kisara232 In reply to thebannanaking [2014-01-17 20:07:34 +0000 UTC]

NP! it was good!

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kisara232 In reply to hesxmyxinu [2013-10-20 19:53:55 +0000 UTC]

aw thank you that is so sweet!

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kisara232 In reply to gamera68 [2013-10-20 19:54:36 +0000 UTC]

no prob it deserved it all the way!

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gamera68 In reply to kisara232 [2013-10-20 23:55:51 +0000 UTC]

Thank you once again.
That means a lot to me.

The next chapter will be out next weekend.
Anytime between Oct. 25th and 28th.

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kisara232 In reply to gamera68 [2013-10-24 01:08:45 +0000 UTC]

ohhhhh i cant wait!

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gamera68 In reply to kisara232 [2013-10-24 01:28:42 +0000 UTC]

Oh is that so? LOL.
Thanks. That means a lot to me.

If I may ask, what has been your favorite chapter(s) or scene(s) so far and why?
(Out of all 29 chapters)
No pressure though

I am always open to possible story arcs as long as it fits my original plot to some extent. ^_^

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kisara232 In reply to gamera68 [2013-10-24 18:36:16 +0000 UTC]

I have only fully read up to about chapter 6 or 7. 

But if i had to choose a favorite(from what ive read) it would be when moka kicks kurumus ass! And when tsukune and moka actually kiss. That was my one problem with the anime, they never kiss!

But i cant wait to finish them all. I just need to make the time!

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gamera68 In reply to kisara232 [2013-10-24 22:48:52 +0000 UTC]

Oh, I see. Then you have a long way to go and are in for some more surprises

LOL, yeah that chapter was fun to write (A Party Crasher and A Vampire)
I was never really a fan of Kurumu's as she tried WAY to hard to get Tsukune's attention, LOL.

Oh yes, I totally agree. They never got to that stage in the anime.

Well, that's understandable. Just take your time and enjoy them

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kisara232 In reply to gamera68 [2013-10-26 02:26:07 +0000 UTC]

I must agree to that as well. Kurumu and Mizore always tried so hard. But he never even gave them the time of day.

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gamera68 In reply to kisara232 [2013-10-26 05:26:50 +0000 UTC]

Thanks. I do my research, LOL.

I have read the entire manga so far up to, and including the most recent story arc.
I also incorporate all that into my fan-fic through the use of flashbacks and memories.

Kurumu did 'charm' him a few times in the manga against her better judgement.

He broke free though once and decided to play along, so she wouldn't feel bad
for 'forcing' her love onto him by playing 'house' with her.

And Mizore actually froze him in a block of ice and dragged him back to her village.

So overall, he never had any real romantic feelings or interest towards either of them.

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kisara232 In reply to gamera68 [2013-10-26 20:33:19 +0000 UTC]

Ha oh my god. Thats so true.

I have only seen the anime so my knowledge of it is limited to that. 

But i have skimmed through random volumes. 

I cant wait to read more!

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gamera68 In reply to kisara232 [2013-10-27 00:04:08 +0000 UTC]

Yep, it happened. The anime is far superior and covers a lot more
ground and story as well as character development

Oh I see
Oh okay then, LOL.

Thanks so much. Take your time and I always welcome feedback.

I'm nearly done with the next chapter (29) and plan on having it up before Monday.

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kisara232 In reply to gamera68 [2013-10-27 04:39:21 +0000 UTC]

oh sweet!

Ill have hurry up and read more so i can catch up

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gamera68 In reply to kisara232 [2013-10-27 23:21:50 +0000 UTC]

Yeah, I meant the MANGA is far supeior than the anime, my bad.

Yes, you should, LOL

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kisara232 In reply to gamera68 [2013-10-31 00:06:05 +0000 UTC]

Ha good job!

I thought that was kinda odd, my friends that read the manga almost always say that the manga is better then the anime.

I read another chapter.

Very well done. 

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gamera68 In reply to kisara232 [2013-10-31 03:24:30 +0000 UTC]

Thanks
Yes, that what I meant to say, originally. LOL.
The R+V manga is far superior, especially in 'Season 2'

Oh, really now? Which one if I may ask?

Thanks, it's not easy writing new material every week,
even though I know which direction the story is heading

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kisara232 In reply to gamera68 [2013-11-01 19:30:57 +0000 UTC]

LOL  

It was chapter 7 and OH MY GOD!!!!

I absolutely LOVED it!!!!!! 

It was definitely my favorite chapter so far.

I cant wait to read the next chapter!

 Im sure its not easy. 

I know for a fact i could never to that!

