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4gottendream — My own corner
Published: 2004-04-19 19:02:27 +0000 UTC; Views: 146; Favourites: 3; Downloads: 11
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Description My own corner  

Why is it when you feel down that people ask you” what’s wrong” and all you reply with is “ nothing” .
All you want to do is crawl into your own corner.
No matter what they do to cheer you up it never works,
its only you that can lift yourself up
If they buy you new clothes,
give you tons of money or even if they changed the world for you it would never work.
Its only you that can take away the pain
its only you that can lift yourself up .
Its only you.
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Comments: 8

SugaRandDeatH [2005-06-24 20:01:23 +0000 UTC]

I love this...It's so true...

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4gottendream In reply to SugaRandDeatH [2005-06-26 10:47:10 +0000 UTC]

thank you

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Bexie [2005-03-09 20:56:25 +0000 UTC]

Why is it when you feel down that people ask you” what’s wrong” and all you reply with is “ nothing” .

so so true, even I do it, everyone does. And I suppose it is only you who can lift yourself up but maybe not, maybe someone who has put you down there is the only one who can pick you up.

But anyway, I like it

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4gottendream In reply to Bexie [2005-03-10 21:44:12 +0000 UTC]

thank you

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fifty7 [2004-04-20 10:33:38 +0000 UTC]

It's great.

The structure and word choice could be altered slightly, but the meaning is defiantely there, and I can sooo relate to it.

thank you

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Integrated In reply to fifty7 [2004-05-16 14:46:52 +0000 UTC]

Same here .. that's a brilliant poem, I'm very impressed. You should write more, that's amazing!

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Sorrows-Dreamer [2004-04-19 19:22:35 +0000 UTC]

thts gd, its very true

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4gottendream In reply to Sorrows-Dreamer [2004-04-22 18:24:42 +0000 UTC]

thanks a bunch

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