sxyloverboy [2005-09-08 15:11:53 +0000 UTC]

hey thanks for all those favorites! that was so awsome! your poetry is awsome. it realy emotional and all.

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KcLee [2005-04-12 22:53:01 +0000 UTC]

wow, that so cool you said something good on the wrtting...
nice work

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nick-metroid [2005-03-10 17:24:06 +0000 UTC]

Thank you for the devwatch matey let me return the favour

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visiblemind13 [2005-02-16 13:29:49 +0000 UTC]

# Teenage Mutant Ninja Turtles

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liquid-venom [2005-01-25 14:16:52 +0000 UTC]

thanx for the davwatch

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bleste [2005-01-03 14:58:03 +0000 UTC]

thank you for the dear

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visiblemind13 [2005-01-03 14:18:38 +0000 UTC]

i definately will be keeping it up......my depression will be pouring in soon...i am being put on a medicine that will make me suicidal and obviously very depressed.

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sxyloverboy [2004-12-30 18:13:50 +0000 UTC]

hey! a lot of thx for all the comment. and for the . ive read the revised poem. its very nice. keep it up.

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visiblemind13 [2004-12-30 14:32:28 +0000 UTC]

thanks for the critiques. it means alot that you like my poetry at least a little. i love your work. you do not need to worry about, thanks though not many people care enough to even say that. i right that when i want to hurt myself and of the feelings i have had when hurting myself. i havent hurt myself for at least a few months...im not aloud to. because of my boyfriend he means alot to me and i dont want to lose him over that plus i got him to quit some of his bad habbits for that one. you know the bad thing i am getting put on medicine that is going to make me suicidel...aint that a bitch. so you can probably look forward to lots more of this poetry. i have came very close to ending my own life as well. hey if you can get people to read some of my poetry i need all the help i can get. thanks again. bye

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bleste [2004-12-29 03:42:41 +0000 UTC]

ah the first comment 8 pageviews too! *feels special*

I read through some of your poetry and I must say - It's very nice. I have a couple critiques for you. One thing I have always believed is that all punctuation (sp? ) in poetry counts. Make sure you punctuate everything....use italics and bold if you think it'd get your message accross better it might just be a small touch but it can make quite a difference.

You seem to have a lot of talent - it's just awfully depressing talent I love poetry like ykours - but I do worry about you - you feeling okay? don't hurt yourself too much....this is coming from someone whose destructive habits nearly ended her life lol. if you ever need to talk - please message me! I wish you the best of luck on dA and with your poetry

Kate

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