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Description ProjectComment is a Group of many projects centred around comments, but, more importantly, constructive comments. Every week, one admin from ProjectComment will write an informative article on commenting that will hopefully be useful to you! Please help support us by the article and contribute your thoughts and opinions on the matter.

This article will list five easy ways to make your comment constructive. What many people do not realise is that a constructive comment does not have to be as long or as indepth as a critique, and that you don't need to be an awesome commenter or an awesome artist to write a constructive comment. You probably won't have to spend more than 5-10 minutes writing a constructive comment, and it could still be helpful to the artist.

Here are the steps that you can take to make your comment more constructive:

State the things you like about the piece.Try and state one thing you like about the piece, be it the concept, main subject matter(s), how the artist has approached things, theme, mood, atmosphere, feelings evoked, etc.

State the things you don't like about the piece.After stating the things you like about the piece, state the things you don't like about the piece. Try and keep the number of things you like and dislike equal, so that your comment is not skewed to one side that is overly positive or negative.

State why you like and dislike the things you mentioned.Stating the reason why you like or dislike something gives justification to your thoughts and opinions, and may help the artist see things from your perspective. You are also explaining further and offering more clarification, which isn't something you should shy away from. Elaborating on why you like or dislike something will mean that the artist will understand more where you are coming from. Once again, it is best to keep this as equal as you can between the likes and dislikes.

State suggestions to improve the piece and explain why.This would follow well after stating the things you don't like about the piece. Suggest ways to improve upon the things that you don't like about the piece. Like the above, explain why you think that the artist should heed your suggestion and use what you have suggested to improve the piece.

End the comment differently.This is not really a core thing to include in your comment to make it more constructive, but it doesn't hurt to end the comment differently. Don't just finish the comment after following the first four steps here, but think about doing something else. Perhaps you could write something more personal, state something that will encourage the artist, list resources that the artist would find helpful, or just leave a brief sentence about your overall thoughts and feelings about the piece. All in all, there are many ways to end a comment and some ways do make a comment more constructive.

Example of a Constructive CommentHere is an example of a comment made more constructive from following the steps above so that you can see it in action:

"Hello! (A greeting never hurts)

I really like the colours of this piece (stating what you like about the piece), especially the way the green contrasts with the red! The colours really go well together to create an interesting atmosphere (explaining why). However, the way you've included the sun dead on in the centre is a bit distracting for me (stating what you dislike and why). I feel it would be better if the sun was slightly more to the left or the right (suggestion), as it would be less distracting and the composition would improve as well (explaining why). Overall, I think it's clear that you've put effort, thought and time into this piece and I can't wait to see more of your work! (ending comment differently)

As you can see above, we have turned a one sentence comment, 'This is an interesting piece!', or even a one word comment like 'Cool!' into a constructive comment. It really isn't difficult to state one thing you like or dislike, explain why, and then state a suggestion for improvement and why. The best thing is that you are not limited by these steps. There is no reason why you can't list five things you like, or elaborate more on why you dislike something, or include resources into your comment to help the artist more. Relying on natural progression does not hurt sometimes!


In conclusion, we have briefly gone over the content of a constructive comment in this article. In the following articles, we will guide you on how to form and write your comment so that it is well received, among other things.

Keep watch of ProjectComment to find out more ways to help your commenting!

Thank you for reading,

3wyl , posting on behalf of ProjectComment
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3wyl In reply to ??? [2017-09-21 23:04:27 +0000 UTC]

Ah, with feeling out of depth commenting on certain kinds of work, I think it would be best to feel comfortable, and not out of depth, commenting on works you are familiar with. The more you can pinpoint what's wrong with something because you're commenting on what's familiar, the more you'll be able to do the same to unfamiliar works as you build your experience, knowledge, articulation skills, etc.

As you rightly said, it's difficult to know how to suggest improvement if you don't know what, in particular, needs improving.

Your suggestion makes sense to me! It would help (and it's only good marketing sense) to include links at the bottom of the journal leading to other articles.
 
Thank you!

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Planetrix In reply to 3wyl [2017-09-22 16:28:29 +0000 UTC]

Thank you so much for the advice   That was my major hangup with joining this group before (lack of drawing background).  But I guess I'll just dive in and find stuff in the group folders that I feel confident talking about, perhaps journals   Thanks again!

