neenabluegirl In reply to Kallian91 [2012-11-17 16:26:19 +0000 UTC]

You're welcome

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neenabluegirl In reply to TheGweny [2012-08-15 00:51:42 +0000 UTC]

You're welcome. You're stuff is amazing

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neenabluegirl In reply to Liva-Wilborg [2012-07-10 23:52:32 +0000 UTC]

Hi!
Your story was amazing. I loved how you wrote Shaun and Desmond. I can't get enough of that pairing. (I hope you enjoy the starfleet group )

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Liva-Wilborg In reply to neenabluegirl [2012-07-11 01:35:26 +0000 UTC]

Thanks a lot - and yeah, I like them too, they are so wonderfully... normal... compared to all the others, but I'm only just beginning to discover this pairing.

I'm sort of new to the Kirk Spock slash too (I'm sort of new to slash fic all in all, I only just discovered that it existed last Christmas) but I'm really looking forward to exploring the group

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neenabluegirl In reply to Liva-Wilborg [2012-07-13 03:41:07 +0000 UTC]

Normal in an odd sense of the term. I discovered Assassin's Creed not too long ago and after marathoning through the games, I feel in love with them.

Kirk/Spock is an amazing pairing to ship. I'm reading an awesome K/S fic now that has completely taken over my life. [link] Check it out, if you want to have your world totally rocked by K/S

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Liva-Wilborg In reply to neenabluegirl [2012-07-13 10:36:22 +0000 UTC]

Thanks a lot, amazing. I'm going to check it out!

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neenabluegirl In reply to DeathLife97 [2012-05-18 00:10:18 +0000 UTC]

Thanks!

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neenabluegirl In reply to TheLastCybertronian [2011-11-22 21:04:38 +0000 UTC]

You're welcome

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neenabluegirl In reply to CrownOfMagic [2011-04-29 18:54:49 +0000 UTC]

You're welcome. It was really great writing

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CrownOfMagic In reply to neenabluegirl [2011-04-29 23:34:02 +0000 UTC]

Thanks again!

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neenabluegirl In reply to djap-chan [2010-12-31 17:19:33 +0000 UTC]

You're welcome

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neenabluegirl In reply to blackfoxlady [2010-12-31 17:20:43 +0000 UTC]

At least it sounds like you had fun with the list. It's okay that you took your time, I've been really busy. I can't believe how occupied my family is keeping me. Thanks for making this list, I shall go over and look at it now

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blackfoxlady In reply to neenabluegirl [2011-01-01 09:30:03 +0000 UTC]

Oh yes,I had a wonderful time,cause I got to see a bunch of my favorites again,AND I was doing something for a friend...It was a win-win situation!!

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neenabluegirl In reply to djap-chan [2010-12-07 04:17:03 +0000 UTC]

Your comic was adorable. I didn't see any glaring typo so its all good. I can look at it again if you want and tell you if I see anything small but I didn't notice anything too bad. It was adorable and it made me go "AW!".
I needed to work too much :S But I got my term paper done so all is good, and my oral exam in Japanese is over so a lot of stress is past until next week when I have finals.

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djap-chan In reply to neenabluegirl [2010-12-09 06:45:07 +0000 UTC]

Hey thanks, I finally reposted the comic after correcting the mistakes I saw, but when you say you didn't see any glaring mistakes I beieve you and won't bother you with it. I will bother you with other stuff instead, as I want to ask a question: You remember my story Red Die? I didn't get any good comments on it and one saying that it was pretty boring in the middle, so I wondered if I should rewirte it. So when I get the time, I'll have a second look at it and I wanted to ask, if you could give me some advide on what to change to make it less boring. Anything would be helpfull. Oh and I probably will have a second look at Oral abilities too, because I wrote it in the same fashion and don't want to make the same mistake again.

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neenabluegirl In reply to djap-chan [2010-12-15 03:57:57 +0000 UTC]

I am in the middle of Exam week but I would love to help you out. I will look over Red Die and Oral Abilities tomorrow in between my finals. I'm sorry. I feel like I'm avoiding deviantart and our comments but I've been really busy with studying. I will be done in two days though. So if you can wait until then, I will be all yours and I can help you as much as you want.

