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Published: 2004-12-31 04:00:53 +0000 UTC; Views: 69; Favourites: 0; Downloads: 0
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¿Estoy elegible para estar contigoO solo estoy soñando?
No quiero soñar, quiero realidad.
Nada es mas real que tus brazos
Y tú boca sonriente.
(¿Alguien más siente como yo?)
¿Sientes como yo?
No creo.
Así es, así va a estar
Hasta el mundo sé dispare.
Y una explosión gloriosa va a pasar.
Gracias que no voy a estar aquí.
(¿Y si no hay un cielo?)
Que no vamos a estar aquí; eso es más importante.
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Comments: 2
Pretty interesting. I believe I liked this one better than the first one (and I already liked that one a lot!).
Just a few corrections:
- When your desire is to use "tu" meaning possession, you don't need to put the graphic signal on top of it. "Tú" means only "you", not "your".
- "Sé" means "I know". I guess it wasn't what you wanted to say here. I believe it'd be "Hasta el mundo se dispare".
I hope this helps and that you don't think I'm nosy. 
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Thank you very much, I'll make sure I look at it.
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