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missingyou123 ♀️ [15252950] [2010-09-29 00:45:58 +0000 UTC] "Delia" (United States)

# Statistics

Favourites: 9; Deviations: 16; Watchers: 9

Watching: 5; Pageviews: 1428; Comments Made: 11; Friends: 5


# Comments

Comments: 15

FreedomForevermore [2011-05-02 22:14:24 +0000 UTC]

NAT! ...................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................hi.

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MissMad-E [2011-02-17 20:25:58 +0000 UTC]

Hi!!

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Nothing219 [2011-02-12 17:24:56 +0000 UTC]

Hola chika! Love you!

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missingyou123 In reply to Nothing219 [2011-02-12 17:28:58 +0000 UTC]

Love ya too!!!

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Itsumou [2011-02-06 19:44:11 +0000 UTC]

Okay, so, I read through all your poetry. One thing you might want to avoid is writing the same shit over and over again. It's okay to vent once in a while, but you need to scrap it when it gets to this point. To be blunt, none of this is very engaging. Even with poetry where you vent, editing is important. If you don't want to go through the effort, you should keep this type of thing in your notebook.

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Nothing219 In reply to Itsumou [2011-02-12 17:24:24 +0000 UTC]

Kinda rude

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Itsumou In reply to Nothing219 [2011-02-12 18:53:28 +0000 UTC]

Kinda true.

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Nothing219 In reply to Itsumou [2011-02-13 17:28:50 +0000 UTC]

Your mean!>:C

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Itsumou In reply to Nothing219 [2011-02-13 19:05:30 +0000 UTC]

I'm just critiquing. why you mad for?

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Nothing219 In reply to Itsumou [2011-02-13 21:37:11 +0000 UTC]

cause your being mean!!

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Itsumou In reply to Nothing219 [2011-02-13 22:44:08 +0000 UTC]

"Because you're being mean."
That's exactly what I'm talking about. English is not a hard language to grasp. If you want people to respect your writing, actually put work into it. No one is going to hand you sugar cookies for some half-baked effortless whine about your life.

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Nothing219 In reply to Itsumou [2011-02-15 00:47:41 +0000 UTC]

Maybe her life is harder then you think. I just think that you should be ooen minded.

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Itsumou In reply to Nothing219 [2011-02-15 02:00:49 +0000 UTC]

I think it's fine. Certainly no one here has had a rougher life than Poe, and he still found a way to get variation in his work. Same with many authors who survived the Holocaust. Statistically speaking, you aren't that special. No one is. She has to work on her work, refine it, and then it is art. Right now it's just whining.

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steventheboar [2011-02-01 05:41:21 +0000 UTC]

Thanks for the fav. [link]

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Unknown219 [2011-01-20 01:56:45 +0000 UTC]

Hey!!

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