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djap-chan In reply to neenabluegirl [2010-12-15 21:00:56 +0000 UTC]

Please, don't worry so much about this. I haven't answered all your old messages yet myself, because I don't have the time at the moment. It's annyoing but it will get better! I wish you much luck for your exam week

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neenabluegirl In reply to djap-chan [2010-12-31 17:33:30 +0000 UTC]

Thanks for the luck I got good grades on all my exams so I'm happy. Have you had exams lately?

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djap-chan In reply to neenabluegirl [2011-01-01 09:31:05 +0000 UTC]

No, I will have mine around February and April. It starts with an important presentation on 3rd February, and I haven't done anything for it yet *sigh* I've been lazy those last days but I think it was very important that I finally came down a little from my stress level. It was my first week of holiday since July 2009 after all, so I enjoyed it. I just wish I would have had more time to write and draw.

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neenabluegirl In reply to djap-chan [2011-01-01 21:55:42 +0000 UTC]

At least you have a month to get it done. What is your important presentation about? So you enjoyed your holiday? I'm glad. I wish you got more time to relax. And I wish you had more time to write and draw, though it's for completely selfish reasons Even though I can't draw I wish I had more time to write. I still need to write my Fargo/Larry. :S

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djap-chan In reply to neenabluegirl [2011-01-03 09:34:16 +0000 UTC]

Yeah, I enjoyed my holiday very much. I have still one more week to go, but I'll use that one for working on my university stuff. I'd wish too I had more time to write I still haven't finished the Conworth story, but I finished at least the first smex scene. You'll probably be happy to hear that there will be a second one. Oh, and you asked what it's about: Uhm, actually the usual, I think. Blood, Smex, Bickering. There isn't much else with those too, is there? The main idea is that they have established something like an actual relationship by dating once a week on Sundays. I was just in the mood for Conworth smex so I ended up with this drool: Thanks for beta reading my other two stories by the way. I'm glad you liked the Sherlock Holmes one. It was fun to write oit, although it cost me countless hours with rewatching the scenes, and translating all those special words. The last time I had to use a dictionary so often was when I wrote that Lace-thingy with Shakespeare and Skinny...

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neenabluegirl In reply to djap-chan [2011-01-21 01:02:35 +0000 UTC]

Well, if you ever want to write another Sherlock Holmes fic just let me know and I will assist you in finding words. Like I said, you could always leave some words in German and I can help you find the best fitting English word. It has an added bonus of helping me practice my German. I really liked your Conworth story. Worth might be considered an ass, but I can't help but like him. He is pretty funny. Don't you just love dictionaries, though They are so much fun! *sarcasm*

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djap-chan In reply to neenabluegirl [2011-01-21 07:05:42 +0000 UTC]

Thanks for the HinabN story. Great work like always, what would I do without you? It feels really bad when I puplish stories without having you had a look at them before... still, 20 pages? that's not long. If you ever get the time, check out my Storm Hawks story 'Doing the right thing' (around 70 pages) or the X-Men story 'The benefits of sharing the same sleeping place' (around 65 pages) these are 'long stories' for one-shots
You will get some more Babylon 5 stories from me soon, I finished already two other (but these shorter. i tried something new and one of them translated I in German (which felt odd) I could sent this one first, so you can practice and then I can send you the English version and you can check if you understood it right. It's an easy story with easy grammar I'd say. Nothing fancy.
Luce is Worth's name, I might have totally misunderstood 'gluttony' and I meant wordless not worthless in that one sentence. Thanks for pointing these things out to me. I'll answer more later, gotta go now

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neenabluegirl In reply to djap-chan [2011-02-02 05:07:17 +0000 UTC]

Without me, you would probably get your stories up sooner But I'm glad I'm valued. I don't like publishing my stories without reading them at least 3 times. All right, 20 pages isn't that bad, but take it from my perceptive. It takes me about an hour to carefully look at 6 pages... It's going to take me a while to get through 20 pages. 70 and 65 are amazing lengths for one shots. Impressive. I'll have to look at them one day. I didn't know Worth's first time. You're welcome, I'm glad I could help out. I'll get to your stories tomorrow! I already finished my homework for Thursday so I should have a ton of time to look at your stories

