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365degrees In reply to VertigoR [2015-05-13 08:56:07 +0000 UTC]

Thanks a lot!
Kind of what I was going for
It feels wrong to push her to far toward the 'fan service' direction, not that I really have the skill for that type of art yet anyway...

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365degrees In reply to Marikokitty [2015-03-30 06:09:15 +0000 UTC]

Thankyou very much

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365degrees In reply to girl-smash [2015-03-29 00:54:10 +0000 UTC]

Thankyou

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365degrees In reply to Stoys [2015-03-29 00:54:01 +0000 UTC]

Cheers. What about the face bugs you out of interest?
I'm always happy for critique

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Stoys In reply to 365degrees [2015-03-29 11:23:00 +0000 UTC]

well i can be picky if you want too, but please read everything and also i can seem harsh now, but read everything it is alot of small things wrong. now im just saying them cause you asked me to.
but her thumb is too small short and thin, her ass is too long. if you make her hip into one section you can devide the ass to be smaller and shorter.
and when the ass and thighe meet, you cannot have the area go in like that. it makes her thigh look like thigh from a 200 kilo person.
in this view the ass and thigh should have form but not that dimp there to make it that "large" here ear are too pointy outwards if you make them more in and thin because of this view point it would look nice.
the mouth looks good, but maybe put a more fresh color on the lips. they look flat and dead beacuse of the falt dark color. the eyer are good. but put more eye liner on the eyes and longer lashes.
it would make her eyes pop better and look more female. the nose is fine. but its crooked. its tilted the wrong way. if you switch that it will look better.

There you go   im not good at this myself. its hard to do, and draw correctly. its much easyer to find error by looking and to draw it yourself.

you did a very good drawing. these things that i wrote down now is to make it perfect in my eyes.  anyway. you dont have to fix these things. but if you do. and put it up to comparisson you will se the difference and
if you learned from it. its something i think you should doo.

have a good one!

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365degrees In reply to Stoys [2015-03-29 18:23:15 +0000 UTC]

Thanks

I'll have to make some adjustments to compare what you are saying to what I've done originally.

Thanks for the really in depth reply.
I always think it's more important to find the improvements possible and honestly the things you noticed (except the nose...) wouldn't have crossed my mind.

Cheers

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Stoys In reply to 365degrees [2015-03-30 19:42:35 +0000 UTC]

your welcome sometimes one can be blinded by his on work. so it hard to find the "faults"

I myself am learning anatomi the hard way (by my self) with only the web as help. so critiques is good to have.


Happy painting.  Cheers

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