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[2005-05-15 18:56:53 +0000 UTC]
"Matt"
(United States)
# Statistics
Favourites: 32; Deviations: 16; Watchers: 42
Watching: 8; Pageviews: 5599; Comments Made: 204; Friends: 8
# Interests
Favorite visual artist: :devgloomy-optimist:, :devchibi-studios:, :devstudio2:Favorite movies: Lemony Snicket's A series of Unfortunate Events, Big Fish
Favorite bands / musical artists: Sum 41, Blink 183
Favorite writers: Dougless Adams or Garth Nix or JK Rowling
Favorite games: Mortal Kombat: Deception, Metroid Prime
Favorite gaming platform: Xbox 360
Tools of the Trade: trying to get a piece of it, behaving like one, or you live with one!!!
Other Interests: Running, eating, sleeping, biking, hiking, reading, hanging with friends
# About me
Current Residence: Underground developing a plan to take over the world with the sinister Pod PeopleFavourite photographer: Professor Dumbledore
Shell of choice: armadillo
Wallpaper of choice: What about a Drunken Sailor?
Skin of choice: Mine will do just nicely
Favourite cartoon character: Daffy Duck, Peter Giffin, or Zoidberg
Personal Quote: Life is all about ass: Your either covering it, laughing it off, kicking it, kissing it, busting it,
# Comments
Comments: 58
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Whoa...thanks for the watch...how long have you been watching me...its been a while since i could logon...sadly...i don't remember everybody.
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YOU HAVE BEEN HUGGED!!!
Spread the DA love around! (you can copy and paste this message on their userpage!)
*dingding* RULES:
1- You can hug the person who hugged you!
2- You can't hug the person more than 3 times
3- You -MUST- hug 6 other people
4- You should hug them in public! Paste it on their user page! c'mon..don't be scared of public displays of affection
5- Random hugs are perfectly okay! (and sweet)
6- You should most definitely get started hugging right away!
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YOU HAVE BEEN KISSED!!!
Spread the DA love around! (you can copy and paste this message on their userpage!)
*dingding* RULES:
1- You can kiss the person who kissed you!
2- You can't kiss the person more than 3 times
3- You -MUST- kiss 6 other people
4- You should kiss them in public! Paste it on their user page! c'mon..don't be scared of public displays of affection
5- Random kisses are perfectly okay! (and sweet)
So there!
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Thanks for adding me to your friends list.
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you have some good stuff here, so i added you to my watch.
Hopefully you keep on crankin them out.
Rock on
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Hi, +waves+ your poem "So Lucky" is amazing...like...stunning...I'm a bit of a loser...friends?
Cheers
Lora
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Put some emoticons or page-breaks or something in your journal. People get turned off by huge paragraphs. And a new journal every now and then would be nice too. Sorry for being a nag.
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It took me a little longer than I thought to back to your page, due to personal problems. But I'm here now so I'm going to take a little looksy at your poetry.
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Okay, give me your five best poems to critique! ^^ I have some time to kill anyway.
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i have read all your poems..and they are realy fantastic..
i am very bad in giving comments to make you a better poem writer...but your poems are realy great, and there isn't much to tell about it...they are realy wonderfull^^
The only thing i can say is that you always have to write what your feeling tells you...that's how i write my poems..just with my feeling...
I hope i helped you a bit..if i dont you can email me^^
~PyroRain
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I will emerge victorious, my good friend. Just you wait!!
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Wow Matt....
I don't normally take the time to read other peoples poetry on here, I prefer just to write my own... but yours is great
Keep it up honey, you have an amazing talent, even though you seem to doubt it sometimes....
Stop being so modest 
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hey I just wanted to add you to keep a look out on your work, it's amazing so i keep you informed on how i think your poetry is comming and thus far i like it
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|D thankyou for your kind thoughts on my poem thing XD , |3 I will stalk you know ~ Amy
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wow, hey thanks for the comments man.
You've only been here for fifeen days and you've already surpassed me easily in page views. I think its cool that your trying to find your hidden talent.
I'm not sure what I can do but i'm here to help if you need me. I'll look over your gallery now, so later.
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your extreamly good for age, and im probably basing that on that your only one year younger than me and i think in some ways you are better than me, you've far outreached what i could possibly reach, you have a different style ^^ thats probably what seperates us more. But i really apprecieate your poems and iv just decided im going to ~ watch you
Buh bai~
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i'll try to think of some wise words since you asked no nicely but i don't really know what to say.
your writings pretty damn good especially since you're only 14 but the only advice i can really give is to try to avoid being too cliche.
what i tend to do when i'm writing something is just write as the words come into my head and change anything that needs changing afterwards to make it more articulate.
maybe you could get someone to proof read them for you too.
carry a notepad with you everywhere because you never know when inspiration will strike.
keep it up xx
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Hey, I just thought I'd respond to your request for me to come and look at your work and well I have to say your work is amazing really touching and stuff that people can relate to. If I had to advise you which I really don't want to but will anyways the thing I feel most people enjoy is a good rythm so for future poems (not all poems just some) try and put a little more rymes in your work not to say I don't like the work you've done thus far because lets face it you've done great stuff and I like your style so Just keep at it the more you write the better you'll get just write your own way and If you want to change up abit well then add rymes
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Let me just say that I'm honored that anyone would deem my writing good enough to offer advice. For someone who is only 14 your writing is actually pretty good. I don't know what kind of authority I am on this subject since I've only really been writing for the past month or so. All I can tell you is that (and I know this is so cliche) when I write I feel like I'm in the zone. I feel what I write and then I put it on paper. Anything I write that I don't feel normally comes out sing song and boring. I have noticed that some of your stuff is a little sing song, but it teds to work for you. It may actually be your style. I personally like to follow Dickinson's hyphenation style with the occasional rhyme.
Your stuff is good, all I can offer for advice is to feel what you write, and you'll know when it's good. Good work, and keep it up.
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Hey, it's me again! Thanks tons for the watch back
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Heya ^^ thanks for the watch back. I'll have a read of your poems once I get a little more time, I'm a bit busy at the moment 
Take care ^^
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I read your poems.They are quite good, and don't really need any pointers.Poetry is about self-expression and thats what is important. The only thing you might want to work on is the flow of your poems. The structure breaks sometimes, which makes it harder for the reader to read it with ease.But besides that,you have some pretty good stuff here
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hey..i was responding to your comment..(by the way thank you..) and i want to tell you that your poetry doesn't need pointers..you are off to a good start..just keep doing what your doing. Poetry should be about expression and feeling..and that is exactly what i see in your work. (p.s. read a lot of anything...it helps you gather opinions of what you like and don't like in writing..and expands your vocabulary) hope i could help!
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Hey there, thanks tons for your lovely comment, awesome works you have! I'ma gonna watch youuu~ X3 see yaz around! *scampers off*
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Lol, this is quite funny, every poem i have commented on tonight has your comment before mine. We must both have very similar ideas on what makes great poetry
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Thanks a lot for favoriting my work
~Ash <3
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Welcome to DA and thank you very much the the two 
Hope you get a chance to unravel the hidden artist within you
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thank u for the warm welcome
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