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djap-chan In reply to neenabluegirl [2011-02-02 16:26:46 +0000 UTC]

Don't ever think you were not valued. I'm so happy that you actually have the patience to look after my stories, I still don't know how to make that up to you properly. So if you know anything, please just tell me!
I can imagine how hard it must be to beta such long stories. I also need a lot of time to watch through your hints and corrections, before I can post it.
So, perhaps I should not tell you that my next Babylon 5 story will be even longer, right? I want to rewrite the whole seaon 5 ending and with that I also want to write about actually four different pairings... I think it will be at least 40 pages in the end, but probably even more... Do you even want to have a go at it?

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neenabluegirl In reply to djap-chan [2011-02-03 05:19:16 +0000 UTC]

I don't know how you have the patience to wait for me to get your stories back. Other than that, I just think it is amazing that you are helping me with German. That is all the pay back I need.
I've never had anyone beta a story for me, so I don't know what its like to go through something that someones sent back to me.
Of course I want to have a go at it. I don't mind long stories. Have you started it? Just so you know, it is your job to educate me on Babylon 5. It is kind of hard to help look through your stuff when I don't know the person's voice. So you will just need to compile all the things I need to know so I can help you out better. That why I can look through your 40 page story with ease.

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djap-chan In reply to neenabluegirl [2011-02-03 17:04:12 +0000 UTC]

EVERYTHING you need to know? Really? You did NOT just give me ample time to rant about my latest fave couple, did you? Don't get this wrong, but...Have you lost your mind??? Don't you have a life? That could take years...
No, just kidding. What do you want to know? I don't know where to start...
At first they are just bickering all the time, being ambassadors of their respective people. Then Londo gets a new associate, Mr. Morden, who works for the shadows. It breaks the balance between their two races and finally the Centauri bomb the planet of the Narn (with weapons which are not allowed by the way) Of course they pretty much hate each other than. Then G'Kar gets his hands on a drug that brings the one who takes it psi abilities. He so much as 'rapes' Londo's mind, wanting to know all his secrets before he kills him. But what he encounters is an epiphany. That's when he starts to change from ambassador and warrior to priest. He writes the 'Book of G'Kar' in the cell, in which he is paying for his assault on Londo. When he emerges, he once works together with Londo to kill one of his enemies and Londo frees as 'payment for that' 2000 Narns. A while after that G'Kar leaves the safety of the station (he is a wanted leader of his race by the Centauri) and gets caught and is delivered to the Centauris insane emperor Cartagia. He tortures him and tries to break him, plucks out his one eye (which is the reason why I often write about only one red eye, or write about a red and a blue eye (the blue one is an artificial one he'll get a short time later)) Londo doesn't want that to happen. G'Kar has to him always been a worthy oponent and he hates to see him like this. With this insane ruler they are heading for destruction of their whole race, so in the end, londo and G'Kar make a deal. G'Kar helps Londo to kill Cartagia and in exchange Londo promises to free the Narn. Both keep their promises and both end up on B5 after that again. In the last season, they finally start to work together for the new alliance under Sheridan and start to hang out together. In the end G'Kar is the bodyguard for Londo who will be the next elected emperor (he claims that he does it to see just the looks on the faces of the royal court) In one of the last episodes G'Kar tells Londo, that he forgives him, for what he did to his people. Londo becomes emperor and G'Kar leaves with Lyta Alexander (and here starts my latest story because the ending is kinda lame)
What else to tell you... Londo loves brivari (drinking alcohol) has two hearts and six brachiarti (which is the sexual organ for a Centauri - he sometimes uses them to cheat at poker though ) Londo had three wifes and he was madly in love with a dancer/slave called Adira Tyree. G'Kar had once an on/off affair with Londo's third wife.
What else do you need to know?
Oh, and I'm trying to do the accent right, but I don't think I'm doing any good at it. I think Londo's accent is quite unique, if you have any help for me... links will follow in another message

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neenabluegirl In reply to djap-chan [2011-02-04 02:33:54 +0000 UTC]

I know I gave you an impossible task, but after all the clips you've sent me I feel like I need to know anything you find important, especially since I'm going to beta more of your Babylon 5 stories.

