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aishwaryajain — Stringing on..
Published: 2005-10-28 14:17:32 +0000 UTC; Views: 153; Favourites: 1; Downloads: 2
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Description Stinging on, but the cords are brittle,
I string once more and they break by little,
My hands don't hurt but they are heinous,
Breaking the cords joined by us,
I throw away the guitar that played our own music,
I look back numb but with a heart that's sick,
I dive in now, in the pool of our love,
The pool we gathered drop by drop
But I dive too hard, only to hit the floor,
and break my head as those cords somewhere roar,
Now I try too hard to gather the drops,
Only to wet my hands with the liquid of our love,
And you spill some more liquid,
Shed another tear,
And I, thirsty, hungry,
All the while persevere,
Now I am in the forest,
in our very own forest,
Which you said boasts of our love-
wild, dense, but a test,
Hunger after the break axes down the berry, vine, herb,
like this I devour, all the trees, the shrub,
So now our forest is barren,
The forest of our love,
For I was too hungry,
And you did not assert..
Now that I have the energy, all the energy back,
The one given to me, by the wild-forest mishap,
I plan and start to climb,
The apex of our love,
The Everest we built up,
rock by stone by mud,
To dig up the sad cause,
Of our love show's pause,
I dig up this mountain,
rock by stone by mud,
And bring it down on a meek,
A timid figure like yours,
And find what but ashes,
Of the faith I once burnt...
It now lashes.
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Comments: 8

nomad0279 [2006-01-30 10:05:41 +0000 UTC]

it seemed someone is expressing my thoughts...wish I had written this...
Gr8 work !!!

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regeneratingzombies [2005-11-08 15:35:55 +0000 UTC]

Of the faith I once burnt...
It now lashes. ...powerfull lines

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aishwaryajain In reply to regeneratingzombies [2005-11-09 07:21:43 +0000 UTC]

yeah thank you

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Goses [2005-11-04 19:26:14 +0000 UTC]

This poem made my heart go faphump. It really hit home, great work.

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aishwaryajain In reply to Goses [2005-11-05 13:03:18 +0000 UTC]

thank ya

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Goses In reply to aishwaryajain [2005-11-05 17:24:14 +0000 UTC]

your welcome.

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rapidsnail [2005-10-29 18:14:38 +0000 UTC]

very sad one for that case dear , made me sniffle .....a bit ...a romantic heart always comes up with a masterpiece ..and this is nearet to one

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aishwaryajain In reply to rapidsnail [2005-10-31 11:32:10 +0000 UTC]

lolz.. though a typo got unnoticed.. the title.. stringing on..

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