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Published: 2012-04-16 22:53:47 +0000 UTC; Views: 3168; Favourites: 89; Downloads: 0
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Edit 2: Brought back the right eye.Edit:Added freckles and shortened picture frame. And other minor details.
Harsh critique wanted needed.RESOURCES
- Model: *Mihaela-VStock
- Frame: =DamselStock
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I thought that was really cool, but then the eye creeped me out something fierce.
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Wow... This is sooo creepy... I almost freaked out haha ^^
I really like the idea, it's sooooo spooky!
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Hello dear,
Your beautiful work is featured here : [link] 
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Awesome! 
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This sent chills down my spine and that means this picture is full of awesomesauce. I love it!
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Hey,
looks interesting. I love the Idea, it's cruel but very clear. The manipulation is well done . On the other side I feel there is still some space for improvement.
First the hair outside the Frame looks a bit to flat to me, especially at the bottom where there is also quite some repetition. Its just much of a dose to have a good impact. Maybe there could be part of the wall visible in the lower area? (A third of the image or so)
Also - and I see that this is part of your concept - the face looks too much like a doll to me. I believe freckles or birthmarks would Improve the horror/surprise effect.
And one last thing: Its kind of hard to see you have a mirror there, because the only hint is at the borders of the glass, a suptile reflection would make it much clearer.
So I hope it helps and this is what you wanted!
Twinelens
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Thank you so much for the feed back! I will be sure to re-visit this and look into some of its weaker spots (especially the frame since I completely agree with you that it's very flat). I especially like the idea of adding more detail to the face (Why didn't I think of that!). Thank you again!
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And I'm glad I could contribute. If you do rework it, would you mind dropping me a message?
Id be glad to see the development - sometimes this is even more interesting than the outcome
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So I attempted some of your suggestions! But only on a minor level since I think I will be completely scrapping this and rebuilding it from scratch sometime in the distant future.
Thanks again for the suggestions!
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hmm, It looks looks better. For me the birthmarks on top the nose are rather a little bit to much, though. But maybe I'm being picky here
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Wow, this is much, much better!
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Thank you again fro the feedback!
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Beautiful work, I love what you did with the hair. Really well done !
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