You sent me that one where G'Kar has an epiphany. So, he is using a drug to steal Londo's secrets from him? Then he sees his dad and another Narn and it changes him? I looked on Wikipedia and I saw that G'Kar turned into a religion leader of sorts. In the clip you sent me from Epiphany who is standing behind Londo and G'Kar before the clip ends?
How long does Babylon 5 last? You said you wanted to rewrite the end of the 5th season, is that the last one? So is it only in the last season that they start to become friends?
G'Kar has an affair with Londo's third wife? I read somewhere that Londo isn't particularly close to any of his wives anyway. But that was from wikipedia, so who knows how correct that is.
I think you did the accent fine, it reminded me of Chekov, from Star Trek. I tried to help you with it though in one of your fics. if you try to do it again, I'll help as best as I can.
Thanks for sending all those links by the way. Quite a few of them made me giggle

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djap-chan In reply to neenabluegirl [2011-02-04 14:19:23 +0000 UTC]

Yes there is a drug involved, which also makes him more violent while giving him psi abilities to enter Londo's mind. The figure behind G'Kar is called Kosh. He's a Vorlon (and one of the good ones.) He is the one who practically helps along with the epiphany. You see his 'real' form too (at least the real form for G'Kar) It looks like an angel with a Narn head. He makes G'Kar change by shoing him his father and stuff.Babylon 5 has officially 5 seasons. there followed another series (Crusade) which I never saw and there are also alt least three more movies (but it could be even more and I only saw two of them so far)
As for becoming friends it finally starts around middle of season 4 but they work together in different things since middle season three (after G'Kar's assault on Londo).
No Londo doesn't like any of his first three wifes particularly much, which is why he wants to divorce them. He keeps only his first wife, because she is openly rude to him (the other's are nice to him in his face but the other way around they are extremely mean. So the first one is the only one who at least is honest and also saves his life.) Yeah, G'Kar dates Londo's third wife but i think just to spite him (although he is really quite fond of Centauri woman. I can't blame him, I like their looks too )
I'll definitely continue using Londo's accent. I'm thinking of doing it in the first one too. When I wrote delicacy I did not know about his accent yet because so far I had nobody write it yet and I hadn't seen the English version yet.
I have seen most of season three and four by now in English (I bought them on DVD). I gotta say I love Londo's accent.

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neenabluegirl In reply to djap-chan [2011-03-12 01:36:16 +0000 UTC]

Kosh? So, he appears in different forms and he helped G'Kar get his epiphany? I didn't notice he had a Narn head, maybe I'll have to rewatch that clip. I don't know if I've ever really seen a Centauri woman, I'll have to google them. Do they have the same kind of hair? I can see G'Kar dating Londo's wife just to spite him. It's actually quite funny. So you own them in English? That must be nice. It would make it a lot easier to get the accent down. I love Londo's accent as well. It makes me smile

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djap-chan In reply to neenabluegirl [2011-03-12 07:20:22 +0000 UTC]

If you saw 'Brokeback Babylon' on Youtube, you've already seen a Centauri woman. They are bald except for a ponytail. Here's a link to Adira - a dancer that stole Londo's heart (and some files from him ) but she was murdered in season three or four...

[link]

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neenabluegirl In reply to djap-chan [2011-04-15 23:11:46 +0000 UTC]

Adira was a dancer? They were cute together. It was adorable how much he liked her. I don't know if I ever saw a Centauri woman before. But I don't think I've watched Brokeback Babylon yet. Maybe I have, it's been so long since I've watched anything on youtube for Babylon 5 that I can't remember.

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djap-chan In reply to neenabluegirl [2011-04-28 16:45:21 +0000 UTC]

Okay, here you go then

[link]

Yes, Adira was a dancer and actually a slave girl that stole stuff from Londo. He found out, but was still in love with her. It was cute (for hets ^^)

Oh and I found this mash-up and instantly loved it - it's done really good ^^

[link]

I'm a little sad that we don't have the time to talk more, but I guess it can't be helped. Hopefully that will change again

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neenabluegirl In reply to djap-chan [2011-07-03 05:39:07 +0000 UTC]

I know, I know. I'm just finally getting around the watching the videos but my internet has been slow so I kind of avoid youtube. But can I saw that Brokeback Babylon was amazing! I so love that you sent me that video.

