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Description
Another 'character' enters the scene.

Story Notes:

1. Panel #3 has Kristina holding still while the narrating Kristina is off-screen. After the first few lines of dialog Caramine and narrating Kristina should fade in. After a few more lines the stationary Kristina pockets the thing in her hand (front dress pocket) and then runs (jogging pace) off-screen in the direction narrating Kristina points.
2. The first panel also involves little motion. The transition to panel #2 occurs when motion restarts.
3. Panel #2 should be treated as a summary for a series of quick shots showing mundane activity. Kristina pulling the red faceted box out of her pocket and stretching it to full size, pulling things out of it, putting things in it. etc. By the time she's done she has a new dress on, her books have been in and out of the box, and the black block shrank as she pushed the red one at it until it fit inside too. Last thing she puts back in the red box is her books. It's not that important exactly what is shown except that she pulls her books out when trying to fit the black one inside the red one.
4. Cameras on the bottom of the page are using DOF as a slow fade to the next scene. This fade passes through Caramine's POV to what will be shown on the next page.

Full-sized bottom panel with no text.

Description
Another 'character' enters the scene.

Story Notes:

1. Panel #3 has Kristina holding still while the narrating Kristina is off-screen. After the first few lines of dialog Caramine and narrating Kristina should fade in. After a few more lines the stationary Kristina pockets the thing in her hand (front dress pocket) and then runs (jogging pace) off-screen in the direction narrating Kristina points.
2. The first panel also involves little motion. The transition to panel #2 occurs when motion restarts.
3. Panel #2 should be treated as a summary for a series of quick shots showing mundane activity. Kristina pulling the red faceted box out of her pocket and stretching it to full size, pulling things out of it, putting things in it. etc. By the time she's done she has a new dress on, her books have been in and out of the box, and the black block shrank as she pushed the red one at it until it fit inside too. Last thing she puts back in the red box is her books. It's not that important exactly what is shown except that she pulls her books out when trying to fit the black one inside the red one.
4. Cameras on the bottom of the page are using DOF as a slow fade to the next scene. This fade passes through Caramine's POV to what will be shown on the next page.

Full-sized bottom panel with no text.