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unnoticeable ♀️ [949299] [2004-06-30 06:14:04 +0000 UTC] "Abi is God" (New Zealand)

# Statistics

Favourites: 14; Deviations: 21; Watchers: 21

Watching: 17; Pageviews: 3742; Comments Made: 407; Friends: 17

# Interests

Favorite movies: The Rocky Horror Picture Show
Favorite bands / musical artists: The Used, Tool, Slipknot, Him, etc
Favorite writers: Edgar Allan Poe, Thomas Harris
Favorite games: Poker :D
Tools of the Trade: Pen, paper and time
Other Interests: skiing, music, reading, soccer, running, rugby

# About me

Current Residence: Christchurch, New Zealand
Favourite genre of music: goth-rock, heavy metal
Favourite cartoon character: Salad Fingers
Personal Quote: I am but one person, therefore I am nothing.

# Comments

Comments: 61

DruknIrishBoy [2009-08-03 09:48:42 +0000 UTC]

Long time no see! Hope you're doing well.

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v3rtex [2005-08-22 06:26:26 +0000 UTC]

Nice work kiwi

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unnoticeable In reply to v3rtex [2005-08-23 08:38:44 +0000 UTC]

Thanks Where in New Zealand are you from?? xx

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v3rtex In reply to unnoticeable [2005-08-23 09:44:00 +0000 UTC]

Middle South Island, furthur to the west

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unnoticeable In reply to v3rtex [2005-08-25 05:12:28 +0000 UTC]

Cool! I'm from Christchucrh so we're not too far away from each other

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mrcool256 [2005-08-07 09:22:21 +0000 UTC]

Great poetry, I really loved reading a few of your pieces. Keep up the good work.

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EternalMoonlight [2005-07-21 13:01:35 +0000 UTC]

you have such an amazing gallery
I read a few poems, and really want to read all of them whenever I find time to read some more...so I'll keep an eye on you from now on

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unnoticeable In reply to EternalMoonlight [2005-07-23 02:59:05 +0000 UTC]

Thanks much appreciated xx

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sunsteeler [2005-07-13 08:44:01 +0000 UTC]

allo and nice writtings from Hellena over the hill in Lyttleton town ps.CHCH stinks ..this time of year

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unnoticeable In reply to sunsteeler [2005-07-19 06:04:36 +0000 UTC]

Hello there, yes I agree, Chch does suck this time of yeah but it's pretty it spring which makes up for it

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sunsteeler In reply to unnoticeable [2005-09-04 05:09:39 +0000 UTC]

Spring is all on YAY softcherryyblossomair and plenty of good beer

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divinedecay [2005-05-22 09:54:02 +0000 UTC]

loved your gallery hun, sorry i can't stop and comment more!
i really liked your story, i think that you should write more prose stuff you're good at this writing malarky

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Kayla-Ki [2005-05-16 13:42:45 +0000 UTC]

Hey there
I just wanted to stop by and send a quick msg letting you know how impressed I am with your gallery. I've probably been here for about an hour now lol. Just sitting back and thinking of all you went through. You're a strong person who has developed a great talent. Keep it up. Your work is just going to keep growing and getting better everyday.

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unnoticeable In reply to Kayla-Ki [2005-05-17 09:20:17 +0000 UTC]

Wow, thanks, glad you liked it xox

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Kayla-Ki In reply to unnoticeable [2005-05-17 23:28:44 +0000 UTC]

hehe ur welcome

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coolmarvin [2005-05-07 08:02:25 +0000 UTC]

Love your poerty

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unnoticeable In reply to coolmarvin [2005-05-07 10:15:42 +0000 UTC]

Spank you, spank you very much

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coolmarvin In reply to unnoticeable [2005-05-08 07:15:44 +0000 UTC]

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DruknIrishBoy [2005-04-30 03:56:17 +0000 UTC]

Everything I have read so far is wonderful I will get around to reading it all. We are both emotional poets

i will watch and hopefully u will 2?

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unnoticeable In reply to DruknIrishBoy [2005-04-30 04:07:24 +0000 UTC]

Yay, another emotional ppet *does little dance* WOOT!! And I will definitely watch you too, I was already planning to but I got sidetracked(as per usual) And thnks again for the fav
Abi xox

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DruknIrishBoy In reply to unnoticeable [2005-04-30 09:35:23 +0000 UTC]

I am still intrigued by "If you only knew" you described my words exactly after a relationship of mine was over. I think it is one of the best poems I have ever read. Great great writing

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DruknIrishBoy In reply to DruknIrishBoy [2005-05-01 02:42:56 +0000 UTC]

I read the other version as well but for some reason this one just makes me feel different, unexplainable i guess, I love it. You will have to check out some of mine sometime.

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unnoticeable In reply to DruknIrishBoy [2005-05-01 03:01:27 +0000 UTC]

Hey that's cool I tihnk I prefer the first one too, but I felt I should redo it and make it a bit less dramatic. I guess because the two endings were done at different times they espress different emotions in me.. I don't know.. ANd I'm slowly working ym way through your gallery, I've looked at all your recent submissions adn will now head over ot your gallery to look at the rest xox

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DruknIrishBoy In reply to unnoticeable [2005-05-01 03:19:53 +0000 UTC]

I love both but I love the ending of this one better. I know how your feelings tend to change as time starts to heal.

