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Feral’s ear gave a twitch as a faint sound tickled his ear. Listening into the wind, the dull thud of hoof-beats became apparent. Narrowing his eyes and focusing on the horizon, the old stallion could see a single horse emerge from behind the crest of the hill. Feral’s eyes flicked from the advancing horse, to Silent, the mare was grazing, totally oblivious. He rolled his eyes to look back at the horizon to see five more figures galloping after the horse he had spotted earlier. But they were different. Humans rode on their backs. With a sharp snort, he spun round and sprinted away toward the woods.

Silent But Deadly looked up as Feral ran, she was about to follow but spotted what they were running from. The mare froze; watching the six silhouettes get closer and closer. She’d escaped that world, why had they come here? She sprang into action and ran.

“SILENT!?” came a familiar voice. Her heart managed to stop and leap at the same time. Skidding to a halt she stared behind her in disbelief.

“Arrow!?” she gasped, spinning round to greet him, he slid to a halt, his coat drenched in sweat, nostrils flaring and side’s heaving.

“What on earth are you doing here!?” he cried.

“I came looking for you! When you didn’t come back, I thought you might be in trouble…and it looks like you are.”

The stallion glanced backwards, “We both will be if we don’t get going!” he chuckled, kicking up the dirt as both shot off toward the forest.

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Hoozah! Damn I wish I could write well -_- I thought I'd try a comic-ish styled page So here comes Arrow! C: Woot! Hope you all enjoy this

Also, yup, I am working on trades! Don't worry!
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Comments: 26

saba729 [2010-10-10 22:45:57 +0000 UTC]

awesome!

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10flyingunicorns In reply to saba729 [2010-10-11 12:57:36 +0000 UTC]

Thankyou!!

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saba729 In reply to 10flyingunicorns [2010-10-11 19:04:59 +0000 UTC]

np

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ArweynXSilver [2010-09-22 19:57:56 +0000 UTC]

Kateh!! It's awesomedepawesome!!
Nuuu, you write very good! I lurf your stories. I could nom them straight away!
* noms Katy's stories *

I lurf the page
You should do another one soon. I love the fluffeh clouds and the cool style 8D
Keep up the awesome work!!!

Lurrff youu
~ Arweyn
*omnomnom*

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10flyingunicorns In reply to ArweynXSilver [2010-09-22 20:02:01 +0000 UTC]

GAAAAAAAAH. Thankyooooouuuuuuu! I'm glad you like it :3

Hehehehe, so much nomming!

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JEAikman [2010-09-20 18:38:52 +0000 UTC]

yay! they're back together but run!

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10flyingunicorns In reply to JEAikman [2010-09-21 07:55:51 +0000 UTC]

Yaaaaaay! 8D Oh yush! o3o

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aminoan [2010-09-20 17:51:35 +0000 UTC]

Ah, very nice! I like the comic style. (If you need help writing, feel free to contact me. I'm not the best, but I'm obsessive about it.)

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10flyingunicorns In reply to aminoan [2010-09-20 18:19:28 +0000 UTC]

Thankyou very much x3 Aww, thanks! I'll keep that in mind

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aminoan In reply to 10flyingunicorns [2010-09-20 22:49:07 +0000 UTC]

^_^ (Have I told you yet that your art is awesome?)

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10flyingunicorns In reply to aminoan [2010-09-21 07:56:30 +0000 UTC]

Dawww, shuuuuuush x3

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aminoan In reply to 10flyingunicorns [2010-09-21 17:56:45 +0000 UTC]

okay

^_^

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10flyingunicorns In reply to aminoan [2010-09-22 19:21:00 +0000 UTC]

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Lolilith [2010-09-20 17:21:12 +0000 UTC]

yayy action
can't wait for the next page

I like this comic-ish style :D

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10flyingunicorns In reply to Lolilith [2010-09-20 17:36:15 +0000 UTC]

Woooot! Daww thankyou so much hun

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Angelkissedhorse [2010-09-20 00:48:26 +0000 UTC]

YAY NEW PAGE! I love your comic, I personally like the other style better but i still love this regardless

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10flyingunicorns In reply to Angelkissedhorse [2010-09-20 17:38:07 +0000 UTC]

WOOP! Aww Thankyou, I'm so glad you like it

Ahh, I was just experimenting, I'll change back to normal for the next page

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Angelkissedhorse In reply to 10flyingunicorns [2010-09-21 23:28:22 +0000 UTC]

haha yay for more pages!

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10flyingunicorns In reply to Angelkissedhorse [2010-09-22 19:20:40 +0000 UTC]

Next page should be up, soon-ish

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Angelkissedhorse In reply to 10flyingunicorns [2010-09-22 20:00:03 +0000 UTC]

yay!!

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10flyingunicorns In reply to Angelkissedhorse [2010-09-22 20:15:55 +0000 UTC]

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Angelkissedhorse In reply to 10flyingunicorns [2010-09-22 23:36:04 +0000 UTC]

hehe

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PumpkinPrecious [2010-09-19 23:33:29 +0000 UTC]

FINALLY NEW PAGE! LOL Run Silent run!

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10flyingunicorns In reply to PumpkinPrecious [2010-09-20 17:40:25 +0000 UTC]

YAYS RUN FOR YOUR LIFE 8D

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Ghostofastallion [2010-09-19 20:12:41 +0000 UTC]

runs !

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10flyingunicorns In reply to Ghostofastallion [2010-09-19 20:17:59 +0000 UTC]

Yush!

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