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Published: 2004-06-28 01:01:12 +0000 UTC; Views: 16129; Favourites: 661; Downloads: 60
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I'm tired of being here,all locked up in my head.
Every day I hear a whisper,
and I'm closer to being dead.
Something taps me on the shoulder,
something I can't fight.
When it talks in that low voice,
my eyes are shut so tight.
Once it gets to a cetain point,
and I'm still sitting on the ground,
it tells me to do things,
I'm trying to ignore the sound.
Its voice is harsh and filled with confidence,
and I can hear a hint of sorrow.
Even when it's telling me,
I won't live to see tomorrow.
I don't know what to say,
and I don't know what to do.
I'm still hearing it now,
and I'm still suffering too.
I can't tell what its weakness is,
but I know I hear some lust.
I just have to get through this,
and have no one to trust.
06/27/2004
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This describes exactly what my dearest friend went through and she lost her battle with it a few weeks ago.
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This perfectly describes so many things I'm going through
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This is me. My past life haunts me and that's why I have depression.
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I am right there with you on that, I am sorry to hear
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You shouldn't give up even though you have those days sometime I get them too but you should be greatful and just have fun and enjoy life to the max!ππππ
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This is very well done and explains how I'm feeling right now. Love it. <3
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I really do like this. And I can definitely relate to it
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very good. better than things i have written while i was depressed
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100% rigtigt det du skriver, depression er ikke kun sorg, men tomhed, jeg fΓΈler det nu, og det er ikke rart, man fΓΈler at alt er sort, og man tror aldrig man kan finde lyset igen, man fΓΈler hvad er meningen med livet, alle andre siger det skal nok gΓ₯ op med humΓΈret, men det er ikke sΓ₯ ledt som det ser ud til. sΓ₯ tro mig jeg forstΓ₯r dig
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I feel this pain everyday.. Well done. Thanks for sharing it. It helps knowing others feel the way u do
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Love it 
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I like this. It's very true, except I have Bipolar depression so when I get up there so happy and free, I crash so hard I sometimes want to die. But one thing I have to fall back on is my art.
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"I'm tired of being here,
all locked up in my head.
Every day I hear a whisper,
and I'm closer to being dead."
can totally relate
about this mental state.
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That's the best thing I've heard in a long time. And speaking of things, I have something of my own to share with you...
MY OWN PERSONAL HELL
Well, here I am again. In my own mind, I think I am a God. Well, it turns out that I am nothing, just like all of us. We are just a cluelessly thriving folk living in a dream. The dream, of course, is our own personal Hell, let alone mine. I'm tired of having to live in this solitary state of mind that is also my endless collage of personalities and aliases. I'm pretty much sick of living in a dream. I'm going to be a man in less than six months, but like the millions of others that deal with the problems I have, including my dead Cousin Toby, who I never got to see because he was 'mentally retarded,' I'm nowhere fucking near ready. And, just like those same few million people out there, my mentality is... well, I have none. Because I'm a retard? Anyway, the fact is, just because people like me are mentally challenged doesn't mean that others can treat them like shit. In laymans terms, I'm better off dying peacefully with no one there to see me drifting into the unknown. And it's no secret: yes, I think about suicide; yes, I think I'm just another brick in the wall; yes, I know I have an infinite supply of issues; yes, I have way too much on my mind, but most urgently of all; yes, I'm human. But you know what? I will never let that get to me. You know why? Because humans make mistakes. Some of those mistakes are bigger than others, right? That doesn't mean it's fricking armaggeddon! We all can forget we ever made those mistakes in an attempt to prevent ourselves from making those same errors again. I just hope for my own sake that I can forget about the MILLIONS of mistakes I've made and actually move on.
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you are welcome. it brought chills .
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i dont know where the picture went... but the poem is awesome! it has a perfect rythm and i love i love how it actually rhymes and makes sense! love it!!
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Why thank you so much!! I appreciate your kind words and that you love it 
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lol welcome, i would have loved to see teh picture but the writing was amazing
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"all locked up in my head" I used to feel like that... But not anymore
I have to say... very good poem
Trivial P.S: O: my birthdate (just month and day 
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Thank you so very, very much!! And did you mean that we have the same birthday? Month and day?
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You're welcome
And no, we don't have the same
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Ahhh, gotcha, lol, sorry for confusing that
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Wow. This is so totally the story of my life. I...I can't even explain. It's just awesome.
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I'm glad you liked it
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Great poem, I really can relate. You explained things perfectly. x
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Thank you very much
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You're welcome, I came across this and just felt exactly what this was saying. Depression sucks majorly.
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This is an amazing poem that just speaks the mind in ways that cannot be answered. Feelings are felt without being known what they are. It's really good.
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Thank you so much for your comment. The poem seems to be the better out of all I have done, but that's not a bad thing! But, I appreciate you taking the time out to comment on it and read it all.
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Thank you very much.
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