HorribleWriter [2019-11-10 19:59:07 +0000 UTC]
Yay! Finally! The story is complete! I've been super curious about her and I have to say, the backstory really didn't disappoint. Now it's finally all making sense. Even the whole soul eater form or why she's called that way in the first place.I have to say though, her story is VERY sad. I feel bad for her, since she pretty much got put on the side track by everyone and then lost all she had. No wonder she looked so grumpy in LOAV.But it's great that the designs all got their explaination. It sort of feels like her story kind of wrapped up, while still leaving questions unanswered. Like what happened to Tirno, or if she's ever going to find her true talent. That's some potential for future stories.
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AafterglowEeye In reply to HorribleWriter [2019-11-10 22:02:01 +0000 UTC]
Hehe, yeah, that's why Legacy of a Villain (or whatever I decide to rename it - because honestly that might happen ) exists. I want to explore little bit of Tirno in it and of course Gloomy has a big part - and continuing Noira's predicament she's gonna be pushed to the side as in her main story I spent some time re-reading the text again, and boy I should not write draft stories at night so many words got repeated in the same sentences and so many typos just lay there mocking me I need to fix it as soon as possible
HorribleWriter In reply to AafterglowEeye [2019-11-13 09:08:34 +0000 UTC]
Heh, well, I can't wait for that too. Feels a bit bad that Noira will get pushed away again though. But at least she's got her own story. Yeah, writing late at night is... not so good but I'd didn't notice many things that would be wrong with it either.
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