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unnoticeable In reply to DruknIrishBoy [2005-05-01 02:40:00 +0000 UTC]

Ohmygod! Wow! Nobody's ever said that to me before. I'm honoured If you ahven't already you should read the revised version of the same poem, it's the same basic poem but with a different ending. I'd love to hear your thoughts. And thankyou xox

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mememe01 [2005-04-29 08:05:04 +0000 UTC]

damn your a poet. Point out your best piece.

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unnoticeable In reply to mememe01 [2005-04-29 23:16:52 +0000 UTC]

umm.. I don't really know... I think my best piece is [link] It's completely different from all my other stuff but I like it But this one [link] is the one with the most faves. SO take your pick. xox

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slipknotart [2005-04-27 13:28:20 +0000 UTC]

tx for the fav

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AddeG [2005-04-25 11:44:48 +0000 UTC]

Thx For that Fav...^^

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demon-llama [2005-04-18 15:01:30 +0000 UTC]

thanks hon, 'ppreciate it. As long as you like what i've got up, it's quite alright.
Just been busy lately so i haven't been puttin anything up as much as i would've liked.
cheers hon!

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Craig-Guitar-Murphy [2005-04-17 11:28:00 +0000 UTC]

Thanks for the fav!

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sammcj2000 [2005-04-05 10:43:10 +0000 UTC]

hello chchr!!

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unnoticeable In reply to sammcj2000 [2005-04-05 18:52:10 +0000 UTC]

Why hello my fellow Chcher

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finfanfoom [2005-04-04 09:57:00 +0000 UTC]

thanks for your comment on my work.glad you liked it--more to come

excellent poems you got.keep it up.sorry for not leaving any comments,just that i'm not good with wards--wurds--words

thanks again

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Kaichen [2005-04-03 09:48:44 +0000 UTC]

my deviantart time began like yours..with poems ... have a nice time here

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Sjaan [2005-03-30 11:14:34 +0000 UTC]

You are a gifted, talented poem-writer..I'll keep an eye on you in the future...keep up this good work!

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mysticdarkness [2005-03-29 10:03:39 +0000 UTC]

Thanx for the fav. and the watch

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smilZ4Sarah [2005-03-29 09:42:30 +0000 UTC]

u dont mind if i stalk u right???

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craZZiness [2005-03-28 09:54:02 +0000 UTC]

hey i love your work they are really good poems do you mind if i watch you? keep up the good work

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bang-motif [2005-03-23 04:53:09 +0000 UTC]

i think your poetry is the most serious i have read since becoming a member of this site, very emotional.

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seduce-destroy [2005-03-22 04:45:29 +0000 UTC]

many fat...throbbing...thank yous for the favourite.

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neurotype-on-discord [2005-03-20 03:54:49 +0000 UTC]

Danke for the fav

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Corey-Hall [2005-03-19 04:44:24 +0000 UTC]

You are a very good writer with great potential. You've had a lot of hardships, and I hope your life is happy in the future.

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Re-Arranged [2005-03-17 08:44:31 +0000 UTC]

hey how are you...thanks for the message on my page
you seem like a cool girl (and you're into good music ) added bonus
keep your poetry up

and ill be fine i just get a little down every now and then
everyone does

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RoninGaleria [2005-03-17 05:36:31 +0000 UTC]

only 71 page views? thats an injustice, get ur work around on all of the poetry threads on thumbshare you can.

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unnoticeable In reply to RoninGaleria [2005-03-17 05:41:49 +0000 UTC]

Thanks for your comment. And I've been trying to get my poems out to more people by using the thumbshare forums but it seems no one wants to look at my work

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RoninGaleria In reply to unnoticeable [2005-03-17 05:45:10 +0000 UTC]

it worked for me, lol, i am getting insane numbers of page views and all i do is comment comment comment. You cant just post either, start threads asking for certain kinds of submissions/etc. Just gotta hit it from every angle. I think i get the most views when I have an active thread going, I try to always have an active thread going, If i get tired of an old one i let it die and start up a new one.

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unnoticeable In reply to RoninGaleria [2005-03-17 05:47:41 +0000 UTC]

Thanks for the advice

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evenstephen [2005-03-12 06:05:17 +0000 UTC]

hey mate, thanks heaps for the watch , thanks for checking out my gall too... if u have any questions, just ask (questions like links and stuff)... send me a note or something, ...

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VoidedAmbivalence [2005-03-11 08:44:49 +0000 UTC]

Your poems are amazing. I do not mean this in an insulting way whatsoever but rather as a compliment: you have this simplicity in your poetry, especially with your emotions, that most people, including myself, are afraid to attempt for fear of failure. Experiment with punctuation, you might be surprised with what pops out. Keep em coming, I'll stop by once in a while to check up.

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