Comments: 89
0ctojelly In reply to ??? [2013-06-01 19:29:52 +0000 UTC]
You're not the first one to say this XD
👍: 0 ⏩: 1
DrakeTheBlueDragon In reply to 0ctojelly [2013-06-02 00:56:38 +0000 UTC]
well prototyps is preety dmn epic even my main fc has taht power but his skin & & bones of teh arm peals off to form the sword
👍: 0 ⏩: 1
Green-Angelus [2013-04-21 15:09:13 +0000 UTC]
Her proportions are garbage. With that sort of waist, her body should be pushed down and snapped in half under the weight of her massive tits/head.
The design is very generic "dark and sexy" OC mode. The weapon is impractical, as she would have to loop her arm around the person and slice that way- very unnatural fighting style that would be too awkward to work correctly.
Also, thunder thighs. "It's my style" doesn't excuse such miserable anatomy. The coloring itself leaves something to be desired, as it seems that your character is made up of equal parts latex and a non-Newtonian fluid.
Hey, you asked for it. Don't talk yourself up unless you're actually good.
👍: 0 ⏩: 1
0ctojelly In reply to Green-Angelus [2013-04-21 15:28:42 +0000 UTC]
Thanks you for your critic boy
the only thing in this i dont like is the last line ...you cannot say i'm not "good" only by one pic
👍: 0 ⏩: 1
Green-Angelus In reply to 0ctojelly [2013-04-21 15:29:54 +0000 UTC]
Let me go critique the three most recent other drawings and come to a conclusion.
👍: 0 ⏩: 1
0ctojelly In reply to Green-Angelus [2013-04-21 15:30:52 +0000 UTC]
there's another one comming soon so ...come to my join.meh and tell meh what you think about it
👍: 0 ⏩: 0
ElegantEevee [2013-04-13 13:38:12 +0000 UTC]
o3o... I would make a comment on her nudity lol but it's too epic, can't bring myself to saaaay iiiit!
👍: 0 ⏩: 1
ElegantEevee In reply to 0ctojelly [2013-04-13 15:07:51 +0000 UTC]
I would say she's sexy but I dun wanna sound like a perv lol XP
👍: 0 ⏩: 1
0ctojelly In reply to ElegantEevee [2013-04-13 15:10:19 +0000 UTC]
ahahah ya can say it if you want, we are both pervs XD
👍: 0 ⏩: 1
Carach-Angren [2013-04-08 01:55:20 +0000 UTC]
booooooooobehhs! xD
non mais serieux, she's fucking badass ; u ;
👍: 0 ⏩: 1
Neo-Dragon-ZX [2013-04-04 23:23:56 +0000 UTC]
haha oh wow that looks pretty sweet and wow she's sexy XD how many fans does she have XD?
👍: 0 ⏩: 1
0ctojelly In reply to Neo-Dragon-ZX [2013-04-04 23:34:36 +0000 UTC]
Aaww thank you so much ;w;
How many fans ? ...i dont know >|D
👍: 0 ⏩: 1
Neo-Dragon-ZX In reply to 0ctojelly [2013-04-04 23:53:30 +0000 UTC]
haha anytime! it looks so nice ID
lol XD
👍: 0 ⏩: 0
pale-ninja [2013-04-04 22:48:44 +0000 UTC]
this looks really good i love how you did the textures and the shading is so clean cant wait to see more ^^
👍: 0 ⏩: 1
pale-ninja In reply to 0ctojelly [2013-04-05 01:14:26 +0000 UTC]
anytime ^^ your stuff is really good
👍: 0 ⏩: 0
BIackened [2013-04-04 22:41:30 +0000 UTC]
fff that coloring is so pretty <333 ;U; the only thing that bothers me is the anatomy :/ her thighs are too fat and she has no hips but other that she looks really cute c;
👍: 0 ⏩: 1
0ctojelly In reply to BIackened [2013-04-04 22:43:59 +0000 UTC]
Thanks for dat comment :3
👍: 0 ⏩: 1
nikaki-san [2013-03-31 23:43:03 +0000 UTC]
Omg thats amazing
👍: 0 ⏩: 1
0ctojelly In reply to CyberSamurai270 [2013-03-31 19:22:13 +0000 UTC]
that's actually ...the best pic i've did of Raven TTwTT
👍: 0 ⏩: 1
0ctojelly In reply to CyberSamurai270 [2013-03-31 19:24:27 +0000 UTC]
I think i'll had some of Raven's psychologie in the description >w>
👍: 0 ⏩: 1
CyberSamurai270 In reply to 0ctojelly [2013-03-31 19:33:51 +0000 UTC]
LOL |D
Have you ever written her age, height, likes, hates, etc? =3
👍: 0 ⏩: 1
0ctojelly In reply to CyberSamurai270 [2013-03-31 19:36:46 +0000 UTC]
mmm nope ...i dont think so wait ...yes but those information arent good anymore lD
👍: 0 ⏩: 1
CyberSamurai270 In reply to CyberSamurai270 [2013-03-31 22:27:13 +0000 UTC]
Ya ...i've never really talked about Raven's psychology/personality so ...here you go X3
Raven Amentia
Like: Hearts, Fire, power, water melon, cheese, spicy things, big weapon, explosion, to kill, boys attention, danger, being almost naked, alchool, hot temperature, to scare, purple, black, the night, being free, when boys think she's sexy, being the center of attention, extremly cold place, being alone, teasing boys, to sing, party
Dislike: angels, girls, bacon, jellyfishes, being controlled, recieving orders, to be treated like a "girl", when someone helps her, when a girl steal her "spot light", being reminded of her past, being not strong enough, rock, clothes that covers her body, when people calls her cute, borning people, serious people, when her beauty isnt affective, being called an "error"
Age: 2416 years
Bio/Personality: Raven is a dangerous demon ...sadly pyromaniac, she like to ingite herself. She love being in trouble and she always trows herself into dangerous situation. She also like being the center of attention. Since she ate her heart, it's hard for her to feel something so she tend to sometime loose the control of her emotion, making her very unstable. She got caught by angels and after several years of torture, she finally got out, it's in this time that she ate her heart out of hunger. She planned to conquer her own world after escaping. Love to "hunt" boys for their heart. Is only dangerous to boys, she like seducing them then hit. She love to betray and kill. She alway gets revenge and she wont stop chansing the one that did something to her until she got revenge. She only respects those who are more powerful then her or the one that did something really important for her. Or only demons who have a higher respect mark, her's are her hair.
In her dimension, there in normal habitant, demons and angels ...Demon and angels are ennemies and they cant reproduce. Raven is an actual hybrid between an angel and a demon but the only thing she have of the angel side is her 'lil hidden sweet personality. Angels calls her an error since she isnt supposed to exist. Some people thinks she was born from a dark demon ritual that deified the nature's laws.
well ....that's all i can think of right now ^^" sorry for the long crap lD
👍: 0 ⏩: 0
AidanTH [2013-03-31 19:13:33 +0000 UTC]
gimmie dat blade.
👍: 0 ⏩: 1
| Next =>