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gamera68 In reply to kisara232 [2013-11-01 21:42:06 +0000 UTC]

Yeah

Oh is that so? Well, you're in for more surprises down the road,
and I'm waiting to hear what you have to say regarding those chapters.

That's true, and I do try.
It takes a lot of patience, as well as practice.

Most chapters can take anywhere from a few hours to several days (3-4) to knock out.

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kisara232 In reply to gamera68 [2013-11-02 18:17:37 +0000 UTC]

Well I read to  chapter 11.

And as before. I loved it. 

I can't believe that the parents know the secret now.

That was a big shocker, but i also think it was handled very well.

I'm sure it does

 I have tried to write in the past but i'm just not very good.

I can get the plot line down but i end up driving myself crazy.

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gamera68 In reply to kisara232 [2013-11-02 20:55:43 +0000 UTC]

I see

Thanks again. It was NOT easy to pull of though.
More surprises down the road

Well, in every other fan-fic his parents do know, but I
handled it differently by having both 'sides' of her personality 'merge'.
There is no "inner" or "outer", so Moka is Moka.

She eventually learns to handle her powers more so, now that she is
for all intents and purpose, completely 'unsealed'. As in no more being 'sealed up.'
She still has emotional breakdowns or outbursts, but Tsukune is there to help her out
and calm her down, usually by offering her blood.

Oh, wait until they perform the Blood Bonding Ceremony.
It gets quite interesting after that

Yes, as a matter of fact, I just started on chapter 30 today.
Well, believe it or not, I was not very good when I started but I have learned a lot in the past year.
It just takes a lot of patience and imagination. I drive myself crazy sometimes, then I take a break.
Most chapters I might spend a few hours on, and some, several days.

Just pace yourself. It helps me anyway

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kisara232 In reply to gamera68 [2013-11-02 22:07:10 +0000 UTC]

Thanks for the advise.

I will keep trying. 

I can't wait to read more

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gamera68 In reply to kisara232 [2013-11-02 23:23:37 +0000 UTC]

Anytime, b/c I totally understand where you're coming from.
I am more than happy to support another aspiring writer.

It also helps to have a GOOD Beta reader who knows the subject matter
that your fan-fic is based on (ie: Rosario Vampire) who can lend a hand
with plot as well as go over and proof-read the chapter before you actually
publish it online.

They usually check for spelling, grammar, punctuation and the like.
Some Beta's do all the above and may also help with certain scenes
or fill in any unintentional plot holes to make sure the story "flows" smoothly.

Thanks. Please take your time and enjoy it.
You still have a way to go before you catch up.

Ch. 30 should be out by tomorrow once I wrap it up and have it Beta'd.

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kisara232 In reply to gamera68 [2013-11-03 03:54:15 +0000 UTC]

wow thanks.

Another one of my friends is a writer and i beat i could get her to proof read.

That will help a lot.

I cant wait to read more!

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gamera68 In reply to kisara232 [2013-11-03 05:05:22 +0000 UTC]

Anytime. It's not a problem, really
I was there once and I get that way from time to time.

That would be great if she could give you a hand
as long as she knows and understands the 'source material'
your fic is based upon

Oh it will help out immensely, believe me.

I wouldn't be at the level I am now compared to a year ago if it weren't for my beta readers.
I'm still not 'the best' I can be, but I do learn a lot from every chapter I've written before.

Like I mentioned earlier, just take your time to plot out your story and know where it's going to 'end up' at.
And please take your time writing. When I first picked up my R+V fic (after 1 year as it was originally a one-shot)
I used to knock out 2 chapters a week and I ended up nearly knocking myself out from exhaustion.

Now I just take my time and write one per week or every 5 days

Thanks. Ch. 30 is up on fanfiction (dot) net

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kisara232 In reply to Atelier-Cynamon [2013-10-16 19:01:25 +0000 UTC]

i adore the icons!

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Atelier-Cynamon In reply to kisara232 [2013-10-16 19:04:00 +0000 UTC]

thanks ^^

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kisara232 In reply to LaraBLN [2013-10-08 19:58:24 +0000 UTC]

no prob your stuff is really good!

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LaraBLN In reply to kisara232 [2013-10-11 16:30:49 +0000 UTC]

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kisara232 In reply to LaraBLN [2013-10-11 19:11:31 +0000 UTC]

nice icons

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kisara232 In reply to LaraBLN [2013-09-26 13:50:51 +0000 UTC]

love the image icon!!!!

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kisara232 In reply to Casadriss [2013-09-14 17:30:14 +0000 UTC]

yep no prob

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