Shaper-Nesyo [2015-08-21 00:12:49 +0000 UTC]
I really like this poem. It keeps me interested, while showing me somewhat of a story. Although, not sure if this is a mistake but you said 'sculptor' instead of 'sculpture' just a minor thing. Anyways, this is good, I like the pacing and it flows well.
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PhantomphoeniX360 In reply to Shaper-Nesyo [2015-08-21 07:55:57 +0000 UTC]
mmmmm, should go change that, cheers for the feedback though!
Shaper-Nesyo In reply to PhantomphoeniX360 [2015-08-21 16:52:41 +0000 UTC]
No problem ^.^
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