Bubuth [2013-01-21 20:41:33 +0000 UTC]

Thank you very much for the fav [link] ^ ^

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FlyingPastaCat [2011-12-14 02:43:17 +0000 UTC]

I less than three you now.

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PrincessPeachCat [2011-12-12 02:34:43 +0000 UTC]

hawke why did you eat my fries? (its peachy)

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meme123513 [2011-11-05 20:04:05 +0000 UTC]

Just informing my watchers that i'm doing 10 point requests!
[link]

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vampirevenessa [2011-11-05 02:56:25 +0000 UTC]

Let's see...

Chosen Character:Kasmyra
[ ] They are possessed by an angel
[ ] They are possessed by a demon
[ ] They are a werewolf/vampire/faerie
[ ] They are physically strong
[ ] They have a rare hair/fur colour
[ ] Their eyes are an unusual color [ ] This happens to be red
[ ] Their eyes change color
[ ] They have wings
[ ] They can grow extra body parts/shapeshift
[ ] They are immortal [ ] (if a female) they have large bra size EWW
[ ] (if a male) they are very muscular
[ ] They are very attractive to the opposite gender
[x] They are telekinetic/pyrokinetic/etc control plants :3
[ ] They have sixth sense/can mind-read/etc
[ ] They have an object of some sort that gives them powers
[ ] They have a special ability/power, but they don't know about it yet
[ ] They were bestowed/cursed with these powers
[x] They are a healer
[ ] They are from a very rich/royal family
[ ] They don't know that they are from a very rich/royal background
[x] They have lost one/both of their parents
[ ] They ran away from home
[ ] Their parents are cruel, uncaring, abusive etc.
[ ] They witnessed one/both of their parent's death
[ ] They are part angel/demon/faerie/some other mythical creature
[ ] They never knew their parents
[ ] They were abused/spoiled as a child
[ ] They are very attractive to the same gender
[ ] They have lots of friends/no friends
[ ]They are emo/cutesy
[x] They look much younger/older than they really are [ ] They are currently in a relationship
[ ] They have lots if morals and state them a fair bit for example: 'I would rather be with my friends than with my boyfriend/girlfriend' 'Nothing matters more to me than my friends/family' 'I wouldn't hesitate to die in place of a friend' etc. It's fine if your OC has these beliefs/values, but if they constantly say them out loud/preach them to others, then we have a problem.
[ ] They have a mental disorder
[ ] They have an emotional disorder
[x] They struggle to stay sane
[ ] They are a psycho
[x] They have multiple personalities
[x] They are very intelligent
[ ] They have hallucinations
[ ] They can summon spirits/demons/angels etc.
[ ] They have an unusual/unrealistic pet [ ] They have a guardian spirit
[ ] They have a 'special type' of soul
[ ] Their soul is not the same as them
[ ] They can talk to spirits/ghosts
[ ] Some part of their body glows
[x] They have a rare/unusual name heheh
[ ] They were born on an important date, such as New Year's Eve, Midsummers Night, The Winter Solstice etc.
[x] They have a twin/sibling that they were separated from at birth
[ ] They are connected with a certain element
[ ] They are connected with a certain animal
[ ] They always dress like a certain 'label'
[ ] They look quite a bit like a character from a popular anime/manga
[x] They are a race/species that is discriminated against/misunderstood
[x] They have a certain power that is misunderstood/feared mutants are feared
[ ] They live/lived on the streets at some point in their lives
[ ] They are hiding from someone/something
[ ] They have a rare blood type
[ ] They cry blood sometimes
[x] Certain noises/smells/situations/etc make their powers activate/give them a nervous breakdown
[ ] They are from a different country to where they live
[ ] They are very mysterious/dark
[x] They are very lively/happy
[ ] Their mood changes a lot/very quickly
[ ] They are very patient
[x] They are from a long line of (insert profession/power here) Mutant elves
[ ] They have a piece of jewelry/clothing that they always wear.
[ ] They have amnesia
[ ] They have some sort of permanent medical condition
[ ] The have a curse upon them
[x] They are involved in some sort of prophecy
[ ] They are 'the chosen one'
[ ] They have insomnia
Overall points:

Final Score is: 15

<5 -Anti-Sue
Your character may be a bit on the boring side. Of course, this does depend, but generally if they are scoring that low, it wouldn't hurt to 'spice them up' a bit ^^


6-15 -Balanced Character
If your OC scored around here, then they are probably quite a well-balanced and interesting character. Those scoring in the higher end of this category may be a bit too much though. :L

16-25 -Borderline Mary-Sue/Gray-Stu
We have a problem. You need to tone your character down. They are most likely a bit annoying to others, too.
25+ -Mary-Sue/Gray-Stu
(Description)
A female character who is so perfect that she is annoying. The name originated in a very short Star Trek story that mocked the sort of female characters who showed up in fanfiction. It usually refers to original female characters put into fanfiction, but can refer to any character.

