fLOWsd [2006-09-02 15:54:04 +0000 UTC]
yo buddy--excellent shot, superb model!
model, expression, look & smile, pose. the pic makes me feel good! choice of B&W, vertical framing, use of aperture & DOF, great bokeh. like the piercing and idea of the tree.
why such a long focal length? I mean no big deal as the pic still works pretty well but you were not shy shooting your own lady, huh? come closer doode! overal issue is the lack of sharpness--what glass did you use? to be picky I'd say that the contrast is a lil'weak and I wonder whether you simply grayscaled or whether you use the layers method to grayscale? last, I think that while the framing is good, the composition is a bit weak: I would have cropped a bit a the top (lots of empty space) and included her left elbow and the 'bottom' of her chest.
bottom line: this is a kick ass portrait, very natural, simple, elegant, fresh--I like it a lot
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3rd-eye In reply to fLOWsd [2006-09-05 00:52:53 +0000 UTC]
thanks a lot, i appreciate it!
at the time, this was my only decent lens. it's a cheap tamron telephoto from when i first got my camera. i've just started upgrading equipment and first grabbed a 50mm 1.8, so now i have a decent portrait lens. i'm still trying to figure out what i'm getting next. What do you suggest?
for this picture i did use grayscale.... i just recently read about using layers for B&W. So i'm going to experiment! I agree on the cropping too.
i'm sure soon i'll get to shoot more with a bit more knowledge and some better equipment! thanks for the critique!
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fLOWsd In reply to 3rd-eye [2006-09-05 01:05:27 +0000 UTC]
np, my pleasure! yep, the 50 mm f/1.8 is pretty good. got myself the f/1.4--it rocks too and I just love it
well, glass-wise... it's very personal and since your gallery is very heterogeneous, here are a few suggestions:
- portrait: your fifty + a 85 mm f/1.8,
- studio: 24-70 mm f/2.8,
- landscape: any 21-50 mm,
- photojournalism, street: 35 mm
- action: 70-300 mm f/2.8,
Considering brands, I would suggest you buy first party; however, they are plenty of cheaper alternatives and I would highly recommend the EX serie from Sigma: good built, good optical quality and buck saver Hope this helps! Note me if you have more specific questions
Yep, about the grayscale, I HIGHLY recommend you use the layer method--just burry and forget the 'grayscale' function of PS!
Don't worry about the knowledge and equipment, just try and be spontaneous!!!! Cheers mate.
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