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3wyl In reply to Planetrix [2017-09-23 12:31:50 +0000 UTC]

Yes, definitely! You can be a supportive critic without being versed in a form of art - it all depends on how you approach it.

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Nyakumi [2017-04-14 21:48:06 +0000 UTC]

I really want to try this, but I'm stumped, some people say I was a very subjective one to comment whereas they also asked me for my opinion to their arts. How I should be able to be objective?

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3wyl In reply to Nyakumi [2017-04-15 13:59:15 +0000 UTC]

If you could post exactly what you've written here in this journal, the Project Manager and others will be able to help you there!

Ultimate Comment SupportAs the 'mother' of our Comment Support Group, this project aims to provide you individual feedback regarding your comments and commenting, with helpful resources and guides for ultimate comment support.
Feel free to explore by clicking the below links:
I have a quick question about commenting!
I am looking for resources and guides!
I would like individual and/or in-depth help from a comment mentor!

I have a quick question about commenting!
Ask your question about commenting by replying to this journal!
For example:
Should I mention an artwork's weaknesses if I don't really know what to suggest as an improvement?
What can I add more to make this comment as constructive as possible?
Is how I phrased this comment rude or not?
Feel free to link to specific comments if you wou

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Nyakumi In reply to 3wyl [2017-04-16 01:49:22 +0000 UTC]

Thank you very much ^_^

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Moonlit-Creator [2017-04-05 21:51:47 +0000 UTC]

I use this tutorial whenever I give a constructive comment, but there is a problem that I run into once in a while. Sometimes I see a piece of art where I cannot find anything wrong with it. What do I do then?

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3wyl In reply to Moonlit-Creator [2017-04-15 13:58:40 +0000 UTC]

If you cannot find anything wrong with a piece, that is fair enough. It is better to not be nit-picky, trying to find something wrong where there isn't anything wrong (in your eyes).

I would say that you could still offer alternatives for the artist to consider. Perhaps the artist doesn't have to improve, but they could consider different concepts, ideas, etc. that could make their work more interesting, or better... if that makes sense?

Otherwise, a person can still write a constructive comment using just praise: Comment Support Group #3 - Constructive PraiseIntro
My name is _______ and I am a commenter…
Well, of course you are! If you are reading this, more than likely you are a commenter, and what commenter doesn't have concerns, problems, issues or more with commenting?
That is why ProjectComment has formed a Comment Support Group to help people with commenting. To be utterly honest, we can't improve your commenting skills for you, but we can help you improve only if you want to improve.
Both commenting and improvement are individual processes. It's up to you to become a better commenter, but that doesn't mean you have to go it alone!
We are here to foster a group where commenters feel safe, where commenters feel they have the right to share their thoughts, feelings and more about commenting, where commenters have the right to open up, seek advice and get the support they deserve.
None of us are here to make fun or criticize. We are here to encourage commen Comment Support #3B - Constructive PraiseMany thanks to the below for joining our third session on
Praise: How to Use It Constructively?
:iconsquanpie: :iconSugarShortcake: :iconiamnohere: :iconBluePhoenix0702: :iconpawcanada: :iconTsisqua-Ugidali: :iconJosephcow: :iconDoodleKitten05: :iconMahAmmar: :iconado-mi: :iconVoiceInForestShadow: :iconRosietheEchidna:
What happened last week?
Keys: issues you may experience; solutions and tips to resolve them
Why use praise?
Sometimes, one may think there aren’t “praise-worthy” elements in a piece, so only flaws are mentioned.
Praise can be used to create balance in your comment, thus showing the artist that the piece isn't “all bad”, even if the artist still has a long way to go before becoming, artistica

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Moonlit-Creator In reply to 3wyl [2017-04-15 17:29:32 +0000 UTC]

Thank you for your response. I will follow that advice.

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3wyl In reply to Moonlit-Creator [2017-04-15 22:37:32 +0000 UTC]

Feel free to post here for further questions regarding commenting!

Ultimate Comment SupportAs the 'mother' of our Comment Support Group, this project aims to provide you individual feedback regarding your comments and commenting, with helpful resources and guides for ultimate comment support.
Feel free to explore by clicking the below links:
I have a quick question about commenting!
I am looking for resources and guides!
I would like individual and/or in-depth help from a comment mentor!

