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Published: 2012-03-08 23:53:11 +0000 UTC; Views: 1988; Favourites: 22; Downloads: 37
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Here's the final look for my joint advertisement withThe image is 1:1 scale to what it will be like in printed form. There's also a small 1/8" bleed around the outside.
LAST MINUTE FEEDBACK WOULD BE V'RY NICE. <3
I'm mainly looking for your thoughts on the overall layout + graphics (the actual artwork itself is more or less done) ^~;
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Oh last minute feedback D:
Umm, I like it actually, the layouts/art works well with each other, I like how her logo is up high and hers is down low because the way the characters are they are almost pointing at the opposite sides logo.
Having electricity/lightning in both images is really good idea too well done
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Whoa! You're right...! Good eye.
(I originally had mine on the right, but as a rule of thumb, you don't want characters "running off" a page, but rather guiding you back in.
[link] <--::excellent tutorial about compositions::
Haha lightning hasn't nearly played a big enough part in my story yet. 
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LOL THERE'S SO MUCH LIGHTNING 8D
I love the colors you two have!
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REAL LIGHTING.
Oh btw, I spent ALL of yesterday reworking the story . For the first time in a long while, I'm really proud of what I've actually written.
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This looks great. I'm a huge fan of both of these comics and I just love this ad. The juxtaposition is wonderful. Anyone who wouldn't want to read either of these comics after looking at this ad is crazy. There's lightning in both of them, they're both strongly related to steampunk, and each inspires wonder in it's own way. Great job.
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Well I may not be one of those critiqe who knows about.
But I believe you know how to make awsome storys and backgrand
then me and any other people. It rocks.
~Stay Classic~
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Haha yes. (I bet Robotnik had something to do with it) XD
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well it looks pretty cool but to be honest i like the robot girl and robot wearing a barrel a bit more. i think the art is more refined
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I see...!
Well this is a joint venture, so it's just a matter of getting our work out there together (and making sure our ad isn't confusing or anything).
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