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EDIT: Changed some dialogue to match the plot modifications due to Dragon Age 2

Page ten, YAY! I wanted to draw...

My friend and editor Dina commented: In the last panel Ewan is going to get a smack on that shit eating face of his...

Anyway, Jowan sad story continues... now, if someone would say something like that ("I've become a criminal because you were more gorgeous than I was") how do you feel? Me, I'd puch him on the nose, Ewan feels guilty for having make his friend feel inadequate...

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This is a fan comic based on the Bioware's videogame "Dragon Age: Origins" and expansions. All characters and characters design except those not fitting the game belongs to Bioware, Ewan is designed on a customizable Player Character so he doesn't belong to anyone but as concept to me, the story is mine so it's not official, no copyright infringement is intended so don't bother me about it.
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Comments: 58

hueynomure [2012-08-23 11:24:00 +0000 UTC]

I just noticed (reading it again because fuck yeah) that Jowan describes learning of magic with the names of two difficulties of DA, lol

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Abadir In reply to hueynomure [2012-08-23 12:06:56 +0000 UTC]

due che?

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hueynomure In reply to Abadir [2012-08-23 12:10:55 +0000 UTC]

non so se Γ¨ volontario, ma Jowan dice che imparare la magia per Ewan era Facile (Easy), per lui era un Incubo (Nightmare), ovvero le due difficoltΓ  opposte su cui puoi settare DA.

[Poi c'Γ¨ Nightmare Mage Awakening, che Γ¨ un gradino piΓΉ sotto di Facile]

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Abadir In reply to hueynomure [2012-08-23 12:14:55 +0000 UTC]

PFF non ci avevo mai fatto caso

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hueynomure In reply to Abadir [2012-08-23 12:16:44 +0000 UTC]

Rileggendo IPV ho già trovato un paio di citazioni apparentemente puntuali, ma così... "backhanded" che non riuscivo a capire se fossero volontarie o meno, ora so la verità xD

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Abadir In reply to hueynomure [2012-08-23 12:40:02 +0000 UTC]

Alcune lo sono, ma questa proprio no...

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hueynomure In reply to Abadir [2012-08-23 12:41:55 +0000 UTC]

E' che le citazioni sottili mi piacciono così tanto che non posso fare a meno di vederle anche quando non c'entrano una mazza o sono involontarie... xD

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THUNDRkitty [2011-08-04 07:02:56 +0000 UTC]

That last panel makes my day

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mialove01 [2011-06-28 16:56:35 +0000 UTC]

''Smille! my deputy is an abomination!''

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bairdduvessa [2011-05-30 04:53:24 +0000 UTC]

okay this seriously has me laughing

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Rowlina [2011-05-27 16:44:02 +0000 UTC]

Love the change xDd
"Hey, my deputy is an abomination!" XD

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Abadir In reply to Rowlina [2011-05-27 17:46:34 +0000 UTC]

It was due.

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vampirisa [2011-05-27 16:10:45 +0000 UTC]

LOL! My deputy is an abomination!
AHAHHAHA!!! Ok, con questa mi hai ucciso...

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Abadir In reply to vampirisa [2011-05-27 16:39:51 +0000 UTC]

Be'... lo Γ¨...
Anche Wynne lo sarebbe, in teoria, peccato che tutti se lo dimentichino

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vampirisa In reply to Abadir [2011-05-27 21:58:57 +0000 UTC]

Lo so, ma la combo battuta piu' faccetta mi ha ucciso...

Sai che mi pare di aver letto qualcosa a riguardo? Tecnicamente Wynne non lo e' perche' lei non si e' fusa con lo spirito e il loro rapporto e' sempre stato "attraverso il velo"... pero' non chiedermi DOVE l'ho letto perche' non me lo ricordo proprio!

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Abadir In reply to vampirisa [2011-05-27 22:13:22 +0000 UTC]

...
Mi hai evocato un'immagine bruttissima che mentre scrivevo si Γ¨ trasformata in una anche peggiore...

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vampirisa In reply to Abadir [2011-05-27 22:36:14 +0000 UTC]

... sono tentata di chiederti COSA tu abbia immaginato, ma trattandosi di Wynne non sono sicura di volerlo sapere...

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Abadir In reply to vampirisa [2011-05-27 22:36:43 +0000 UTC]

fidati... meglio di no...
brrrrrrrrrr...

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vampirisa In reply to Abadir [2011-05-27 23:33:19 +0000 UTC]

Oooook...
Maledetto, io sono piu' curiosa della mia gatta...

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ErasedCitizen2 [2011-05-27 13:07:17 +0000 UTC]

I really don't mind re-watching this page

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Abadir In reply to ErasedCitizen2 [2011-05-27 14:13:22 +0000 UTC]

No surprises here

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ErasedCitizen2 In reply to Abadir [2011-05-27 22:12:58 +0000 UTC]

You should make more Ewan-wood-chopping-scenes.

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Abadir In reply to ErasedCitizen2 [2011-05-27 22:14:45 +0000 UTC]

Don't worry, in a couple of pages he'll be so mad from what he'll learn from Eloise that he will strip naked and run through the Brecilian Forest in his birthday suit...

P.S.: Not true

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ErasedCitizen2 In reply to Abadir [2011-05-27 22:21:04 +0000 UTC]

Aww... That last P.S. broke my heart

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Abadir In reply to ErasedCitizen2 [2011-05-27 22:35:14 +0000 UTC]

Uhm... I think the time to feed the fangirlspawns again comes nearer...

