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mayonaka19
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[2013-11-21 01:40:35 +0000 UTC]
(United States)
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Favourites: 1173; Deviations: 429; Watchers: 199
Watching: 179; Pageviews: 24562; Comments Made: 19658; Friends: 179
# Interests
Favorite movies: horror. AnimeFavorite TV shows: man vs wild, criminal minds
Favorite bands / musical artists: Nightwish, Within temptation, opera, instrumental
Favorite books: El Jarron Azul, El Dador de Suenos, Rich dad Poor dad.
Favorite writers: Camilo cruz,
Favorite games: Resident Evil, Naruto
# Comments
Comments: 1156
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Thank you so much for watching us!! It means a lotΒ Β
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No problem. I really like your art
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This is so kind! I am glad you like it!
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Thanks.. Im sorry for the long reply.
I been busy.
Plus my com died..
Havent been on line in a while or able to post any drawings
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I can understand that.
So have I.
I never knew your computer died. Β
Join the club.
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Hahaha.. Yes. Still there
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Same here.
My laptop has been a piece of garbage lately that the battery is out of power and that if it comes unplugged, it will shut off. And I hope to get it fixed one day.
I've been thinking about going on a hiatus for a while.
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Im actually coming back from one..
Tho idk how much i can do with out a com
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I could tell.
Tell me about it. I've been on one ever since about 2006.
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welcomeΒ today was mine as well I have one other person I watch we share a birthday with well anyway gope it was an awesome one
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hiya Mayo, I just wanted to give you some critique of your art! hope your fine with it.
(ps if I don't reply, I'm probably busy, and please don't mind the swearing)
so UM, unless you want me to critique a specific drawing then I will, but for now, I'm going to critique the main issue of your artwork.
1. I see you're using colored pencils, and they can be hard to color/blend with, and I can see it in almost all of your artworks, I can see white parts in the coloring, and considering most of your color palette is black, I'd say try your best to color it all in as best as possible, as by using the color black, you're putting more emphasis on the lighter areas and that can look blotchy in the final product.
2. try not to limit your colors, try using more different tones, don't just use black, and have some variety in your coloring, colors that are interesting yet complements each other.
3. line work, the main thing I noticed as well is line work, it's very messy and shaky, which is not a good thing, try lining with your entire arm not just your wrist, but if you still want to use your wrist, try lining in quick strokes to avoid any shaking to appear, lining brands that I recommend are "Copic" and "micron".
4. proportions, your proportions are okay at best, try looking at reference pictures on Google, so on and so forth, watch anatomy videos as they will help you improve a lot.
5. characters, of course as a character designer myself, I'm going to give you some tips and advice on your characters.
Yes, they are interesting in their own way, but your use of black in your characters palette is a little boring don't you think? Or black and neon red, yes they go very well together, but please take in account that colors can represent a character, such as blue can represent calmness and wisdom, while red is a romantic or aggressive color, so on and so forth.
but being completely honest, your characters come off as bland, as characters they should be able to stand out as their own person, slight differences don't change that fact.
cliches: I've noticed that your characters are very cliche, design wise and personality wise, to make a good character you need to give them a moral... give them a purpose, treat them like people in real life, as your self "why can she breathe fire?" "why is she like this" etc.
Also if you are unable to take critique from a 14-year-old artist then bravo *claps* bravo.
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Wow...
Well thanks alot.. I really appreciate it all. And that u took your time for this..
Yes.. Everything u say its true i can see that. And i have been looking more into real anatomy bodies to help.
I just havent been able to post as much cause i been busy. Hopefully i can submit this art soon. And u can tell me what you think?
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um your welcome I guess, (btw if you need help with anatomy I can lend a hand, just send me a note or something)
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Mayoooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo hello
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hhheeeeeeeeyyyyyyy!!!! XD whats up ?sorry for the late replyΒ
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not too much, just being busy at some stuff of the university plus some drawing practices
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Ooh practice how?
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Making a lot of sketches i have not scanned or taken pictures of....and i mean...it's almost like 50 sketches
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hahahahaΒ wow..
i am the same XD
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Thank you 
I appreciate it
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You're welcome.
Anytime.
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Eeeeeeekkk thank you!!
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Happy Birthday, Love!!! I hope you have the best day you can!!! *kiss*
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Thank you!
Means a lot ^^
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Hope you had a nice day ^^
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Aaawww thank yooouuuuuu!!!!
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Toxic: -is Infront of Scarlett- Scarlett it's been a while...After you lleft and...i got a new sister now..
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Scarlett: i had to..
Im sure u understood that.
And im glad to hear you found someone to keep you company ^^
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Toxic:...-hugs her tight and kissing her cheek -I missed you but...thank you sis
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