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0ceanbabek3j — ' The Doll'
Published: 2006-09-30 16:35:47 +0000 UTC; Views: 207; Favourites: 4; Downloads: 3
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Description " The Doll "



                                                                    Didn't anyone tell you?

                                                           Or did they just catch you off guard.

                                                                   You're the show tonight.
     
                                                            Dancing and singing on the stage.

                                                              But no one can see the strings.

                                              Are people really listening to you during intermission.

                                           Or are they just gushing about how wonderful you looked.

                                                       Little girl, you're always being shown off.

                                                                   While I stand in the dark.

                                                                People are not looking at me.  

                                                                       I'm not noticed a lot.

                                                            I don't live in the spotlight like you do.
                                                            
                                                                    How do you not breakdown.

                                         So now you're admitting that its not what its all cracked up to be.

                                                         How would you like to switch places with me.

                                                           Oh I'm sure you would like that indeed.

                                                                   Are you sick of being the doll.

                                                                 And always being passed around.

                                                                I'm not following in your foot steps.

                                                                   No I'm not going to be a puppet.

                                                                                   I'm free.
                                                                                   
                                                                          I am my own master.

                                                                           No one controls me.
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Comments: 11

0ceanbabek3j [2010-04-18 19:55:49 +0000 UTC]

Why thank you hun. Sadly, I haven't been able to come up with a lot. But as soon as I do, I'll post it. I'm planning on taking a Creative Writing class at my community college next fall so maybe that will help. lol.

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Nekochan1313113 [2010-04-15 00:01:04 +0000 UTC]

I really love it! The comparison is epic and you wrote in wonderfully COngrats and good job!

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0ceanbabek3j In reply to Nekochan1313113 [2010-04-15 03:46:59 +0000 UTC]

Why thank you. *curtsies* I wrote that when I was about 15 or 16 years old. It's one of my oldest but one of the best ones I think. So again thank you a lot.

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Nekochan1313113 In reply to 0ceanbabek3j [2010-04-18 03:28:44 +0000 UTC]

I'm that old! Wow that means you must have improved so much I can't wait to read your newer poems too!

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0ceanbabek3j [2006-10-03 10:31:41 +0000 UTC]

I feel so loved and appreciated on here. I hardly ever get any recognition from people my age or around my age, so it's cool to be on here. To be able to comment to eachother and just chat and have fun. I get a long better with Adults and little kids than my peers sometimes. So it's very cool to talk to people on here and feel at ease with them and just be myself.

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RavenofAzarathandBB [2006-10-02 01:38:15 +0000 UTC]

wow that was really touching... it was great!!

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0ceanbabek3j In reply to RavenofAzarathandBB [2006-10-02 01:56:46 +0000 UTC]

why, thank you! I just write down whatever i feel. Instead of trying to find the muse, i let it find me. I'm very glad you like it. Thank you once again for the compliment.

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RavenofAzarathandBB In reply to 0ceanbabek3j [2006-10-02 23:35:13 +0000 UTC]

your very welcome friend!

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Ocama [2006-09-30 20:19:08 +0000 UTC]

wow, that's a really good analogy. It makes you think.

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0ceanbabek3j In reply to Ocama [2006-10-01 16:11:18 +0000 UTC]

Thank you. I'm glad it makes you think, BAM. It's true too, she's been passed around exactly like a doll, because she can sing and dance. They use her for their own entertainment and pride. I mean she loves to sing and dance for people, she's not afraid at all, but she only does it because she likes to sing and dance mostly. She can sing somewhat but she sounds like a today's pop singer when she sings even in church but she can dance way better. She's an anatural at it. Again thank you for commenting on this with that compliment, Brit. See ya, when i see ya, Dude.

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Ocama In reply to 0ceanbabek3j [2006-10-02 22:22:11 +0000 UTC]

^o^ see ya!

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