I have a quick question about commenting!
Ask your question about commenting by replying to this journal!
For example:
Should I mention an artwork's weaknesses if I don't really know what to suggest as an improvement?
What can I add more to make this comment as constructive as possible?
Is how I phrased this comment rude or not?
Feel free to link to specific comments if you wou

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ShatteredViridity [2016-10-05 03:57:31 +0000 UTC]

Do we constructively comment on deviant's works specifically in this group or outside the group too? I've read the ProjectComment Information page several times, but I'm a little stumped on how to start. This may actually be due to the fact that I'm exhausted and functioning at 11% capacity but I think it would help me understand a little better if I could be nudged into a specific place to start off.  Thanks for the help and the explanatory article. It is much easier to understand how to write the constructive comments now!

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3wyl In reply to ShatteredViridity [2016-10-05 11:13:08 +0000 UTC]

If you would like to submit to our gallery, please comment on pieces in our gallery, though all comments should be given on deviant's works within the group (i.e. members' art).

Not sure if you've seen this?

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ShatteredViridity In reply to 3wyl [2016-10-05 13:18:24 +0000 UTC]

Thanks! 

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Rahula87 [2016-08-10 13:47:46 +0000 UTC]

Thank you so much for this helpful article, one thing i strive for is constructive criticism and considering English is not my first language this is a even more interesting challenge for me. After a bad encounter with someone who acted rudely under one of my work i realised the importance to give criticism, feedback and critical thought. That experience was manna from heaven because i started informing about critiques and comments and today i was invited in this wonderful Group, thank you! I do not only want to improve as artist but also as commenter!

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3wyl In reply to Rahula87 [2016-08-10 23:54:52 +0000 UTC]

Your English is awesome! It sucks to hear that you had a bad encounter with someone who acted rudely, but you are not the only one. Almost everyone here has had some kind of bad experience. It's a learning experience for sure.

That sounds fantastic! We strive to encourage people to improve in both their art and commenting, but it's definitely an uphill battle for all of us, no matter what position we're in in the group.

I hope to see you around! Please let me know if there is anything I can do.

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Rahula87 In reply to 3wyl [2016-08-11 19:26:05 +0000 UTC]

Thank you. Don't worry i am thankful to that person because without that encounter i wouldn't start studying and exploring critique, constructive criticism, critical thought, feedback etc. and so i wouldn't meet this awesome Group.

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3wyl In reply to Rahula87 [2016-08-14 00:02:00 +0000 UTC]

That's very true! We can still learn and gain more experience, either way.

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Rahula87 In reply to 3wyl [2016-08-14 06:06:09 +0000 UTC]

You are right and i've found i love to critique and being critiqued! I love this Group, one of the most useful DA group i ever met. thank you so much because i started giving critiques and i feel vey good since i can help my little knowledge other artists.

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3wyl In reply to Rahula87 [2016-08-14 12:54:31 +0000 UTC]

I'm glad, and that's awesome!

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Rahula87 In reply to 3wyl [2016-08-14 13:01:37 +0000 UTC]

You are welcome

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FelisSimex [2016-07-20 13:19:01 +0000 UTC]

Thanks for posting this! I will definitely be following these steps from now on!

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3wyl In reply to FelisSimex [2016-07-21 00:01:07 +0000 UTC]

I hope it works! The article is a bit outdated.

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FelisSimex In reply to 3wyl [2016-07-21 06:53:10 +0000 UTC]

I'm sure it will! ^_^

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LonesomeBookworm [2016-06-09 19:51:54 +0000 UTC]

Thanks for being clear! It's good to know that I should write a simplified critique instead of a mini literature essay XD I adore this group an what it strives for, and I hope I can contribute sufficiently with my comments

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RainbowRenders In reply to LonesomeBookworm [2016-06-13 10:07:27 +0000 UTC]

That would be interesting indeed!

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3wyl In reply to LonesomeBookworm [2016-06-09 22:47:59 +0000 UTC]

We don't expect everyone to write a mini-literature essay, but we do expect the simplified critique to still be constructive.

Thank you so much for your support!

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LonesomeBookworm In reply to 3wyl [2016-06-10 20:15:09 +0000 UTC]

You're welcome!

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Arab-MC [2016-04-23 12:41:26 +0000 UTC]

This really helped me
Thank you so much!