Mary-Sues are characters who are usually extraordinarily gorgeous, amazingly talented, unusually powerful, and exceedingly attractive to whoever the author has a crush on. They often possess ridiculously fancy and pretentious first names -- Angel, Raven, Jewel, Lorelei Bianca Julia Marizza Snape -- and are very, very annoying.

Mary-Sue is often abbreviated to 'Sue.' The male equivelant is either Marty-Stu or Gary-Stu.
Your Buffy fanfic has a problem. Her name is Alayne Lorelei Gemma Jeshika Shanna, she has violet eyes and raven hair, curves in all the right places, is more powerful than Willow and a better fighter than Buffy and Faith combined, AND Spike is in love with her. She's a total Mary-Sue, and she's really annoying!"

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NezumiX [2011-10-14 12:20:32 +0000 UTC]

thanks for the fav \o/

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Dovewing145 [2011-10-02 18:38:31 +0000 UTC]

Can you help my friend by making a character for her story? It's about wolves,we have the two main characters and that storyline,we just need some more charries! I'd be grateful if you could.Thank you!

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firestar11 [2011-09-12 02:08:03 +0000 UTC]

ty for the watch

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JaziLeigh [2011-09-11 04:53:14 +0000 UTC]

Thank you for the fav O uO

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Savamther [2011-09-09 20:30:00 +0000 UTC]

Thank you for the watch!

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ChocoOcean [2011-08-30 04:57:45 +0000 UTC]

Hope you'll join this group! We might host a contest after reaching 300 members! And so far we have 260 members and 256 watchers!
[link]

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Rainbowzeatsushi [2011-08-29 03:05:20 +0000 UTC]

Thanks for the watch!

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MoonDust01 [2011-08-29 02:40:24 +0000 UTC]

Thanks for the faves

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whimsyfinch [2011-08-28 15:36:33 +0000 UTC]

Sorry. Had to leave group as a contributor because i couldn't join any other groups because of how many i was helping with...

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M0nk3m4n [2011-08-28 03:51:36 +0000 UTC]

Watching....

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whimsyfinch [2011-08-27 15:58:15 +0000 UTC]

There are lotsa people trying to get into [link] and the join requests are closed. It also won't let me submit anything...

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vampirevenessa [2011-08-25 03:23:56 +0000 UTC]

Thundra is a demon with dark long brown hair black orns demon wings pale white skin silver eyes black boots that go to here knees ripped shorts and bandaids for a top/bra she is nice but annoying at times shes Bi and has piercings shes a bad arse chick with chain braclets

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FoxInShadow [2011-08-24 17:21:55 +0000 UTC]

Thanks for the watch

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Zedrin [2011-08-22 23:10:13 +0000 UTC]

Thanks for the watch :3

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thefreshdoodle [2011-08-22 18:26:54 +0000 UTC]

thanks for adding Emotion. [link] to your 's

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Frostbreeze67 [2011-08-18 02:27:40 +0000 UTC]

Thanks for the Fave!!

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vampirevenessa [2011-07-30 01:53:42 +0000 UTC]

Name:
Clan:
Rank:
Gender:
Appearance: (please write out what your cat looks like, you may have a picture in addition if you would like)
Personality: (give us more than a few words, preferably up to three sentences)
History (optional):
KIN: (If any) Parents: Siblings: Cousins:
(Only add bottom two if there not a kit)
Mate:
Kits:
RPed by: (your name here)

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Frostbreeze67 [2011-07-29 02:13:42 +0000 UTC]

[link] I GOTS IT!!!

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Frostbreeze67 [2011-07-29 01:37:40 +0000 UTC]

Grr! I had to refresh a tab and I refreshed the wrong one!! I missed it again!!!!

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Frostbreeze67 [2011-07-28 19:06:38 +0000 UTC]

Aww, your Kiriban passed.

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Andrew-Graphics [2011-07-24 03:21:46 +0000 UTC]

Thanks for the fav!

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CupcaikNinja [2011-07-15 01:40:38 +0000 UTC]

hey thanks for the fav!

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vampirevenessa [2011-07-13 22:44:33 +0000 UTC]

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ChocoOcean [2011-07-02 02:23:53 +0000 UTC]

TAGG: [link]

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ChocoOcean [2011-06-30 23:04:11 +0000 UTC]

looks like u joined the family xD

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ChocoOcean [2011-06-30 03:56:19 +0000 UTC]

thx for the watch xD

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Marija343 [2011-06-18 13:49:25 +0000 UTC]

Thx a lot for faving my poem

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Abrayzonix1234 [2011-01-25 20:00:59 +0000 UTC]

did u ask a request for warriorkitteh123? im her request checker

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grapejuice88 [2011-01-19 21:40:54 +0000 UTC]

Thanks for the point but what is it for?
Did you adopt anything?
Sorry if you did... I can't remember everything...

