia

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fartmaster5 In reply to adventuremaker16 [2014-05-25 10:55:15 +0000 UTC]

Hey, I am working on it now, but please read my newest journal entry and spread the word to any of the other readers that you think may like my stories.  I'm working hard to improve my writing, and need people to read my latest project while I work on this one.  

Hope all is well, 

Master of Farts

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