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HighStreet [2011-05-04 19:58:15 +0000 UTC]

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Photograph Critique by Petey XP Polaroid Still Photography

Vision:3
The abstract nature of the shot will lead people to think about literature, movies, dinner time, family this sort of thing. I find this
to be a temptation or a provocative inspiration to listen for the dinner bell.

Originality:4
Was tempted to give a three for this but I saw an unusual image in the bell and its frame which brought more to the picture and of course the soft nature of the sunset and the three a cumulus clouds to the left of the chain which starts the
ringing possibly which might be the temptation to ring the bell.

Technique:3
I love the Polaroid thing however I personally would have preferred to see some sort of angle in the photograph not the
pristine I around parallel delivery of the photo. For example I would've looked for some sort shooting towards the bell at 9 o'clock or from 6 o'clock. One other thought possibly shooting from a ladder at a distance.

Impact:3.0
Don't mean to be rude. Great Idea just seemed like it needed a little more work to me.

Vision 3
Originality 4
Technique 3
Impact 3


P.S. I'm not a professional critique person although I'm comfortable with photography. I have completed some semi professional still figurines, portraits, landscapes, and some conceptual art with a special technique of my own design.

I love the shot of the girl on the hill silhouette.

Petey Xp

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VerySmallIndeed [2009-07-02 16:41:41 +0000 UTC]

Oh so very nice. The composition is lovely.

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