SilverAce88 [2015-04-30 01:25:21 +0000 UTC]
The skeleton is really nice. You've got some great lines in it, but you could have pushed the darks further. You could take an nice dark ink pen to it and really darken up the shadows, then you'd have something really spectactular.
The guy below is really being overshadowed by the skeleton in this. You could have cropped in on just the skeleton and you would have had a much stronger image by far. The man is really missing those darks that the skeleton has to make him stand out. You could again take an ink pen to him and really improve those darks in the linework for a more cartoony version, or you could take a nice dark graphite pencil and make the shadows darker there and it would add so much to him. You've got a great start. Now it just needs to be finished.
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0utlanD3r In reply to SilverAce88 [2015-04-30 04:58:30 +0000 UTC]
Thanks for the feedback. You have found my Achilles heel, I really struggle with pushing the darks in my drawings. I will continue to work on pushing my limits. Thanks again.
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