That Babylon 5/Star Trek video was awesome. The timing was so wonderful. Now I have an urge to watch both B5 and ST XI, why must you do this to me?! It's pretty cool how good the two of them fit.

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djap-chan In reply to neenabluegirl [2011-07-04 05:14:43 +0000 UTC]

I'm glad the videos pleased you. I will try to explain most of the words in my story to you. Which ones do you want to know?

Denn'Bok - the pike they use to fight

Ma'Fela - Male lover

Mala - Husband

Zha'Fela - perfect mate (regardless of gender)

Min'aia Den'shok (I hope they are spelled like this) Warrior Caste - Minbari have a system of three casts, worker, religious and warrior

N'Thil'Zha (I consequently misspell this one) It means leader of the 'Rangers'

Anla'Shok - 'Ranger' (word for word: 'those who wtach the enemy') - if you want it's a fourth caste: mix between warrior and religious caste. At some point Delenn is the leader of those

Shok'Na: leader/captain of a star vessel

Shok'Na Li: Second in command

Alyt: captain of a starship of the Sharlin Class (=those ships that look like giant fishes) and under some circumstances also leader of the clan. The Warrior Caste has five big clans (other casts have more, but the warrior casts consists of only 5% of the minbari population. They have special rights, believes and very selsom intermarry with other casts) Neroon is a Star Rider, Shakiri is a Moon Shield, there are also the Wind swords (and right at the moment I forgot about the other two ^^)

Shai Alyt: Leader of the Warrior Caste (but no Satai)

Satai: member of the 'Grey Council' the government of the Minbari. 3 persons of each caste (initially, Delenn changes that after the civil war) -> 9 leader

Shan'Pik: It's not a word you'll find in the dictionary. It's a word another author created and I like the 'alien-factor' about it, so I use it (like other authors do) to show that Minbari physiology IS different from human one. Shan'Pik is the word for all blue markings on a Minbari - on his head (and in my head also all over the rest of their bodies). But the first author used it for only one special region, the markings over the spine (where I let all nerve endings connect with each other). It's the main erogenous zone of the Minbari.

Another word, that is the creation of one of the community authors is 'Mebel' - (I don't know if I used it yet in this story, but I certainly will use it in one of the following stories...) It can mean any cat-like creature, but mostly it's used as a black sabre-tooth tiger, that is the hunting companion of Minbari Warriors. They are very intelligent and protective of their imprinted owner. They are also the best bodyguards you could imagine and also very expensive. If a warrior gives his partner a mebel, it means the person is not only highly valued and prtected, but it's also a sign for life commitment, because why would one give each other a gift that lifes for over fifty years? Since warriors usually marry only other warriors mebels are also thought to be companions, when the chosen life mate dies in battle.

gok: Minbari bird, that resembles a chicken

Shershok'Dum: 'Shadows' - those old race that looks like giant black ants and their ships look like a bix between spider and octopus

Shon'Fal: (In English Shan'Fel, although I don't know why): Ritual of the first pleasure. Finding each orthers pleasure spots (Delenn's words, not mine - Sheridan's look is awesome as she walks up to him and tells him (out of the blue) that they were going to find each other's pleasure spots that night *snicker* It gets even better when he learns about the rest of the ritual *smirk*) Because they don't do that alone. There need to be witnesses in the next room who listen and prey - yes it's really canon. Like I said. Sheridan's look is just awesome.

Na'Fak'Sha (I probably misspelled that one too) Can be counted as marriage, but initially it's a ritual of being reborn. They celebrate it twice in the show and the wording in my story is taken word for word from those scenes. Marcus never participates though as he believes he has nothing left to give away. (In my story that's changed because without the Nafak'Sha no marriage)

Yes, Marcus was very interested and tried to charm Susan Ivanova. He failed though, although in the series he gives his live for her, so that she can survive at the end of season 4. There are some funny moments between them, that are worth watching, but he never really stood a chance with her. She was too damaged I guess and couldn't trust anymore. Did I tell you yet that she had a relationship (even if shortly) with another woman of the show? She was terribly hurt then by the circumstances, and in season one another lover of her (this one male) misused her trust very badly.