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aforgottenghost [2011-01-19 15:50:57 +0000 UTC]

thank you for adopting

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vampirevenessa [2011-01-09 01:49:14 +0000 UTC]

I'm looking at MANY theories. here is one, which I now TOTALLY think is true!--

Very,very possible theory, goes all the way back to Starlight, in TNP. Remember Mudclaw and his supporters? One of them was Nightcloud, right, the same she-cat who SUPPOSEDLY had Crowfeather's kit, Breezepelt. Remember any more of Mudclaw's supporters? Hmmm... Okay, now to Twilight. Leafpool runs away with Crowfeather. Crowfeather has NOT been in love with any cat besides Feathertail. Next: Sunset. All I need to say is that (a) attention is drawn to Leafpool's plumpness; and (b) Hawkfrost is killed. Now comes the fishy part. In "After Sunset, We Need to Talk", Leafpool presumably is about to tell Crowfeather that she will have his kits, when he mentions his new mate Nightcloud--and their SON, BREEZEKIT? Huh. Didn't Crowfeather run away with Leafpool before supposedly becoming Nightcloud's mate? Then how come Nightcloud has already had "his" kit, and Leafpool is still pregnant? In the nursery at the same time: Heatherkit, later Heathertail. Okay, now I want to jump to either Long Shadows or Sunrise. Breezepelt acts protectively about Heathertail. An act of love...or possibly SECRET KINSHIP??? Say that Heathertail and Breezepelt were siblings, but Heathertail was given to another queen at birth. Why would her mother do that? Well, maybe, just maybe, she was afraid that cats would connect her kit's quite singular appearance to that of a RiverClan warrior, who she'd had many chances to meet! Yes, I think that Nightcloud and HAWKFROST parented Heathertail and Breezepelt. Want more proof? How, then, could the Dark Foresst contact Breezepelt? He didn't have special powers and--unless my theory is true--didn't have kin in the DF. I think that Nightcloud asked Crowfeather to pretend he was Breezepelt's father--she and he could both gain. Crowfeather would once more be respected, and Nightcloud would be free of any suspicion. I guess Clan cats just don't really care about dates of birth, or they would have noticed the fishiness in the CrowXNight=Breeze theory...


There's still more about this subject!

ok the breezepelt heathertail kin thing: it is possible. nightcloud could have mated with Hawkfrost and used crowfeather for her own needs. And the fact that heathertail has a different pelt doesnt matter. In fact we dont know for sure who nightclouds parents were. so if nightclouds dad had ginger fur and her mom had black, that would mean that nightclod dominant gene would be black fur and ressecive gene ginger fur SO heathertail could have taken nightclouds ressecive gene and have ginger fur as her dominant and black fur as her ressecive.

BUT if Breezpelt is crowfeathers kit, wouldnt he kind of be a cheater? Breezepelt was born before Jayfeather, Lionblaze, and Hollyleaf. so that ment that Crowfeather mated with Nightcloud BEFORE he ran offf with leafpool. so most likely breezepelt is NOT his kit. Which supports the whole breezepelt being Hawkfrosts kit.

Still more!


I think it's very possible that Hawkfrost and Nightcloud could've been the parents of Breezepelt. After all, they were both followers of Mudclaw and could've met that way.
Haha. More--


I like you're theory. And, remember in the tunnels, I forget when, but Lionblaze saw a look that he thought to be read as "She's mine." But you never hear Breezepelt's side. And cats are protective of their kin, well, at least clancats. Heathertail and Breezepelt look nothing alike, possibly drawing attention else where in the clan. And, Icecloud and Foxleap don't either, but Thunderclan knows they're related because they whitnessed their birth, or at least some. But, if Windclan never saw Nightcloud give birth, they would never think about it. And, if Barkface helped Nightcloud, he's not there to tell the secret. because of his death. Which couldv'e been a murder, but, probably not, I just don't remeber when the med. cats talked about it. Or it couldv'e been a faked death, like Ashfur's almost was. Nightcloud or one of the Dark foresters couldv'e killed him. (Some how a DF warrior found his way there, and killed him in his sleep.) If it was Hawkfrost, he and Nightcloud could have made a plan. Hawkfrost kills him in a not that messy way, Nightcloud pretends to be sick, and stays in the med. den, giving her easy knoledge of the death. And, kits wouldn't know if they were given up or not, proof, Stonepelt and Mistystar.
More, and more, and more.

3rd. There doesn't need to be hints. We got no hints that Poppyfrost loved Berrynoes, yet here they are, in love.

4th. Cats don't need to share characteristics to their father and mother. I'm not like my mother at all. And I'm not really like my father.

I know, I'm putting a lot. lol


You know, Heathertail and Hawkfrost have a stunning resemblance(I looked on the warriors wiki and looked at the pics...) And Breezepelt does have eyes similar to Tigerstar's...

I got ALL of those theories from HERE! Go check it out. MANY people disagree with these. Cause some people say "The Erin's have already confirmed hawkfrost never had kits". But The Erin's have lied before.... right?

These theories could be VERY true! What do YOU think!? Though, I do NOT think Hawkfrost is Breezepelt's father... There may have been another tom, that was a supporter of Mudclaw maybe... Though, the whole Nightcloud using Crowfeather, Crowfeather using Nightcloud COULD be true. Though, I don't know about the whole Heathertail/ Breezepelt kin stuff....

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