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3wyl In reply to Arab-MC [2016-04-23 13:15:08 +0000 UTC]

I am glad! Let me know if there is anything!

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then-suddenlyyy [2016-04-11 07:27:26 +0000 UTC]

good! thank you for this amazing journal! im a noob at giving constructive criticism so this is the great help i needed!

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3wyl In reply to then-suddenlyyy [2016-04-11 12:00:34 +0000 UTC]

You are welcome! I am glad that this has helped! We post workshops once every two weeks, and we also have a bunch of other articles that may help as well! Just let me know if you need assistance with anything.

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then-suddenlyyy In reply to 3wyl [2016-04-12 08:25:03 +0000 UTC]

ok!

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SanityIsNotKey [2015-09-05 14:43:23 +0000 UTC]

This feels like English class all over again, Im not used to giving constructive commments...

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FallenSoulOfSaddness In reply to SanityIsNotKey [2015-09-12 12:58:32 +0000 UTC]

I feel the same way........

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SanityIsNotKey In reply to FallenSoulOfSaddness [2015-09-12 13:02:24 +0000 UTC]

Yeah..it feels weird having to type a long paragraph for a commetn..what is this a critique or a comment?

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FallenSoulOfSaddness In reply to SanityIsNotKey [2015-09-12 13:58:14 +0000 UTC]

I guess it could be called a critique comment.

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SanityIsNotKey In reply to FallenSoulOfSaddness [2015-09-12 15:10:17 +0000 UTC]

Yeah..

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FallenSoulOfSaddness In reply to SanityIsNotKey [2015-09-12 15:57:00 +0000 UTC]

😉

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3wyl In reply to SanityIsNotKey [2015-09-05 14:48:40 +0000 UTC]

English class was necessary for a reason.

Basically, if you can write a few things you like and why you like them, a few things you don't like and why you dislike them, a few things that the artist can improve on and how to improve them, that will be great.

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SanityIsNotKey In reply to 3wyl [2015-09-05 15:15:18 +0000 UTC]

it'll endup like an essay then...

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3wyl In reply to SanityIsNotKey [2015-09-05 16:56:48 +0000 UTC]

That is a bit of an exaggeration, no?

It should be a full-length paragraph. That's all.

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SanityIsNotKey In reply to 3wyl [2015-09-05 17:04:43 +0000 UTC]

still so long for a comment

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3wyl In reply to SanityIsNotKey [2015-09-05 17:52:40 +0000 UTC]

It is what makes a comment constructive.

You will get two in return for the two you give to others, of the same length.

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SanityIsNotKey In reply to 3wyl [2015-09-05 18:28:55 +0000 UTC]

ohhhI dont get comments often(if at all) so that would be great

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3wyl In reply to SanityIsNotKey [2015-09-06 12:03:34 +0000 UTC]

Indeed! If you want to receive such, you must give such in return! This way, the motion continues in other people.

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SanityIsNotKey In reply to 3wyl [2015-09-06 12:06:48 +0000 UTC]

Well can I still give a comment for my piece?(you still have it on hold)

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3wyl In reply to SanityIsNotKey [2015-09-06 12:10:19 +0000 UTC]

Sure! If you write a constructive comment, we can approve your piece in.

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SanityIsNotKey In reply to 3wyl [2015-09-06 12:53:43 +0000 UTC]

Heres my comment. Its longer this time..

Attuned - Chapter 2 RewriteChapter Two
     
Seeing Michael
     
       As Michael and I sat down at Mr. and Mrs. Grattan's Tea shop, as secluded as we could be, I became an onlooker to the other patrons, although I felt like some of them were watching me. It made me feel uneasy. I had to look away when the tea arrived, and focusing on my tea made me feel oddly better.
    “So how long will you be staying?” I probed. If he wanted me to start being part of his life again, he would need to give me a good reason, I figured. But for now I decided to watch what I did or said. I didn't know if he was back permanently, or just visiting and ready to tear down the wall I had built over my heart to protect against him, only to break me again.
    For better or worse; I wasn't sure if this was a good idea

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3wyl In reply to SanityIsNotKey [2015-09-12 13:38:54 +0000 UTC]

If you could link me to a piece you want to submit, that'd be great!

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SanityIsNotKey In reply to 3wyl [2015-09-12 13:40:43 +0000 UTC]

This oonnee
Depressed!Hungary x Prussia, Chapter 5

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