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NamelessShe [2013-07-11 06:59:15 +0000 UTC]
This is a fun piece. I love this--->Last night some puddles of acid rain formed on the weary ground, starting to hissingly create their own miniature riverbeds and quite quickly eat through any sole or foot that dares to touch these unholy waters.
But I think this section was brilliant--->“I doubt you want to probe an old man. Not very sexy flesh on these hips.” I gently clap my butt and turn around grinning, to see Bob and Bert in all their green-skinned and black-eyed questionable beauty, laughing their non-existent asses off.
“You dirty alien slugs. Should’ve sent you to Area 51 when I was able to. Wanna get somethin’ to drink now or do you want to continue passing your time scaring an old man to death?”
I scratch my beard as they both put their arms on my shoulders and we walk to one of the cheapest bars in the entire macropolis to get wicked drunk.
Later that night we shall find out that neither of us brought any money, resulting in a little shoot-out. Grinning and laughing we will jump out of the window and flee, remembering a similar scene from our childhood.
It’s great to have friends like these in a world this broken.
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Mew99x In reply to KiriHearts [2013-07-11 15:44:31 +0000 UTC]
Well, I asked for corrections, so I thank you for them. :3
I am studying English at university, and whereas I am quite confident in my skills, there is still a lot to learn for me.
Again, thank you for your comments!
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