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PhantomphoeniX360 — I won't lose you...
Published: 2015-08-11 08:58:16 +0000 UTC; Views: 286; Favourites: 5; Downloads: 0
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Description You're slipping,
I can see it,
Your eyes,
Just haze over.
I hear you cry,
Every night,
I see you die,
A little everyday.

I'm scared,
I'll lose you,
That one day,
You'll be gone.

And so hear me,
When I say,
That if ever,
You feel like you're falling,
I'll catch you,

If ever,
You feel like a clay sculptor,
Losing it's form,
Know that my hands,
Will restore you.

If ever,
You feel like glass,
Shattered across the floor,
Know that I'll endure a thousand cuts,
To put you back together.

Because not even death,
Could be scarier,
Than a future,
Without you.
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Comments: 3

Shaper-Nesyo [2015-08-21 00:12:49 +0000 UTC]

I really like this poem. It keeps me interested, while showing me somewhat of a story. Although, not sure if this is a mistake but you said 'sculptor' instead of 'sculpture' just a minor thing. Anyways, this is good, I like the pacing and it flows well.

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PhantomphoeniX360 In reply to Shaper-Nesyo [2015-08-21 07:55:57 +0000 UTC]

mmmmm, should go change that, cheers for the feedback though!

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Shaper-Nesyo In reply to PhantomphoeniX360 [2015-08-21 16:52:41 +0000 UTC]

No problem ^.^

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