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Description I was afraid to commit sin, and so i did nothing. Yet not doing anything is a sinful act itself.

what monster have i become?


i haven't touched watercolor in over half a year...coz last time i used it it was horrible. >_< this time when i picked it up again i spent ages squeezing my tubes. T.T
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Comments: 41

kondouyumi-tan [2012-02-06 14:46:48 +0000 UTC]

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I'll give a critique, even though i'm not that good at it^^ First off, this is a really expressive piece that conveys alot of emotion to the viewer, and you managed to portray those emotions very well^^ You used watercolors for this, and it was done really wonderfully^^ It gives the piece a very beautiful, melancholy feel with the texture of the paint. The character itself is gorgeous, and proportioned very well. However, i feel as though the hand in the front is slightly off. The background is VERY expressive, helping the viewer to feel the whirlwind of emotions that went into the piece. The attetntion to detail and shading is wonderful. This is a gorgeous piece, great job! e.deviantart.net/emoticons/c/cā€¦ " width="20" height="20" alt="" title="Clap"/> Thanks for asking for a critique^^

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Mikaru5354 [2012-09-05 17:04:15 +0000 UTC]

Love your water color style! I can't seem to control watercolor that well... OTL

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AleciaMaria [2012-05-15 03:35:20 +0000 UTC]

Very good!!

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BadChibiArtist [2012-04-08 14:55:02 +0000 UTC]

This is beautiful!!! What are you talking about!!

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stream32 [2012-03-01 01:45:23 +0000 UTC]

This so awesome

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ImthenD [2012-02-19 14:00:16 +0000 UTC]

amazingly beautiful and expressive! her face is breathtaking =*o*=

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Schmetterlingsgirl [2012-02-11 19:45:49 +0000 UTC]

I like it *.*

But I think you 'hear' that every time ... (=

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trickortreat05 [2012-02-10 13:35:33 +0000 UTC]

this is AMAZING LOVE IT!

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BelleRedevance [2012-02-07 16:03:21 +0000 UTC]

that teddy bear scares me o-o
but the watercolor is nice >w<

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ChocoOcean [2012-02-07 03:37:46 +0000 UTC]

i the quote!

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ValereyArts [2012-02-07 03:35:11 +0000 UTC]

Great artwork and so expressive

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KillemallSilvana [2012-02-07 03:29:14 +0000 UTC]

Beautiful work, I am really digging your choice of color and imagery. You could have fooled as far as skill goes

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Sakura-chan5 [2012-02-07 03:07:46 +0000 UTC]

Wow, that is so beautiful! I really love what you did in this painting!!

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Mothhawk [2012-02-07 01:17:46 +0000 UTC]

I feel so sad now...

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nakamimi [2012-02-07 01:07:44 +0000 UTC]

Really nice job with watercolours, especially since you barely used them! <3333 I love the emotion in the piece, everything looks perfect and beautiful!

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nakamimi In reply to nakamimi [2012-02-07 01:08:18 +0000 UTC]

Hurrr I meant when you said "half a year"...I'm so bad at typing OTL;;;

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FOERVRAENGD [2012-02-06 20:51:35 +0000 UTC]

a little tip if you'd like some; start with the lightest colors/areas first, then gradually switch to darker/more saturated colors. it gives you more control and makes it a little bit easier to fix small mistakes and so on. My mom told me that :3333

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aiki-ame In reply to FOERVRAENGD [2012-02-06 21:11:05 +0000 UTC]

yeah that's what i did...but sometimes it's still hard to keep control of the darker colours. >_< thanks though!

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FOERVRAENGD In reply to aiki-ame [2012-02-06 22:24:32 +0000 UTC]

no prob! And watercolours do take some time to get good at, just keep up the good work! :3

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Jaqie [2012-02-06 19:24:54 +0000 UTC]

WOW, this is amazing!! Beautiful!! How long did it take? I guess quite long

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aiki-ame In reply to Jaqie [2012-02-06 19:55:45 +0000 UTC]

probably 5 hrs? lol

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Jaqie In reply to aiki-ame [2012-02-07 19:21:05 +0000 UTC]

Wow, really? Then you REALLY are very very talented!!

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KuraiSora05 [2012-02-06 19:14:18 +0000 UTC]

wooooooow~ i really like this, its so expressive, and its so unique! Fave-ing NOW!!!

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kondouyumi-tan [2012-02-06 14:39:52 +0000 UTC]

This is gorgeous! 0.0 I love it, great job!

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Mitche27 [2012-02-06 14:11:05 +0000 UTC]

how elegant~

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finex666 [2012-02-06 13:12:48 +0000 UTC]

wow, just amazing, you truly know how to move a person with your art ^_

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AkiDemi [2012-02-06 11:33:11 +0000 UTC]

this is so beautiful! the quote,the quote!

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ryuurenn [2012-02-06 11:22:47 +0000 UTC]

Nice watercolour work. It's good don't worry. c:

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Yui-cham12 [2012-02-06 11:11:16 +0000 UTC]

Just woooooow!!!!

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AliYaqooob [2012-02-06 10:14:45 +0000 UTC]

fabulous..

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jiji970 [2012-02-06 09:22:44 +0000 UTC]

very nice watercolour.

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LeToE [2012-02-06 08:54:11 +0000 UTC]

props (:

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Yenni-Vu [2012-02-06 08:18:58 +0000 UTC]

please use traditional media more often!^^

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melodienini [2012-02-06 08:02:32 +0000 UTC]

looks very nice. and sort of disturbing.

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wingsfy [2012-02-06 05:19:33 +0000 UTC]

looks so awesome!

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mitanchuu [2012-02-06 05:02:19 +0000 UTC]

ALL THOSE COLOURS AND THE TEXTURE OF WATER COLOURS.
THE DETAILS.
why are you so awesome?

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hotarumata [2012-02-06 04:33:39 +0000 UTC]

My god... it hurts...

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aleanakowa [2012-02-06 04:25:31 +0000 UTC]

omg how is this possible? your so great with watercolor!!!

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Jenny-Draw [2012-02-06 04:15:45 +0000 UTC]

gorgeous! the water color gave a nice texture to it

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666azarashi666 [2012-02-06 04:11:15 +0000 UTC]

Alway awesome<3

The color is so nice.

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KawakineAlice [2012-02-06 04:02:46 +0000 UTC]

I see Chinese characters..? It's really good art! <3

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