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369dreamergirl — velvet sheets of night
Published: 2009-07-30 17:24:24 +0000 UTC; Views: 143; Favourites: 4; Downloads: 3
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everytime i see your sparkling eyes as if they were each a sheet of night, soft as velvet, and filled with stars, i know i can never stop wanting you. and every time you pass by and your hand brushes mine, i know you will always be like the echo of siren song, lost to the searching sailor in the crashing rhythm of the moon-iced waves.Related content
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wow, once again its really good! and i can relate to it too... lol
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hi! its great! but this part (everytime i see your sparkling as if they were each a sheet of night) is it everytime i see your sparkling or everytime i see ur sparkling ____?
i was confused
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lol it was supposed to be your sparkling eyes but i totally missed the eyes part
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o lol i thought so
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honestly, it's very beautifully written. and i like the shortness. sometimes you only need just a few words to make an impact, and this definitely did.
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thank you for saying so. it means a lot to me to be coming from a great writer like you.
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no problem at all, thank you so much from a watch, it means a lot from a great writer like you too
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