So yes, in the show both characters, Marcus and Neroon are dead at the end of season 4. Marcus dies for Ivanova and Neroon sacrifices himself in the star wheel (like I write in the story) for Delenn (or rather for all Minbari) so that the civil war on Minbar will stop.

Yes, Marcus is also really a virgin. It's a fact that you can't ignore when you write about him, that's why I always mention it when I write about those two. He tells Ivanova at some point (her face at that is REALLY funny ^^) and since they claim, that Minbari souls are reborn in humans and since staying chaste until you meet the right one is very 'Minbari' in the show, I really like that fact.

So anything of your questions that I forgot? Please tell me, I'll try my best to explain

Thank you very much for finishing this one so quickly. Please stop being angry at yourself for needing your time. It's perfectly alright. At the moment I'm still kinda slow myself. I won't be able to answer more of your messages before Wednesday at the earliest.

Thanks again

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neenabluegirl In reply to djap-chan [2011-08-27 05:50:21 +0000 UTC]

Wow, thanks for taking all the time to tell me what all those Minbari words meant and answering all my questions. I feel like I am prepared to beta another 100 page story about Marcus and Neroon now It's really interesting, the Minbari culture. It would be fun to learn more about it. Did you get most of this from the show or outside sources?

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djap-chan In reply to neenabluegirl [2011-11-15 20:03:38 +0000 UTC]

I got most of the informations by watching (and loving) the show for many many years ^^. But I also learned a lot by reading many slash stories about Marcus and Neroon (at least as many as were there ^^) And I like all races JMS created.

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neenabluegirl In reply to djap-chan [2011-11-21 02:05:12 +0000 UTC]

I know what you mean now. I was talking to my mum about Star Trek and I was spouting off random information and I paused and was like, "wow, I'm a huge nerd, aren't I?" All the information I know, either from watching the show, reading books or fanfiction about it was kind of frightening.

I do love Marcus and Neroon. I should look for other stories about them, but I love how you write them so much, I would be afraid to reading someone else's and being disappointed.

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djap-chan In reply to neenabluegirl [2011-12-24 22:27:24 +0000 UTC]

Aren't we all nerds in some ways? It's really interesting how easily we can remember seemingly useless things instead of all the rubbish we are supposed to learn for our future jobs.

If you really want to look more into the whole Marcus Neroon fandom I can recommend you the stories of 'Eren' and a few others. I could give you links, if you want or I can send you my favourite stories via e-mail if you wish so.

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neenabluegirl In reply to djap-chan [2012-01-04 06:04:04 +0000 UTC]

Sure, if you have the time, do you want to send me some of your favorite stories via email sometime?

If I got into school as much as I did random fandoms I would graduate top of my class

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djap-chan In reply to neenabluegirl [2012-02-02 19:28:13 +0000 UTC]

Okay, then I'll just go back to my e-mail account and spam you with some of my favourite Marcus-Neroon stories. Most of them are NC17 rated, but sadly not all. The worst is actually one, I should warn you of.

'The sent of Roses' and the REALLY long sequel 'Minbari Courtship' Those are my absolute favourite stories, but the author always stops at the good part *sniff* and in the case of this story it's a long way for them to get to the 'good stuff' too. But it IS the best story ever still, in my opinion.

If Eren is the author (they got an 'E' at the beginning), the stories are mostly NC17 rated, but very often Marcus is the hurt part of hurt/comfort fics. Still, she is my favorite author in the fandom. She has very good ideas.

The fics with the ff at the beginning are also not NC17 rated. They come from fanfiction net, but they are long and often funny and also pretty believable.

Everything with a G at the beginning should be NC17 rated, even when it often takes a long way to get there. I like all four of them very much for their own reasons, but my favourite of those, when I have to chose is The one with 'Raiders hunt' in the title.

I hope that descrpition didn't confuse you too much. I'll send the stories to you now, but I might recommend that you only start reading them after you had your finals - I mean it! They are kind of addicting and most of which I'll send you is also pretty long.

ENJOY

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