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Published: 2011-01-11 21:03:26 +0000 UTC; Views: 311; Favourites: 8; Downloads: 7
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page 11, your end.Related content
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i LOVED it and i agree with ~PsychoNeko08 thats i would like to see some colored pics of the girl as well
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OH and i wanna see some colored pics of this girl!
sorry second comment
boooo i is weird
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the pencil was a little distracting but i wanna read more so i guess that means its good^^
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Very interesting story and cute character. If I may add a few critiques...
When you are inking the text beware of pencil lines (not on this page but on some of the others: ex-pg 3)
Every so often your gun proportions are off, but that will come with pratice on the comic
I also suggest you add next and previous page links into your comments so readers can go from page to page easily.
I look forward to reading more. Have fun!
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thanks for the thoughtful comment.
Its good to hear some constructive criticism
I was really in a hurry to get in in for the deadline, unfortunately time was a factor, and technology is a pain sometimes.
I'll make sure to fix that for the next manga I create.
And I'll probably do that link thing soon, it'll be helpful if deviant had some sort of manga scrolling device to make it easier.
Thanks a lot,
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