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ErasedCitizen2 In reply to Abadir [2011-05-27 22:44:23 +0000 UTC]

YES! Feed meeeee!!!

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Abadir In reply to ErasedCitizen2 [2011-05-27 22:56:25 +0000 UTC]

...you scared me.

No food for you.

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ErasedCitizen2 In reply to Abadir [2011-05-27 23:36:50 +0000 UTC]

Breaking my heart twice in one night?

You know I'm only creepy because I'm hungry... Starving me will only make it worse.

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Abadir In reply to ErasedCitizen2 [2011-05-28 08:46:26 +0000 UTC]

Ok, ok, I'll see what can I do...

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ErasedCitizen2 In reply to Abadir [2011-05-28 10:50:38 +0000 UTC]

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emedeme [2011-05-27 09:35:10 +0000 UTC]

LOLOLOL I'm spending the morning reading IPV right from the beginning and now you update the pages when I'm about to reach them. XD

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Abadir In reply to emedeme [2011-05-27 09:43:30 +0000 UTC]

le LOL

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emedeme In reply to Abadir [2011-05-27 09:44:25 +0000 UTC]

my thought exactly XD

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queen-of-Thedas [2011-05-26 14:43:22 +0000 UTC]

I love JowanΒ΄s face in last panel.
Best line ever

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Zevran1 [2011-02-13 22:53:01 +0000 UTC]

-lol`ed at the last panel- xD

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Zevran1 [2011-02-13 22:53:00 +0000 UTC]

-lol`ed at the last panel- xD

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victricia [2011-02-03 01:11:29 +0000 UTC]

The deputy comment made me giggle so bad

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Abadir In reply to victricia [2011-02-03 08:58:55 +0000 UTC]

eheheh

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emedeme [2011-01-07 17:35:56 +0000 UTC]

"Heeey! My deputy is an apostate!!!"

BEST.LINE.EVER XDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDD

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Abadir In reply to emedeme [2011-01-07 17:45:32 +0000 UTC]

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bukittyan [2011-01-07 12:59:05 +0000 UTC]

Yea! And I love how Ewan's trying to make Jowan feel better about himself. Especially in that last panel. Jowan probably deserves a slap for turning criminal, but I think I'd feel guilty too. Especially if I never really knew how they felt, which it appears Ewan didn't. Plus, Jowan would have been afraid of being Tranquil, and that sounds really scary too.

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Abadir In reply to bukittyan [2011-01-07 13:19:47 +0000 UTC]

I always found Jowan one of the most intriguing figures in the story: he's basically good, but he ends up doing "terrible" things (although the only serios crime I can see is poisoning arl Eamon). He is harmless, even Irving would have spared him for the blood magic thing... I think he trusted the wrong people instead of turning to his friends for help (or turning to the "wrong friends"... ) and being prone to panic and easily influenceable, he ended up in troubles. That's why when he choose to follow his own lead, he accomplished may goals, like becoming Dragon's Claw's beloved healer.

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bukittyan In reply to Abadir [2011-01-08 14:05:52 +0000 UTC]

Yeah, I think Jowan, like Isolde, tended to act with fear rather than bravery. And you see how that turns out sometimes.

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Abadir In reply to bukittyan [2011-01-08 15:00:26 +0000 UTC]

Fear is as powerful motivation as bravery, problem is when somebody acts out of fear 80% of the time he does the wrong thing...
I've never thought about that this way...

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bukittyan In reply to Abadir [2011-01-09 14:15:30 +0000 UTC]

Fear = desperation = taking the fastest/quickest/easiest way. Which isn't always the right way. Bravery and love I think tends to weigh consequences more and leaves for fewer regrets.

Deep discussions are good!

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SoniaCarreras [2011-01-07 10:43:56 +0000 UTC]

Oh, well, maybe Ewan has read into Jowan's intentions deeped than you then . Somehow Jowan never intended any harm and it seems Ewan knows it. Even if Jowan messed it up.

And if you continue with this rythm you'll definitely arrive to page 132? in a few months

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Abadir In reply to SoniaCarreras [2011-01-07 12:09:19 +0000 UTC]

Oh, I don't know... I have to wait to play DAII to check out some things I need for chapter 4 and (mostly) 6 but I definetly want to finish the comic before september, when Skyrim will be out... ANOTHER TES GAME!! YAY!!!
(Honestly, I started playing DAO because I wasa tierd of re-replaying Morrowind and Oblivion )

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sophiegnr [2011-01-07 06:02:24 +0000 UTC]

Awl, how sweet! I always loved Jowan as a character even though he is wimpy. I agree with LupusYondergirl, you do draw a good Jowan. Glad to see Ewan is still shirtless!!!!!

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Abadir In reply to sophiegnr [2011-01-07 08:38:22 +0000 UTC]

it won't be polite dressing up during a conversation...

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Charlett [2011-01-07 02:09:30 +0000 UTC]

Now Now, Ewan, your deputy WAS an apostate! Grey Wardens aren't allowed to be called that <3

Also I wonder if Jowan did become a Spirit Healer. Does he get them later? He could just have learned some Creation spells and been done with the blood magic stuff. But then again, we don't know what happened after his leaving, and this IS your comic, so I think this is a good plot point to make~

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